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| | Librarian's original dialogue explained things a lot better, and the cutscene overall would have been pretty nice. For a while I didn't ever notice Cortana's silhouette in the light because I ran in there. Also provides a nice explanation on why she took Cortana initially. |
| *Librarian's original dialogue explained things a lot better, and the cutscene overall would have been pretty nice. For a while I didn't ever notice Cortana's silhouette in the light because I ran in there. Also provides a nice explanation on why she took Cortana initially.--[[User:Crisperstorm|Crisperstorm]] ([[User talk:Crisperstorm|talk]]) 20:42, 17 September 2015 (EDT)
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| *Also, Lasky's comments about the exploding plants is great, and I like his general shock as compared to his "didn't expect to see you", because really? Everyone thought he was dead, it's not like this is a party and he may or may not have been going to it but he was there and it is a little surprise, this should have been a big surprise to them. Also the marines over here talking would have been nice. Instead of a bunch of generic Spartan IV's not saying a word.--[[User:Crisperstorm|Crisperstorm]] ([[User talk:Crisperstorm|talk]]) 20:42, 17 September 2015 (EDT)
| | Also, Lasky's comments about the exploding plants is great, and I like his general shock as compared to his "didn't expect to see you", because really? Everyone thought he was dead, it's not like this is a party and he may or may not have been going to it but he was there and it is a little surprise, this should have been a big surprise to them. Also the marines over here talking would have been nice. Instead of a bunch of generic Spartan IV's not saying a word. |