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14:0814:08, August 17, 2009 diff hist +9‎ Covenant murals ‎ Fixed sentence run-ons and corrected punctuation
14:0414:04, August 17, 2009 diff hist −7‎ Covenant murals ‎ In the fifth mural, there was a repeat of words, "on the on the video" that I deleted
14:0114:01, August 17, 2009 diff hist −1‎ m Covenant murals ‎No edit summary
13:5913:59, August 17, 2009 diff hist +19‎ Covenant murals ‎ removed unnecessary commas and completed a few sentence fragments
13:5613:56, August 17, 2009 diff hist +3‎ m Covenant murals ‎No edit summary
13:5513:55, August 17, 2009 diff hist +44‎ Covenant murals ‎ A sentence in the mural Age of Conversion was an unspecific run-on. I corrected it into two, more specific, sentences.
13:5113:51, August 17, 2009 diff hist +17‎ Covenant murals ‎ There was a sentence fragment in the mural Age of Discovery
13:3013:30, August 17, 2009 diff hist −1‎ Covenant air artillery ‎ several words that should be paired into one word, such as on board, were corrected
13:2413:24, August 17, 2009 diff hist +1‎ Cougar ‎ The beginning of several sentences were in past tense, then transitioned to present tense. I corrected by changing entire sentence to past tense

15:4515:45, August 15, 2009 diff hist +46‎ Arctic ice hound ‎ The list was not grammatically parallel and lacked commas between adjacent adjectives. I corrected those, then separated the sentence to avoid confusion.