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The two quotes currently in place for the limited editions section do not seem like they belong in an encyclopedic article. They straight-up sound like advertisments (because they are). They ''do'' contain (minor) information, but this could instead be replaced with exposition sentences from the article itself. Thus they do not belong here. In fact, that whole section was ripped from the [http://www.game.co.uk/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/HubArticleView?hubId=299822&articleId=299823&catalogId=10201&langId=44&storeId=10151 ad pages] and this is something we do not do. Again, we should rewrite this information in an objective (and not over-enthusiastic) way befit of an online encylcopedia, like we do with the other pages (see [[Halo_4#Editions|Halo 4]]).--[[File:1221751884 I-animated-this-for-you.gif|20px]][[User:Ender the Xenocide|<font color="Green">Ender the Xenocide]]</font>[[File:1221751884 I-animated-this-for-you.gif|20px]] 05:12, 17 August 2014 (EDT)
The two quotes currently in place for the limited editions section do not seem like they belong in an encyclopedic article. They straight-up sound like advertisments (because they are). They ''do'' contain (minor) information, but this could instead be replaced with exposition sentences from the article itself. Thus they do not belong here. In fact, that whole section was ripped from the [http://www.game.co.uk/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/HubArticleView?hubId=299822&articleId=299823&catalogId=10201&langId=44&storeId=10151 ad pages] and this is something we do not do. Again, we should rewrite this information in an objective (and not over-enthusiastic) way befit of an online encylcopedia, like we do with the other pages (see [[Halo_4#Editions|Halo 4]]).--[[File:1221751884 I-animated-this-for-you.gif|20px]][[User:Ender the Xenocide|<font color="Green">Ender the Xenocide]]</font>[[File:1221751884 I-animated-this-for-you.gif|20px]] 05:12, 17 August 2014 (EDT)
:Fixed it. — <span style="font-size:14px; font-family:Arial;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span>  06:27, 17 August 2014 (EDT)

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Limited Edition section

The two quotes currently in place for the limited editions section do not seem like they belong in an encyclopedic article. They straight-up sound like advertisments (because they are). They do contain (minor) information, but this could instead be replaced with exposition sentences from the article itself. Thus they do not belong here. In fact, that whole section was ripped from the ad pages and this is something we do not do. Again, we should rewrite this information in an objective (and not over-enthusiastic) way befit of an online encylcopedia, like we do with the other pages (see Halo 4).--File:1221751884 I-animated-this-for-you.gifEnder the XenocideFile:1221751884 I-animated-this-for-you.gif 05:12, 17 August 2014 (EDT)

Fixed it. — subtank 06:27, 17 August 2014 (EDT)