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-'''Heretic Sangheili Majors''' are denoted by their bronze color armor.<ref name="Arbiter">'''Halo 2''', level ''[[The Arbiter]]''</ref><ref name="Oracle">'''Halo 2''', level ''[[The Oracle]]''</ref> They serve as commanders to the [[Heretic Sangheili Minor|Minors]] and the [[Heretic Unggoy]]. They also guard areas of interest as designated by the [[Heretic]] leader, [[Sesa 'Refumee]].<ref name="Arbiter"/><ref name="Oracle"/>
+'''Heretic Sangheili Majors''' were denoted by their bronze-colored armor.<ref name="Arbiter">'''Halo 2''', level ''[[The Arbiter]]''</ref><ref name="Oracle">'''Halo 2''', level ''[[The Oracle]]''</ref> They served as commanders to the [[Heretic Sangheili Minor|Minors]] and the [[Heretic Unggoy]]. They also guarded areas of interest as designated by the [[Heretic]] leader, [[Sesa 'Refumee]].<ref name="Arbiter"/><ref name="Oracle"/>
 ==Overview==
-Like the Heretic Minors, the Heretic Majors are fearless warriors which were formerly part of the Covenant's artifact retrieval group. Under the banner of 'Refumee, the Heretic Major ensure that every heretic caste fulfills their role.
+Like the Heretic Minors, the Heretic Majors were fearless warriors who were part of the Covenant's artifact retrieval group before their abandonment of the Covenant Faith. Under the banner of 'Refumee, the Heretic Majors ensured that members of heretic caste fulfilled their respective roles.
 Most of, if not all, the Majors were killed when the gas mine fell into the depths of [[Threshold]], after the [[Thel 'Vadam|Arbiter]] cut the cables holding the mine up.<ref name="Arbiter"/><ref name="Oracle"/>
 ==Gameplay==
-Heretic Majors shares the same properties of a [[Sangheili Major]]: they have the same shield strength and make less tactical errors than their Minor counterparts. They are often equipped with Carbines and Sentinel Beams, with several few wielding Energy Swords.
+Heretic Majors share some properties of a [[Sangheili Major]]: For example, they have the same shield strength. However, they make fewer tactical errors than their Minor counterparts. They are often equipped with [[Type-52 Carbine|Carbines]] and [[Sentinel Beam|Sentinel Beams]], with some wielding [[Energy Sword]]s.
-In ''[[Halo 2: Anniversary]]'' their armor changed from gold colored to Bronze.<ref>[[Halo 2: Anniversary]]</ref>
+In ''[[Halo 2: Anniversary]]'' their armor was changed from gold-colored to Bronze, presumably to make the Heretic ranks more apparent to the player.<ref>[[Halo 2: Anniversary]]</ref>
 ==Gallery==