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*'''Jerome-092''': "Alice is MIA. She'll stay silent down there until she has a good shot at getting back to us."
*'''Jerome-092''': "Alice is MIA. She'll stay silent down there until she has a good shot at getting back to us."


''Jerome arrived at the bridge and placing the data chip on the bridge's holotable.''
''Jerome arrives on the bridge and places a data chip on the bridge's holotable.''
*'''Jerome-092''': "Sir."
*'''Jerome-092''': "Sir."


''Isabel appears, sitting grounded on the holotable. Jerome introduce Captain Cutter to her.''
''Isabel's avatar appears, sitting on the holotable.''
*'''Jerome-092''': "Isabel, this is Captain Cutter."
*'''Jerome-092''': "Isabel, this is Captain Cutter."
*'''Isabel''': "I know who you are."
*'''Isabel''': "I know who you are. James Cutter. Captain of the Spirit of Fire. You're supposed to be lost with all hands."
*'''Cutter''': "Not so lost, it seems. What happened down there? I need to know what we're up against."


''She then start revealing about the official status of Spirit of Fire.''
''Isabel stays silent, refusing to answer.''
*'''Isabel''': "James Cutter. Captain of the Spirit of Fire. You're supposed to be lost with all hands."
*'''Cutter''': "Not so lost, it seems."
 
''Cutter then ask her to know what they are fighting against.''
*'''Cutter''': "What happened down there? I need to know what we're up against."
 
''Isabel stay silent, refuse to answer.''
*'''Cutter''': "Isabel."
*'''Cutter''': "Isabel."


''Still refusing to answer, Cutter then takes action.''
''another pause as Isabel stays silent.''
*'''Cutter''': "Isabel. Report."
*'''Cutter''': "Isabel. Report."


''Isabel disappears and reappears standing to report to him then she explain everything what happened.''
''Isabel disappears momentarily, and reappears standing.''
*'''Isabel''': "Sir. Five months ago the portal from the Ark to Earth shut down without warning. A month later, he arrived."
*'''Isabel''': "Sir. Five months ago the portal from the Ark to Earth shut down without warning. A month later, he arrived."
*'''Cutter''': "He?"
*'''Cutter''': "He?"


''The bridge fell silent as they listen to her.''
''The bridge falls silent as the crew listens to her.''
*'''Isabel''': "The Brute. Their leader. His name is Atriox."
*'''Isabel''': "The Brute. Their leader. His name is Atriox."


''Atriox's past then revealed through her Point of View where the glassing happens.''
''Atriox's past begins to be revealed through flashbacks''
*'''Isabel''': "During the war, the Covenant used his clans as expendable muscle. Told them dying in battle would "speed their holy journey"."
*'''Isabel''': "During the war, the Covenant used his clans as expendable muscle. Told them dying in battle would "speed their holy journey"."


''A silhouette appears and a sound of Gravity Hammer being dragged can be heard.''
''A silhouette appears and the sound of Gravity Hammer being dragged can be heard.''
*'''Isabel''': "Forty at a time they carelessly sent them in. Forty to break the front lines...forty to die for beliefs not their own..and none ever returned..until he did."
*'''Isabel''': "Forty at a time they carelessly sent them in. Forty to break the front lines... forty to die for beliefs not their own... and none ever returned. Until he did."


''The bridge remain silent as Isabel continue to tell her story as Atriox reaches one of the camp.''
''Atriox, alone, reaches a Covenant outpost.''
*'''Isabel''': "And so, battle by battle..war by war..thirty-nine brothers at a time.."
*'''Isabel''': "And so, battle by battle..war by war..thirty-nine brothers at a time..."


''His fellow Brutes start to stood up watching him while ahead there are three Sangheili awaits Atriox.''
''His fellow Brutes start to stand up, watching him. Ahead there are three Sangheili awaiting Atriox.''
*'''Isabel''': "..Atriox was born."
*'''Isabel''': "...Atriox was born."


''He then tosses the Gravity Hammer away from his hand.''
''Atriox tosses his Gravity Hammer away.''
*'''Isabel''': "With every victory his legend, and his hatred of the Covenant, grew."
*'''Isabel''': "With every victory his legend--and his hatred of the Covenant--grew."


''Atriox then kneel down in front of the Sangheilis.''
''Atriox kneels in front of the Sangheili.''
*'''Isabel''': "Eventually both were impossible to conceal."
*'''Isabel''': "Eventually both were impossible to conceal."


''Red Energy Sword ignited, preparing to execute him.''
''A Red Energy Sword ignites, preparing to execute him.''
*'''Isabel''': "And they tried to banish him."
*'''Isabel''': "And they tried to banish him."


''One of Sangheili is making his stance to execute Atriox.''
''One of Sangheili is poised to execute Atriox.''
*'''Isabel''': "In everything we know about the Covenant's thousand-year history.."
*'''Isabel''': "In everything we know about the Covenant's thousand-year history..."


''Atriox immediately hold the grip to defend himself from execution.''
''Atriox suddenly grabs the grip to defend himself from execution.''
*'''Isabel''': "..Atriox was the first to defy the Covenant.. and survive."
*'''Isabel''': "...Atriox was the first to defy the Covenant and survive."


''A Sangheili immediately slain and Atriox hold the helmet on his right hand and Red Energy Sword at his left hand. Soon, other Sangheili's drawn their sword in attempt to kill him.''
''A Sangheili is seen to be slain. Atriox holds the helmet in his right hand and the Red Energy Sword in his left hand. Other Sangheili draw their swords in an attempt to kill him.''
*'''Isabel''': "And his defiance inspired others."
*'''Isabel''': "And his defiance inspired others."


''The other brutes start fighting the Sangheilis, some are being mauled to death, punched and even broke the neck while Atriox remain stand still silently as his fellow Brutes are killing every one of the Sangheili in the camp.''
''The other brutes in the outpost start fighting the Sangheili, while Atriox remains standing still silently. His fellow Brutes are killing every one of the Sangheili in the outpost.''


''The scene moves to Atriox and his Brutes opens the vehicle bay that was full of Wraiths''.
''The scene changes to Atriox and his Brutes opening the vehicle bay, full of Wraiths''.
*'''Isabel''': "Atriox and his Banished raided Covenant resources, cutting a swatch across the galaxy.. growing in strength with each attack."
*'''Isabel''': "Atriox and his Banished raided Covenant resources, cutting a swath across the galaxy; growing in strength with each attack."


''The Sangheili Mercenary pledge their allegiances to Atriox and Enduring Conviction's fleet can be seen.''
''A group of Sangheili mercenaries pledge their allegiance to Atriox.'' Enduring Conviction'' 's fleet can be seen.''
*'''Isabel''': "Gathering killers and mercenaries to his side. The Covenant had two targets in those years. Humanity and Atriox. They almost got us. But Atriox? They never came close."
*'''Isabel''': "Gathering killers and mercenaries to his side. The Covenant had two targets in those years. Humanity and Atriox. They almost got us. But Atriox? They never came close."


''The Banished Army was seen with the hordes of varies units gathering at one location.''
''The Banished Army is seen, with the hordes of various vehicles, aircraft and infantry units gathering at one location.''
*'''Isabel''': "The whole damn Covenant couldn't contain him at the height of their power."
*'''Isabel''': "The whole damn Covenant couldn't contain him at the height of their power."


''The screen moves to the bridge where Isabel finish explaining who they are up against now.''
''The flashback ends. The scene is back to showing the bridge of the'' Spirit of Fire.
*'''Isabel''': "That's what you're up against. And all you've got is one old ship and half of crew to staff her. We need to run. As far and as fast as we can."
*'''Isabel''': "That's what you're up against. And all you've got is one old ship and half of crew to staff her. We need to run. As far and as fast as we can."


''After hearing it, Cutter start his speech.''
*'''Cutter''': "We are just one ship. And an old one at that. But here we are.. thirty years past what anyone could ask of us."
*'''Cutter''': "We are just one ship. And an old one at that. But here we are.. thirty years past what anyone could ask of us."


''One crew start to stand up.''
''One crew member starts to stand up.''
*'''Cutter''': "Our war is gone."
*'''Cutter''': "Our war is gone."


''All crew stood up, listening to his speech."
''All the crew stand, listening to his speech."
*'''Cutter''': "The lives we had are gone. The worlds we knew.. have moved on. And now all that we may have left, are those standing beside us.. and the DUTY that defines us battle after battle, fighting side by side."
*'''Cutter''': "The lives we had are gone. The worlds we knew.. have moved on. And now all that we may have left are those standing beside us... And the DUTY that defines us battle after battle, fighting side by side--"


''Cutter then looks at Isabel with his commanding gaze while the crew keep listening to him.''
''Cutter looks at Isabel with a commanding gaze''
*'''Cutter''': "Together. Where you see half of a crew, Isabel... I see family, courage. And a thousand heroes who swore to fight their way through hell before they'd ever...EVER turn their backs and run. And where you see one old ship. I see home. And that is always worth fighting for."
*'''Cutter''': "Together. Where you see half of a crew, Isabel... I see family, courage. And a thousand heroes who swore to fight their way through hell before they'd ever...EVER turn their backs and run. And where you see one old ship. I see home. And that is always worth fighting for."


''Cutter then smacks the table, red alert initiated as the status immediately raised into Battle Station Alpha.''
''Cutter smacks the table. The ship is brought up to Red Alert status.''
*'''Bridge Crew''': "Ooh-Rah!"
*'''Bridge Crew''': "Ooh-Rah!"


''The crew start working again and the sirene can be heard. Isabel looks around the bridge stunned to see the crew are fully prepared for the Battle Station.''
''The crew starts working again and a siren can be heard. Isabel looks around the bridge, stunned to see the crew is fully prepared for Battle.''


''Cutter then opens every inventory on the ship that was avaiable for the fight and the hologram shows Marines, Grizzly and Spartan appears.''
''Cutter then opens every inventory on the ship that was avaiable for the fight and the hologram shows Marines, Grizzly and Spartan appears.''