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Isn't there a way to rewrite the "Spartan's armor" paragraph without stating things like "The most prominent inconsistency", "Halsey couldn't have known it", "The Visual Guide '''retcons''' the suits as Mark IV"...? I think it's pretty much established that these armors were simply a Mark IV variant from the get-go (In the same way Fred's helmet isn't a Mark V(B) but rather a Mark IV variant, and so on...). Same for the energy shields, which were field tested and thus aren't really an inconsistency (Field testing them throughout the war is still much more likely than having them coming from nowhere in 2551 for the Mark V). Of course I'm not implying that the explanations should be removed, I'm just suggesting that we rewrite some lines so they look more like "This can be explained by that" rather than "This is an inconsistency but it can still be explained by that". Casual fans may be confused by so-called "inconsistencies" while in fact those are inconsistencies only until you find out the explanation. The existence of boosters which are not part of subsequent armors is an interesting point though. [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 09:36, 24 July 2013 (EDT) | Isn't there a way to rewrite the "Spartan's armor" paragraph without stating things like "The most prominent inconsistency", "Halsey couldn't have known it", "The Visual Guide '''retcons''' the suits as Mark IV"...? I think it's pretty much established that these armors were simply a Mark IV variant from the get-go (In the same way Fred's helmet isn't a Mark V(B) but rather a Mark IV variant, and so on...). Same for the energy shields, which were field tested and thus aren't really an inconsistency (Field testing them throughout the war is still much more likely than having them coming from nowhere in 2551 for the Mark V). Of course I'm not implying that the explanations should be removed, I'm just suggesting that we rewrite some lines so they look more like "This can be explained by that" rather than "This is an inconsistency but it can still be explained by that". Casual fans may be confused by so-called "inconsistencies" while in fact those are inconsistencies only until you find out the explanation. The existence of boosters which are not part of subsequent armors is an interesting point though. [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 09:36, 24 July 2013 (EDT) | ||
:Okay, so I did it, hoping that doesn't bother anyone. First, I've changed "Anachronisms" into "Discrepancies", because after elucidating most of the inconsistencies, those that remained were not really anachronisms anymore; it's mostly about representations. Second, I've removed most of the part that stated that Halsey didn't like "her" armor being modified. This armor is just a variant of the original Mark IV, as much as the EVA, EOD or Commando variants are, and at this point I can assure you that Halsey has probably seen tons of them. Eventually, the fact she didn't like "field modifications" has little to do with such armors which are much more than that; it's simply a line of Mark IV, as stated in the visual guide. As for the boosters, I changed that a little bit: it seems clear that they were a feature of this Mark IV variant, yet most of the MJOLNIR armors have their own features. We could say that wearing an EVA armor would have been more useful to some Spartans during a space mission, but ultimately it's not that significant to mention. The boosters' absence in subsequent armors is an acceptable fact, after all every armors have a specificity | :Okay, so I did it, hoping that doesn't bother anyone. First, I've changed "Anachronisms" into "Discrepancies", because after elucidating most of the inconsistencies, those that remained were not really anachronisms anymore; it's mostly about representations. Second, I've removed most of the part that stated that Halsey didn't like "her" armor being modified. This armor is just a variant of the original Mark IV, as much as the EVA, EOD or Commando variants are, and at this point I can assure you that Halsey has probably seen tons of them. Eventually, the fact she didn't like "field modifications" has little to do with such armors which are much more than that; it's simply a line of Mark IV, as stated in the visual guide. As for the boosters, I changed that a little bit: it seems clear that they were a feature of this Mark IV variant, yet most of the MJOLNIR armors have their own features. We could say that wearing an EVA armor would have been more useful to some Spartans during a space mission, but ultimately it's not that significant to mention. The boosters' absence in subsequent armors is an acceptable fact, after all every armors have a specificity. [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 18:10, 26 July 2013 (EDT) | ||
The difference is that John's armor was indeed canonically a field modification, as evidenced by 343's explanation of nanomachines. The modified Mark VI in the flashbacks was originally not meant to be Mark IV, but just reusing the Mark VI just like how The Package initially had Mark VI's that turned out to be Mark IV. As for the boosters, they were on mainline armors, not EVA, which is a variant. Hence why I feel it's best to cover the whole issue, including how 343 eventually explained that it's a Mark IV model. And I think it's better to keep the explanations together rather than in different sections, as otherwise it starts to seem more like a section for speculation. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 20:00, 26 July 2013 (EDT) | The difference is that John's armor was indeed canonically a field modification, as evidenced by 343's explanation of nanomachines. The modified Mark VI in the flashbacks was originally not meant to be Mark IV, but just reusing the Mark VI just like how The Package initially had Mark VI's that turned out to be Mark IV. As for the boosters, they were on mainline armors, not EVA, which is a variant. Hence why I feel it's best to cover the whole issue, including how 343 eventually explained that it's a Mark IV model. And I think it's better to keep the explanations together rather than in different sections, as otherwise it starts to seem more like a section for speculation. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 20:00, 26 July 2013 (EDT) | ||