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	:As for the opening paragraph, I think it's fine as it is. Five paragraphs is still manageable as an introduction for a character we know a lot about, and the content itself is concisely written. Wikipedia, for example, routinely has introductory sections this long or longer. --[[User:Tacitus\|Tacitus]] ([[User talk:Tacitus\|talk]]) 00:19, 5 February 2019 (EST)		:As for the opening paragraph, I think it's fine as it is. Five paragraphs is still manageable as an introduction for a character we know a lot about, and the content itself is concisely written. Wikipedia, for example, routinely has introductory sections this long or longer. --[[User:Tacitus\|Tacitus]] ([[User talk:Tacitus\|talk]]) 00:19, 5 February 2019 (EST)

			::thumbs up Well, I will keep plugging away here. I'm trying to get this article to be completely finished before Infinite comes out. If anyone wants to tighten things up where appropriate, proofread, etc. that would be great.[[User:TheEld\|TheEld]] ([[User talk:TheEld\|talk]]) 00:29, 5 February 2019 (EST)TheEld