Talk:Ghosts of Halo: Difference between revisions

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That being said, I believe a major cleanup is needed, with all the "sightings" summarised to a paragraph (as there is no need for an individual section for each title). Also, there is no need for a "witchhunt" section covering recently-found "ghosts". The article should also be renamed to something more appropriate (maybe "Laggy players"?). It is possible to consider merging with [[Lag]] as it is more relevant but I would consider that it is quite notable to have its own article. To conclude, cleanup is needed! — <span style="font-size:14px; font-family:Arial;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span>  09:11, 20 January 2014 (EST)
That being said, I believe a major cleanup is needed, with all the "sightings" summarised to a paragraph (as there is no need for an individual section for each title). Also, there is no need for a "witchhunt" section covering recently-found "ghosts". The article should also be renamed to something more appropriate (maybe "Laggy players"?). It is possible to consider merging with [[Lag]] as it is more relevant but I would consider that it is quite notable to have its own article. To conclude, cleanup is needed! — <span style="font-size:14px; font-family:Arial;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span>  09:11, 20 January 2014 (EST)
:Subtank, I believe that you are making a good point that this article needs major cleanup (both language/citation wise as well as condensing the content). Did you have anything particular in mind? I would suggest the sections apart from the summary above the Table of Contents- '''History''', '''Behavior''', '''Theories''', '''Appearances''' (Which would have each game as a subsection), '''False Sightings''', '''Trivia''' and '''Gallery''' (plus of course sources). Then just condense the language and info.
:Another important objective should be the '''SOURCES'''. We should get some real articles in there. Any tips, ideas, comments? I would be interested on working on this, but I most likely would only be able to make major changes by the weekend. [[User:Mewcat97|<span style="color:Grey;font-weight: bold">Mewcat97</span>]] [[File:CQCVariant Helmet.png|16px]] ([[User talk:Mewcat97|<span style="color:silver;font-style:italic">COM LINK</span>]]) 09:43, 20 January 2014 (EST)
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