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The Carver Findings were a set of theories predicting the outbreak of the Insurrection written by Dr. Elias Carver and published in 2491. The findings were summarized thus: Template:Article Quote Though many were skeptical of these theories, they were taken under strong consideration by the Office of Naval Intelligence and the Admiralty, informing their strategies against the Insurrectionists for decades.^[1]

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-The '''Carver Findings''' were a set of theories predicting the outbreak of the [[Insurrection]], written by [[Elias Carver|Dr. Elias Carver]] that were published in [[2491]]. The findings were summarized in the following sentence:
+The '''Carver Findings''' were a set of theories predicting the outbreak of the [[Insurrection]] written by [[Elias Carver|Dr. Elias Carver]] and published in [[2491]]. The findings were summarized thus:
 {{Article Quote|Unless the political situation throughout the colonies is stabilized (preferably by force), the [[Unified Earth Government|Government]] will collapse and civil war will rip [[human]] society apart.}}
-Many were skeptical of these theories, but received purchase in [[Office of Naval Intelligence|ONI]] and the [[UNSC High Command|Admiralty]], informing their strategies against the [[Insurrectionist]]s for decades.<ref>'''[[Halo Encyclopedia]]''', ''page 44''</ref>
+Though many were skeptical of these theories, they were taken under strong consideration by the [[Office of Naval Intelligence]] and the [[UNSC High Command|Admiralty]], informing their strategies against the [[Insurrectionist]]s for decades.<ref>'''[[Halo Encyclopedia]]''', ''page 44''</ref>
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