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:Edit: I just included a quote which I originally wanted to include and correctly rephrased the second quote.--[[User:Brute Honour Guard|<span style="color:blue">Brute Honour Guard</span>]] File:Bruteface.png|20px]] ([[User talk:Brute Honour Guard|<span style="color:black">"Talk"</span>]]) 15:39, 3 March 2012 (EST) | :Edit: I just included a quote which I originally wanted to include and correctly rephrased the second quote.--[[User:Brute Honour Guard|<span style="color:blue">Brute Honour Guard</span>]] File:Bruteface.png|20px]] ([[User talk:Brute Honour Guard|<span style="color:black">"Talk"</span>]]) 15:39, 3 March 2012 (EST) | ||
:My vote is for the second one - firstly, it sounds less like a soundbyte, and secondly, it explains what their goals as a studio are a lot better. -- [[User:Specops306|<b><font color=indigo>Specops306</font></b>]] [[ | :My vote is for the second one - firstly, it sounds less like a soundbyte, and secondly, it explains what their goals as a studio are a lot better. -- [[User:Specops306|<b><font color=indigo>Specops306</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>Qur'a 'Morhek</sup></font></i></u>]] 15:19, 3 March 2012 (EST) | ||
I like the first one the best, but the second describes them as a studio more fully. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 15:54, 3 March 2012 (EST) | I like the first one the best, but the second describes them as a studio more fully. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 15:54, 3 March 2012 (EST) | ||
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My vote would go to the third quote, as it describes the great challenge 343i has been given.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} | My vote would go to the third quote, as it describes the great challenge 343i has been given.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} | ||
To me, the first one seems too insubstantive. The third is good, but it's a bit too promotional for me, as well as a bit long. The second quote hits that sweet spot between style and substance, and doesn't sound rehearsed. -- [[User:Specops306|<b><font color=indigo>Specops306</font></b>]] [[ | To me, the first one seems too insubstantive. The third is good, but it's a bit too promotional for me, as well as a bit long. The second quote hits that sweet spot between style and substance, and doesn't sound rehearsed. -- [[User:Specops306|<b><font color=indigo>Specops306</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>Qur'a 'Morhek</sup></font></i></u>]] 06:42, 5 March 2012 (EST) | ||
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