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Hey Ghost! You have put much effort into your story The Life of War. And I shall say I am honored to be in it. May I ask when I will appear in the story next? By the way, thanks for the comment on my talk page. I will be happy to ask you if I need help. I am honored to be your friend Pryo'.
Hey Ghost! You have put much effort into your story The Life of War. And I shall say I am honored to be in it. May I ask when I will appear in the story next? By the way, thanks for the comment on my talk page. I will be happy to ask you if I need help. I am honored to be your friend Pryo'.


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By the way, like the signature? I finally figured out the coding!
By the way, like the signature? I finally figured out the coding!
Oh, P.S. can you please change my name Verna to Verlla, and my last name Cenduul to Cenduum? It will sound much better. Thanks.
Oh, P.S. can you please change my name Verna to Verlla, and my last name Cenduul to Cenduum? It will sound much better. Thanks.

Revision as of 02:38, May 23, 2008

Story

READ THIS!! - This section is for feedback on "The Life of War," my fanfic. I have organized it by user. Please make it a subheading within your section like so: ====Title==== . If you have not made a comment here before, make a heading with your username ( ===Username=== ) then a sub heading for your comment. Please make sure your spelling and grammar is at least decent.Make sure to sign the post with four tildes, in order to have the timestamp. Pryo 'Zarkum File:Major-gr1.gif My COM My Work My Story 18:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC)

Updates:

Read this!! Or your post will be deleted!!
  1. Due to lack of images, this will soon be included:
    Pryo's first time firing a Beam Rifle, and his reaction
    Pryo 'Zarkum File:Major-gr1.gif My COM My Work My Story 18:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
  2. Many people are requesting to have their character included, but I will never retain information that I read once on my board. Instead I would like people to post their characters on this page, with a signature so I know who's it is. Please put it in the appropriate section below.
  3. Please suggest male characters, as it is very hard to integrate many female characters. That is all.

New Characters

Please just make it as a bulleted entry, with one or two sentences about what your character is like.

Elites

  • Katar Yamos - He is stubborn,showoff,can be a jerk at sometime but is really a nice guy. He gets/got in a lot of trouble in military schhol. Once you get to know him he is a nice guy. (Could Also be a teacher since is older than the other..if student like near graduating)
    • I have a spot for this kind of character for the next chapter. Unless I get no other suggestions, expect to see him in Chapter four. Pryo 'Zarkum Major-gr2.gif My COM My Work My Story 15:09, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
  • Quilian Killamee-Katars best friend. He is caring to everyone and often appoligises for Katar. He is Katar's right hand man and also gets in trouble. He has a little sister who often sneaks his/others dorm rooms with her friend.Spec-Opp Spartan 02:16, 6 May 2008 (UTC) (both are from me)
  • Ikor 'Arcuum - find out at this link, http://halofanon.wikia.com/index.php?title=Ikor_%27Arcuum Delta-269 22:02, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
  • V'tor 'Zornam - Major Elite who's strength lies in close range combat. He's generally serious and hardened from his many battles. Please see my Fanon page (link on my UserWiki). Holy Swordsman*User Talk*Contributions 22:39, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
  • Anau Nadum- Special operations Commader of the Covenant. Put him anywhere, you dont have too, but, hey, its your story. Lt. Church 06:04, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
  • Zuka Rasamee-my character and zuka's info is at the bottom of this page. User:SpecopsElite342
  • Prophet of Sanghelios/Venus K'ktum. He's an Ultra/SpecOps and is great with an Energy Sword. He's also an expert on human weaponry and vehicles. He is also a bit of a grim character because most Sangheili don't think highly of him. Prophet of Sanghelios
  • Rebas 'Ropkta-He is actually somewhat rebellious and simply kicks butt with his Energy Sword and Plasma Rifle he dual wields. He is an Elite SpecOps officer. He actually is very kind to any ally and treats them with respect, but in the face of an enemy, they wished they would stayed home. Very wise, he can actually tell if someone is lying and can tell what you are feeling. He is an Elite sympathizer of Humanity, and is best friends with Force Colonel Valhala 112.--Force Colonel Valh ala-112 File:Colonel-gr4.gif 23:29, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

I Rvbfan have made these three sperate characters for you to choose. They are in my story Halo:Special Operations, You can choose either one. i hope you like them. Thanks for looking.

    • Zorma 'Thanamee - A Special Operations Officer that led a platoon of Spec-Ops elites along with another Officer to attack the Covenant Stronghold on the planet Eden. He has a can do attidude and treats his men with respect no matter what gender.
    • Varas 'Sanamee - A Special Operations Officer who joins along side with Zorma and his platoon against the brutes, But the thing is she is a Female but with a Kickbut attitude of a Male but has a senciteve side for her unit and others.
    • Ktor 'Fulsmee - A Special Operations Elite who joined Zorma's and Varas's Platoon so he could be remembered as a hero. He is fond of human culture and would one day want to visit the earth and see in all its beuty, He isnt the smartest of the platoon but is the most happiest.
Approved Characters
  1. Ikor 'Arcuum
  2. Vtor 'Zornam
  3. Katar 'Yamos
Possible Characters
  1. Anua 'Nadum
Unlikely characters
  1. Quilian 'Killamee

Grunts

  • Munlop:A middle ranked funny wise cracking grunt who is very loyal to those who apreciate him and lways refers to himself as the comic. He serves as a great sidekick to many he also is a highly respected grunt for his coopiration and kindness. I fyou include him he must be missing before the great shiscm in halo2 though thanks.-Jon-117
  • Gungar: A Grunt SpecOp, he is always cautious in war. He is very loyal to Rebas' Ropkta, and actually, even though it isn't known, the two are best friends, and always watches each others back. Also he is unusually strong for his species.--Force Colonel Valh ala-112 File:Colonel-gr4.gif 23:34, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Prophet of Sanghelios

If you have the time could you please include my character, Prophet of Sanghelios. His real name is Venos K'ktum and his political rank is 'honorary' Prophet, if you know what I mean. His military rank is Ultra or SpecOps and he's an excellent swordsman and an expert on human weapons. He's hated, or at the least disliked by most Sangheili so if you use him before the Great Scism he shouldn't be very popular.

Lt. Church

Anau 'Nadumee- Special Operations Commander of the Covenant. You do not have to make him a big part because I understand that your being flooded with requests. So, just put me anywhere. Thanks. Anau Nadum

Lt. Church's Post

I have read it, nice Lt. Church 05:38, 1 April 2008 (UTC)Lt. Church `

Noga 'Putumee

Feedback, and including Noga 'Putumee in the story

It looks good so far. When is it set? Is this his initiation into the army?

You could include Noga 'Putumee as his mentor or commander or something similar. or if he goes on a mission when he joins up you could include Noga Putumee there. In my opinion the first option is preferable. this is after noga putumee recovered from his wound on the fist Halo so you could include references to that. If you have read halo the flood you should know his personality. you could alter it slightly to be a bit more caring for the troops under his command after his close to death experience.

Please use my advice.

--User:Noga 'Putumee File:Zealot3.jpg 19:53, 1 April 2008 (UTC)


Rvbfan's Asking

I know you are flooded with request but if you want or can please can you pick one of my characters if you want. Thanks

Chapter 2

Chapter 2 looking good!

Is this set in the covenant civil war becuase if it is, Noga 'Putumee wil be Noga 'Putum (the ee is for being in the covenant military)

--User:Noga 'Putumee File:Zealot3.jpg 18:06, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

RE: Chapter 2 (Again...)

You will be one of the instructors at Iruiru File:Major-gr1.gif Pryo 'Zarkum 16:24, 9 April 2008 (UTC)


Chapter 2 (Again...)

I like the plot twist and the friendship with Rtas Vadum. It will be a very interesing story by the looks of it.

Mind me asking, when am I going to turn up in the plot of things?

--User:Noga 'Putumee File:Zealot3.jpg 21:30, 5 April 2008 (UTC)

Noga 'Putumee's Feedback

Wow! It's really cool and I like all the ideas you've put in it! Keep it up! --User:Noga 'Putumee File:Zealot3.jpg 17:25, 5 May 2008 (UTC)

Stigma-231

Intrigue

I quite like your story so far! Do you write often? I believe this could be turned into a rather thick storyline, if you have enough patience and such. Tell me when there's more? I'm eager to read more.
-Umos 'Qikost Sword-wielding Minors and Shining Blue Spiders Comm 02:45, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Zarra 'Yairum

The Story

I love it! Great job so far. By the way Zarra's autobiography is up on my wiki user page if you want to see it. -User:Zarra 'Yairum

Swords

I know another way I could help with the story. I know a few basic sword fighting techniques. It was part of a martial arts class and I forgot most of it, (it was a long time ago), but I do remember the nine angles of attack, and some methods of blocking and counter attacking. Its realy basic, but it may be useful. I'll put it up here if you need it. -User:Zarra 'Yairum

Including My Character

I can't wait to read more! You are a good writer. As for Zarra's skills, she is good at sniping, and she is good at sword fighting, but she never uses a sword until around HaloCE. At the point in time your story takes place she is most likely training to become a medic. I can only speculate on what a medic in the covenant would be like but my guess is that they would have very plain armor, weak shields, and stealth. --Zarra 'Yairum 16:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC)

Concilor Katar

One thing

You would be in the late part of the Age of Conservation if you were born in 2515. The Age of Reclamation begun with the Battle of Harvest I believe. - Councilor Katar

Everything Not Including the Story

Pretty self explanatory. Same rules as the above section. Pryo' Zarkum 16:44, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Read Mine

Just read mine: http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/User:Halo7

Fanfiction

Hi. Fanfiction isn't allowed on Halopedia, I'm afraid. Please use our sister site Halo Fanon instead, and just post a link to it. --Dragonclaws(talk) 05:16, 4 April 2008 (UTC)

Zuka Rasamee

Can you please introduce my character: Zuka Rasamee, an Special operations commander, female, and my mate Zuka anthanee, who wears zealot armor but is a counciler. User:SpecopsElite342

Characters

Here's the links to my characters. You've already seen one, so I thought I'd post the other as well.

--Specops306, Kora 'Morhek 21:53, 6 May 2008 (UTC)

Award

Congratulations, my friend, upon earning the Honour Legion! And if you remove the u in Honour, I'll beat you over the head with it! --Specops306, Kora 'Morhek 21:49, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

Template:Specops306Award

My Character

Hey Ghost! You have put much effort into your story The Life of War. And I shall say I am honored to be in it. May I ask when I will appear in the story next? By the way, thanks for the comment on my talk page. I will be happy to ask you if I need help. I am honored to be your friend Pryo'.

EliteGirl My Talk Page My Userwiki

By the way, like the signature? I finally figured out the coding! Oh, P.S. can you please change my name Verna to Verlla, and my last name Cenduul to Cenduum? It will sound much better. Thanks.