Editing Talk:Algolis Invasion

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::::Where does it mention it? [[User:AlertFiend|AlertFiend]] - Warning, my comments may appear passive aggressive. <small>([[User talk:AlertFiend|Converse]]) </small> 16:40, 19 October 2017 (EDT)
::::Where does it mention it? [[User:AlertFiend|AlertFiend]] - Warning, my comments may appear passive aggressive. <small>([[User talk:AlertFiend|Converse]]) </small> 16:40, 19 October 2017 (EDT)
:::::Page 2 in the intro. Mentioned in the objective, 6th line. --[[User:NightHammer|<span style="color: #2B1AAA;">'''NightHammer'''</span>]]''<sup>[[User talk:NightHammer|<span style="color: #2B1AAA;">(talk)</span>]]</sup><sup>[[Special:Contributions/NightHammer|<span style="color: #2B1AAA;">(contribs)</span>]]</sup>'' 18:48, 19 October 2017 (EDT)
:::::Page 2 in the intro. Mentioned in the objective, 6th line. --[[User:NightHammer|<span style="color: #2B1AAA;">'''NightHammer'''</span>]]''<sup>[[User talk:NightHammer|<span style="color: #2B1AAA;">(talk)</span>]]</sup><sup>[[Special:Contributions/NightHammer|<span style="color: #2B1AAA;">(contribs)</span>]]</sup>'' 18:48, 19 October 2017 (EDT)
== Detail ==
The work that's gone into the rewrite on this article is very much appreciated, thank you Ynoss for doing it. However, I am going to have to bring up some issues - namely the sheer detail the article goes into. As a general rule, battle articles shouldn't need to go into such specifics as specific dialogue or words or hand movements - we are an encyclopaedia after all, not a plot synopsis. IMO, the sections on Prototype and Midnight in the Heart of the Midlothian could both be better surmised down into 1-2 paragraphs each. I've also noticed quite a few spelling and grammar errors in the new revision of the article, so I'll be adding the Cleanup template for now. In general, the sections I mentioned above should be condensed, as right now they go into excessive detail.
Overall though, the effort that has gone into this writeup is pretty amazing; thank you for the effort nonetheless.[[User:BaconShelf|<span style="color:green;">BaconShelf</span>]] <span style="font-size:90%">([[User:BaconShelf|talk]])</span> 08:22, July 12, 2021 (EDT)

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