Talk:List of inconsistencies in the Halo series: Difference between revisions

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Hm. Then maybe it should be rewritten to make it clearer that the inconsistency is his reaction, not the array itself. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 03:27, 18 December 2015 (EST)
Hm. Then maybe it should be rewritten to make it clearer that the inconsistency is his reaction, not the array itself. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 03:27, 18 December 2015 (EST)
:Perhaps. I thought the ''"yet he does not find this out of the ordinary"'' part would make it obvious enough it's about his reaction, but I suppose it could be clearer. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:45, 18 December 2015 (EST)