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#Military time goes date, month, year. The dates on the after action report should be 31 Feb. 2000, and 0800 Hours 22 Feb. 2000,

-[[User:ED|ED]] 21:14, 23 February 2007 (UTC)

:Wow! Many thanks for your "butchering". You know, I love your butchering, and the butchering of critics, for it is constructive butchering - something every writer looks forward to. Many thanks. =D In response to your notes:

:#The ranks are deliberately inflated. =D Yeah, I know that Companies are led by Captains...but, ya know, these are my Halopedian pals? Me likes to give 'em high ranks on purpose. Many thanks for catching that, but it was part of my scheme. =D

:#My military idiocity is exemplified by adding tags to team members. =D What would be the better way to label members? =D

:#Regarding the admiral thingie, I was thinking about that...but I wasn't sure. I'll change that, as well as military time.

:Thanks for taking ''all'' tha time reviewing it! =D How'dya like it? I wrote most of it in school rather hastily, so the grammar is far from what I normally go, but does the plot work out well?

:Cheers,

:[[user:RelentlessRecusant|Ghost Inside the Machine]] ''([[user talk:RelentlessRecusant|Whisper through the Storm]]) ([[Special:Contributions/RelentlessRecusant|My Journeys]]) ([[w:c:gearsofwar:user:RelentlessRecusant|Omens]]) 01:41, 24 February 2007 (UTC)

:p.s. - I've included you in Episode II as the kinda "big bro" figure to Dragonclaws. =D

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 #Military time goes date, month, year. The dates on the after action report should be 31 Feb. 2000, and 0800 Hours 22 Feb. 2000,
 -[[User:ED|ED]] 21:14, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
+:Wow! Many thanks for your "butchering". You know, I love your butchering, and the butchering of critics, for it is constructive butchering - something every writer looks forward to. Many thanks. =D In response to your notes:
+:#The ranks are deliberately inflated. =D Yeah, I know that Companies are led by Captains...but, ya know, these are my Halopedian pals? Me likes to give 'em high ranks on purpose. Many thanks for catching that, but it was part of my scheme. =D
+:#My military idiocity is exemplified by adding tags to team members. =D What would be the better way to label members? =D
+:#Regarding the admiral thingie, I was thinking about that...but I wasn't sure. I'll change that, as well as military time.
+:Thanks for taking ''all'' tha time reviewing it! =D How'dya like it? I wrote most of it in school rather hastily, so the grammar is far from what I normally go, but does the plot work out well?
+:Cheers,
+:[[user:RelentlessRecusant|<font color="#D3D3D3">Gho</font><font color="#A9A9A9">st I</font><font color="#808080">nsi</font><font color="#000000">de the M</font><font color="#808080">ach</font><font color="#A9A9A9">ine</font>]] <font color="#808080"><sup>''([[user talk:RelentlessRecusant|<font color="#808080">Whisper through the Storm</font>]]) ([[Special:Contributions/RelentlessRecusant|<font color="#808080">My Journeys</font>]]) ([[w:c:gearsofwar:user:RelentlessRecusant|<font color="#808080">Omens</font>]])</sup></font> 01:41, 24 February 2007 (UTC)
+:p.s. - I've included you in Episode II as the kinda "big bro" figure to Dragonclaws. =D
 == [[Covenant of Halopedia]] ==