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==Issue 8==
==Issue 8==
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Thought I'd share some late thoughts/ramblings on the newest issue because it's the first one that delves into the series' primary plot line and characters and will probably matter the most going forward.
Thought I'd share some late thoughts/ramblings on the newest issue because it's the first one that delves into the series' primary plot line and characters and will probably matter the most going forward.


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Now, the book Didact is another matter entirely — I'm starting to think only Greg Bear could make 343i's version of the Forerunners ''work'' by adding the appropriate levels of weight and nuance to their characterizations whereas at the hands of their in-house writers like Reed here they just come across as flat cartoon characters. Unlike some people I'm mostly fine with the Forerunner Saga and even some of its more esoteric aspects: it draws from a long tradition of "sufficiently advanced" technology in science fiction with some thought-provoking themes running in the background, as opposed to more superficial Hollywood and comic book ephemera.
Now, the book Didact is another matter entirely — I'm starting to think only Greg Bear could make 343i's version of the Forerunners ''work'' by adding the appropriate levels of weight and nuance to their characterizations whereas at the hands of their in-house writers like Reed here they just come across as flat cartoon characters. Unlike some people I'm mostly fine with the Forerunner Saga and even some of its more esoteric aspects: it draws from a long tradition of "sufficiently advanced" technology in science fiction with some thought-provoking themes running in the background, as opposed to more superficial Hollywood and comic book ephemera.


And that's another thing: a lot of recent developments seem to be geared to making ''Halo'' less like the gritty, technical military sci-fi it used to be and more like the Marvel universe with the Spartans being turned from an elite special operations outfit into something more closely resembling a [[Spartan Operations|superhero team]], a brooding godlike general of an immensely complex ancient civilization becoming an over-the-top cartoon villain, or zero concern to physics or technology with pulp silliness like tormented souls popping up from walls or ships no longer having to abide by the previous limitations of slipspace travel. I don't like to point fingers, but I do wonder if all this has to do with 343i's current lead writer's Marvel background. Now, despite not being much of a comic reader, I love pretty much all of the MCU movies which are filled with this kind of absurdity. But I'd rather they kept the Halo universe's tone as it was rather than molding it into something it's not. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:14, 13 August 2014 (EDT)
And that's another thing: a lot of recent developments seem to be geared to making ''Halo'' less like the gritty, technical military sci-fi it used to be and more like the Marvel universe with the Spartans being turned from an elite special operations outfit into something more closely resembling a [[Spartan Operations|superhero team]], a brooding godlike general of an immensely complex ancient civilization becoming an over-the-top cartoon villain, or zero concern to physics or technology with pulp silliness like tormented souls popping up from walls or ships no longer having to abide by the previous limitations of slipspace travel. I don't like to point fingers, but I do wonder if all this has to do with 343i's current lead writer's Marvel background. Now, despite not being much of a comic reader, I love pretty much all of the MCU movies which are filled with this kind of absurdity. But I'd rather they kept the Halo universe's tone as it was rather than molding it into something it's not. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:14, 13 August 2014 (EDT)


:Couldn't agree with you more. And kind of amusing - "''tormented souls popping up from walls''". The whacky "composers abyss" is just out of place in the Halo universe and makes it seem as though I'm reading a Harry Potter comic. You already know my stance on these science-fantasy elements that 343i implemented since Halo 4. Anyway, I definitely agree that the latest entry in this comic series was a major let down especially compared to the previous issues. Its almost as though everything was rushed and there was little emphasis placed on anything really. Like I said in "subtracting canon" (I know everyone disagrees with the title but it came from lack of better wording, plus I wanted an interesting forum title) the reunion between John & blue team was insignificant, the slaughter of black team was unnecessary & uneplained, and then there's the didact in his great cartoony glory. Basically, when it came down to this issue, my main problem with it was execution and irrational decision making. Now some people may say that "developers may not want to revisit certain characters". If that's the case why bring them back in the first place only to kill them off rendering them nothing more than a skid mark? Leave it alone, leave them where they lay, leave well enough alone. Bringing them back only to immediately kill them off seems more like a slap in the face to most fans than if they just left them a mystery (and you don't want to disappoint the fans since they account for majority of revenues by the way). Just because 343i has the power to do something doesn't mean they should do it. Yes, you're not going to please the fans everytime but at least if they took the time and safest approach to doing things than at least you can lesson the damage. And some may say "what 343i does counts regardless of what the fans prefer". But again, just because they can do it doesn't mean they should. There is a such thing as reviewers, opinions, forums, etc...If 343i properly executed this story w/ proper explanations for things, less rushed plot lines, and better artwork, than there'd be a lesser chance of displeasing fans. And like Jugus said, if you can't do it in a comic, than reserve it for a book, game, or mini-movie like "Nightfall", rahter than trying to stuff and shorten things in a tiny 20 or so page comic.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 09:38, 13 August 2014 (EDT)
:Couldn't agree with you more. And kind of amusing - "''tormented souls popping up from walls''". The whacky "composers abyss" is just out of place in the Halo universe and makes it seem as though I'm reading a Harry Potter comic. You already know my stance on these science-fantasy elements that 343i implemented since Halo 4. Anyway, I definitely agree that the latest entry in this comic series was a major let down especially compared to the previous issues. Its almost as though everything was rushed and there was little emphasis placed on anything really. Like I said in "subtracting canon" (I know everyone disagrees with the title but it came from lack of better wording, plus I wanted an interesting forum title) the reunion between John & blue team was insignificant, the slaughter of black team was unnecessary & uneplained, and then there's the didact in his great cartoony glory. Basically, when it came down to this issue, my main problem with it was execution and irrational decision making. Now some people may say that "developers may not want to revisit certain characters". If that's the case why bring them back in the first place only to kill them off rendering them nothing more than a skid mark? Leave it alone, leave them where they lay, leave well enough alone. Bringing them back only to immediately kill them off seems more like a slap in the face to most fans than if they just left them a mystery (and you don't want to disappoint the fans since they account for majority of revenues by the way). Just because 343i has the power to do something doesn't mean they should do it. Yes, you're not going to please the fans everytime but at least if they took the time and safest approach to doing things than at least you can lesson the damage. And some may say "what 343i does counts regardless of what the fans prefer". But again, just because they can do it doesn't mean they should. There is a such thing as reviewers, opinions, forums, etc...If 343i properly executed this story w/ proper explanations for things, less rushed plot lines, and better artwork, than there'd be a lesser chance of displeasing fans. And like Jugus said, if you can't do it in a comic, than reserve it for a book, game, or mini-movie like "Nightfall", rahter than trying to stuff and shorten things in a tiny 20 or so page comic.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 09:38, 13 August 2014 (EDT)
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::The whole geas deal is one of the less compelling aspects of the 343i-era fiction for me, not only because the technology itself is firmly in the realm of the fantastical but because it diminishes human agency: previously, humanity was lauded for our ingenuity and our exceptional ability to innovate and endure in the face of impossible odds. Now, we're told none (or very little) of it was our own making. That we need arcane gene-magic to babysit us rather than being able to stand on our own. Humans have always been the Forerunners' inheritors which put us in a privileged position, but it used to be more subtle than literally saying specific technological breakthroughs are the direct result of genetic programming.
::The whole geas deal is one of the less compelling aspects of the 343i-era fiction for me, not only because the technology itself is firmly in the realm of the fantastical but because it diminishes human agency: previously, humanity was lauded for our ingenuity and our exceptional ability to innovate and endure in the face of impossible odds. Now, we're told none (or very little) of it was our own making. That we need arcane gene-magic to babysit us rather than being able to stand on our own. Humans have always been the Forerunners' inheritors which put us in a privileged position, but it used to be more subtle than literally saying specific technological breakthroughs are the direct result of genetic programming.


::It's also emblematic of a problem that tends to plague long-running comic books and TV shows - the trend of making everything so "connected" and "meaningful" that the universe begins to feel small. I was perfectly fine with the idea of the Spartan-IIs being created, or John and Cortana meeting one another, just when they were needed by sheer coincidence. They didn't need to be part of a contrived millennia-long master plan. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:19, 18 August 2014 (EDT)
::It's also emblematic of a problem that tends to plague long-running comic books and TV shows - the trend of making everything so "connected" and "meaningful" that the universe begins to feel small. I was perfectly fine with the idea of the Spartan-IIs being created, or John and Cortana meeting one another, just when they were needed by sheer coincidence. They didn't need to be part of a contrived millennia-long master plan. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:19, 18 August 2014 (EDT)


:It seems pretty clear that ''Escalation'' is telling the stories that future seasons of ''Spartan Ops'' were supposed to tell. Future seasons were obviously planned, given the whole "Season 1" label we got, but these seem pretty definitely scrapped in favour of ''Escalation''. To relegate such monumental story developments to a side-comic most players will never have even heard of is really irritating, even more so when elements like John's reunion with Blue Team and grief over Cortana's death are totally glossed over. I understand that the levels of ''Spartan Ops'' got pretty repetitive, and I'm sure that was a reason why future seasons were shelved. But if they had foregone episodic-based missions and instead focused on making the seasons as good and as long as they needed to be to fit the story, then these plots could have been given the spectacle, quality, and availability that they deserved. -  [[User:Halo-343|<span style="color: purple; font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 128%;">'''Halo-343'''</span>]] [[User talk:Halo-343|<font color="green">('''Talk''')</font>]] 21:25, 13 August 2014 (EDT)
:It seems pretty clear that ''Escalation'' is telling the stories that future seasons of ''Spartan Ops'' were supposed to tell. Future seasons were obviously planned, given the whole "Season 1" label we got, but these seem pretty definitely scrapped in favour of ''Escalation''. To relegate such monumental story developments to a side-comic most players will never have even heard of is really irritating, even more so when elements like John's reunion with Blue Team and grief over Cortana's death are totally glossed over. I understand that the levels of ''Spartan Ops'' got pretty repetitive, and I'm sure that was a reason why future seasons were shelved. But if they had foregone episodic-based missions and instead focused on making the seasons as good and as long as they needed to be to fit the story, then these plots could have been given the spectacle, quality, and availability that they deserved. -  [[User:Halo-343|<span style="color: purple; font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 128%;">'''Halo-343'''</span>]] [[User talk:Halo-343|<font color="green">('''Talk''')</font>]] 21:25, 13 August 2014 (EDT)


::That is most likely the case. I don't know if some of the previous story arcs would've been as long or exactly the same as they were in comic form (the Petra side story would've most likely been ditched had the story been told in the ''Spartan Ops'' format) but it's probable ''Escalation'' is built on the basic outline they had for the future seasons. Another reason for Spops' cancellation after S1 may have been the money and effort going into the ''Master Chief Collection'', particularly the enormous undertaking that is Blur's remastering of the ''Halo 2'' cutscenes. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:19, 18 August 2014 (EDT)
::That is most likely the case. I don't know if some of the previous story arcs would've been as long or exactly the same as they were in comic form (the Petra side story would've most likely been ditched had the story been told in the ''Spartan Ops'' format) but it's probable ''Escalation'' is built on the basic outline they had for the future seasons. Another reason for Spops' cancellation after S1 may have been the money and effort going into the ''Master Chief Collection'', particularly the enormous undertaking that is Blur's remastering of the ''Halo 2'' cutscenes. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:19, 18 August 2014 (EDT)


:::You know what? The gameplay already felt a bit detached from the cutscenes. They should have just made a series of animated episodes, and released them episodically, like Forward Unto Dawn, or on DVD ala Legends. That would have been fantastic. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 00:26, 18 August 2014 (EDT)
:::You know what? The gameplay already felt a bit detached from the cutscenes. They should have just made a series of animated episodes, and released them episodically, like Forward Unto Dawn, or on DVD ala Legends. That would have been fantastic. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 00:26, 18 August 2014 (EDT)


==Issue 9==
==Issue 9==
File:HaloEscalation9.jpg Shouldn't this have happened first?
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Wow this was a loaded issue! Seems as if we now know (not confirmed) who broke Chief's visor. Looks like the Constraint field isn't working for Didact or he'd use it again. Anyways fun stuff! -- Names Gall. Sam Gall
Wow this was a loaded issue! Seems as if we now know (not confirmed) who broke Chief's visor. Looks like the Constraint field isn't working for Didact or he'd use it again. Anyways fun stuff! -- Names Gall. Sam Gall


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:And I still hold that the format was the wrong one for this story — this material would've been best served by a full-length novel. If they couldn't get an author to write one in time (or if Reed insisted it be he who write the story and nobody else because he's lead writer now, damnit) they could've at least trimmed the surrounding filler stories about secondary characters and stretched this arc over at least two or three more issues. As much as I liked Issue #7, having a similar low-key issue dealing with the Chief's return to Earth and reunion with Blue Team would've been much more called for. That they have a main character/plot continuation story this crucial squeezed between the otherwise unconnected ''Spartan Ops'' crew stories reeks of poor planning.
:And I still hold that the format was the wrong one for this story — this material would've been best served by a full-length novel. If they couldn't get an author to write one in time (or if Reed insisted it be he who write the story and nobody else because he's lead writer now, damnit) they could've at least trimmed the surrounding filler stories about secondary characters and stretched this arc over at least two or three more issues. As much as I liked Issue #7, having a similar low-key issue dealing with the Chief's return to Earth and reunion with Blue Team would've been much more called for. That they have a main character/plot continuation story this crucial squeezed between the otherwise unconnected ''Spartan Ops'' crew stories reeks of poor planning.


:I'm thinking the Black Team scene had to be in this issue because they wanted to have the Didact's dramatic reveal at the end of the last one. Alternatively, the scene may not even have been originally in - maybe Reed pulled a Bioware due to the unexpected fan outrage and added an "Extended Cut" of Black's fate. After all, in the previous issue, the transmission implies that it is the Prometheans that "are appearing out of thin air" and are "slaughtering the Spartans". Hard to know for sure, but I don't think it's too far-fetched to speculate they added the scene to pacify the fanbase. Although I still disagree with the decision to kill Black off like this (they could've at least given their send-off its own story or comic) I have to admit it does more to justify their deaths than mere Knights. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:58, 28 August 2014 (EDT)
:I'm thinking the Black Team scene had to be in this issue because they wanted to have the Didact's dramatic reveal at the end of the last one. Alternatively, the scene may not even have been originally in - maybe Reed pulled a Bioware due to the unexpected fan outrage and added an "Extended Cut" of Black's fate. After all, in the previous issue, the transmission implies that it is the Prometheans that "are appearing out of thin air" and are "slaughtering the Spartans". Hard to know for sure, but I don't think it's too far-fetched to speculate they added the scene to pacify the fanbase. Although I still disagree with the decision to kill Black off like this (they could've at least given their send-off its own story or comic) I have to admit it does more to justify their deaths than mere Knights. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:58, 28 August 2014 (EDT)


::Honestly, I found this issue to be okay (still better than ''Initiation''). I really liked ''Escalation'' issues 1-7, although the art style has always been my pet peeve with the series (and terrible panel placement). And at least the cover art of the comic, kind of, almost happened. And I don't know if it's just me, but the art style seems to have improved by a lot for the most part. And I'm glad that we got some clarification on Black Team's death.
::Honestly, I found this issue to be okay (still better than ''Initiation''). I really liked ''Escalation'' issues 1-7, although the art style has always been my pet peeve with the series (and terrible panel placement). And at least the cover art of the comic, kind of, almost happened. And I don't know if it's just me, but the art style seems to have improved by a lot for the most part. And I'm glad that we got some clarification on Black Team's death.
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Not having read the story yet (or any of Escalation, really, beyond preview pages) I don't understand what the Didact's plan is. He's on a Halo, presumably with the full authority to use it that being a Forerunner entails, but he also has a whole mess of Composers at his disposal now. One makes the other redundant. I get that, in-canon, the Didact wasn't expecting to run into 859 Static Carillon, but from a storytelling point of view it means one or the other of these plot points are going to be dropped. Either he tries to take Gamma Halo to Earth, which renders the Composers pointless, or he leaves it behind and tries to bring the Composers to Earth which means Gamma Halo didn't need to be in the story. Gamma Halo was enough of a threat, why introduce this new story element? Unless it's because they're needed to compose something very specific before being abandoned - namely, in my full expectation and dread, Blue Team, souls implanted in Promethean shells and turned against the Master Chief.
Not having read the story yet (or any of Escalation, really, beyond preview pages) I don't understand what the Didact's plan is. He's on a Halo, presumably with the full authority to use it that being a Forerunner entails, but he also has a whole mess of Composers at his disposal now. One makes the other redundant. I get that, in-canon, the Didact wasn't expecting to run into 859 Static Carillon, but from a storytelling point of view it means one or the other of these plot points are going to be dropped. Either he tries to take Gamma Halo to Earth, which renders the Composers pointless, or he leaves it behind and tries to bring the Composers to Earth which means Gamma Halo didn't need to be in the story. Gamma Halo was enough of a threat, why introduce this new story element? Unless it's because they're needed to compose something very specific before being abandoned - namely, in my full expectation and dread, Blue Team, souls implanted in Promethean shells and turned against the Master Chief.


There was also some speculation previously that the Monitor would turn out to be a repaired 343 Guilty Spark. I'm a little glad that it isn't - it gives 343 the chance to make his eventual fate and possible return to the series a much more dramatic story. I would like to see the Didact pick up a Monitor assistant - someone who carries out his orders, and is a more capable threat than the Covenant remnants. Maybe we could see Jul 'Mdama feeling threatened by being usurped as the Didact's emissary, and trying to either reclaim his place through earning his "god's" favour or by taking out Carillon himself? But of course, I fully expect the story to end with the Didact out of commission, the Composers Forge destroyed, and John once again the last Spartan-II, completely undoing the potential the series is trying to set up. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 17:37, 28 August 2014 (EDT)
There was also some speculation previously that the Monitor would turn out to be a repaired 343 Guilty Spark. I'm a little glad that it isn't - it gives 343 the chance to make his eventual fate and possible return to the series a much more dramatic story. I would like to see the Didact pick up a Monitor assistant - someone who carries out his orders, and is a more capable threat than the Covenant remnants. Maybe we could see Jul 'Mdama feeling threatened by being usurped as the Didact's emissary, and trying to either reclaim his place through earning his "god's" favour or by taking out Carillon himself? But of course, I fully expect the story to end with the Didact out of commission, the Composers Forge destroyed, and John once again the last Spartan-II, completely undoing the potential the series is trying to set up. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 17:37, 28 August 2014 (EDT)


:Are you familiar with the Halo-Composer tuning theory?[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 20:38, 28 August 2014 (EDT)
:Are you familiar with the Halo-Composer tuning theory?[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 20:38, 28 August 2014 (EDT)
::Yeah, and I wish this arc's writing quality hadn't made me worry about that nonsense actually turning out to be the case. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:56, 29 August 2014 (EDT)
::Yeah, and I wish this arc's writing quality hadn't made me worry about that nonsense actually turning out to be the case. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:56, 29 August 2014 (EDT)
:::What's so bad about that? Tired of composers? Tired of Halos?[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 01:03, 29 August 2014 (EDT)  
:::What's so bad about that? Tired of composers? Tired of Halos?[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 01:03, 29 August 2014 (EDT)  
::::Because it's space magic. Granted, both Halos and Composers are already space magic (though the Composer is the more plausible one of the two) but I guess it's... double space magic. Combining them makes the space magic exponentially worse because two unrelated pieces of magitech/clarketech are easier to accept independently than in tandem when no connection between them was ever stated or implied. When you have two very specialized pieces of hardware designed to achieve a very specific effect, you can't just expect to be able to glue them together to make a special upgraded version of the two. It's ''Mass Effect 3'' ending tier of clueless writing.
::::Because it's space magic. Granted, both Halos and Composers are already space magic (though the Composer is the more plausible one of the two) but I guess it's... double space magic. Combining them makes the space magic exponentially worse because two unrelated pieces of magitech/clarketech are easier to accept independently than in tandem when no connection between them was ever stated or implied. When you have two very specialized pieces of hardware designed to achieve a very specific effect, you can't just expect to be able to glue them together to make a special upgraded version of the two. It's ''Mass Effect 3'' ending tier of clueless writing.
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::::And yeah, guess I'm also kind of tired of constant new Forerunner gadgets, superweapons and existential threats to humanity. This story did not need the Didact procuring a Halo or a new Composer and threatening to kill humanity once again. It could've been something smarter. What immediately springs to mind (and I'm making this up as I go along, so bear with me) is a more low-key plot where more time is spent dealing with John's return to the UNSC (such as having him ask about Halsey since finding her was his main goal in H4) and his reunion with his lifelong teammates and friends he hasn't seen for years. The Spartans are then sent back to Requiem because sensor data Cortana left in the Chief's armor indicates the Composer's portal linked there and they must ensure the Didact is dead. On Requiem, the Spartans find the Didact brooding in grand solitude in a scene evocative of his return to Nomdagro in Silentium (holograms of his children may or may not be involved). The Spartans' first encounter goes something like it does in the comic, they open fire, and the Didact says what he does ("See that which you fear"... etc). We get not just monologue, but dialog between the Didact and the Spartans (something that never happens in H4). The Didact is sullen, tired, and visibly changed by the battle with the Chief. In a standoff-type situation which may or may not involve physical fighting, the Didact's driving motives and goals are disseminated and broken apart. The Didact is made to realize he has and will not have a future no matter what he might do. How this ends (i.e. whether the Didact will accept this or continue to delude himself) obviously depends on where the story is going on a larger scale.
::::And yeah, guess I'm also kind of tired of constant new Forerunner gadgets, superweapons and existential threats to humanity. This story did not need the Didact procuring a Halo or a new Composer and threatening to kill humanity once again. It could've been something smarter. What immediately springs to mind (and I'm making this up as I go along, so bear with me) is a more low-key plot where more time is spent dealing with John's return to the UNSC (such as having him ask about Halsey since finding her was his main goal in H4) and his reunion with his lifelong teammates and friends he hasn't seen for years. The Spartans are then sent back to Requiem because sensor data Cortana left in the Chief's armor indicates the Composer's portal linked there and they must ensure the Didact is dead. On Requiem, the Spartans find the Didact brooding in grand solitude in a scene evocative of his return to Nomdagro in Silentium (holograms of his children may or may not be involved). The Spartans' first encounter goes something like it does in the comic, they open fire, and the Didact says what he does ("See that which you fear"... etc). We get not just monologue, but dialog between the Didact and the Spartans (something that never happens in H4). The Didact is sullen, tired, and visibly changed by the battle with the Chief. In a standoff-type situation which may or may not involve physical fighting, the Didact's driving motives and goals are disseminated and broken apart. The Didact is made to realize he has and will not have a future no matter what he might do. How this ends (i.e. whether the Didact will accept this or continue to delude himself) obviously depends on where the story is going on a larger scale.


::::My point being, we absolutely did not need a continuation of the Didact's schlocky supervillain antics from ''Halo 4''. As it stands, the events of ''Halo 4'' did nothing to change the characters of the Didact or even John — there's no visible arc, no change in attitudes or the way they view each other. Apart from the Didact finally deciding to kill the Chief. wow such depth --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:12, 29 August 2014 (EDT)
::::My point being, we absolutely did not need a continuation of the Didact's schlocky supervillain antics from ''Halo 4''. As it stands, the events of ''Halo 4'' did nothing to change the characters of the Didact or even John — there's no visible arc, no change in attitudes or the way they view each other. Apart from the Didact finally deciding to kill the Chief. wow such depth --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:12, 29 August 2014 (EDT)


:@Morhek: I really should have put "dramatic" in quotes to highlight I was talking about the writer's probable intent, not the result. Because Tron Skeletor in his evil lair was more silly than dramatic. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:56, 29 August 2014 (EDT)
:@Morhek: I really should have put "dramatic" in quotes to highlight I was talking about the writer's probable intent, not the result. Because Tron Skeletor in his evil lair was more silly than dramatic. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:56, 29 August 2014 (EDT)
{{Quote|I can just imagine lil' Brian Reed sitting on the floor picking things from the toy box that is the Halo universe — Spartans, the Didact, Halos, Composers, Monitors, slipspace portals — and just smashing them together. Bam! Crunch! Kablam! Hey, who are these guys? Spartans with black armor? That's kinda cool but I don't really know them so THEY'RE DEAD! Then the Chief and the Spartans go through the portal and there's, like, a ton of new Composers! But then the Didact uses his special stomp attack! Then the Didact steals a Halo to kill all humans because he's sooo evil!|Jugus}}
{{Quote|I can just imagine lil' Brian Reed sitting on the floor picking things from the toy box that is the Halo universe — Spartans, the Didact, Halos, Composers, Monitors, slipspace portals — and just smashing them together. Bam! Crunch! Kablam! Hey, who are these guys? Spartans with black armor? That's kinda cool but I don't really know them so THEY'RE DEAD! Then the Chief and the Spartans go through the portal and there's, like, a ton of new Composers! But then the Didact uses his special stomp attack! Then the Didact steals a Halo to kill all humans because he's sooo evil!|Jugus}}
Probably the BEST way to describe Brian Reed's writing style in regards to the first "two" 72 hours. And probably will be for the third.
Probably the BEST way to describe Brian Reed's writing style in regards to the first "two" 72 hours. And probably will be for the third.
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==Issue 10==
==Issue 10==
File:HaloEscalation10.jpg We still don't know why the chief left...whatever that means at this point.
File:HaloEscalation10.jpg We still don't know why the chief left...whatever that means at this point.
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Well the Didact was able to tank a direct hit to the head from a boltshot without visible damage. That's impressive. Also we see the UNSC Home fleet and the innards of the Slipspace capable Longsword. Good stuff in this article.  
Well the Didact was able to tank a direct hit to the head from a boltshot without visible damage. That's impressive. Also we see the UNSC Home fleet and the innards of the Slipspace capable Longsword. Good stuff in this article.  
-- The Name is Gall. Sam Gall.
-- The Name is Gall. Sam Gall.
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-- Sam Gall.
-- Sam Gall.


I think being "Composed" gives 343 room to manoeuvre where the Didact's future is concerned. He's already been composed and uncomposed once, as I understand it - the experiment that gave him his body. If he returns even more mutated and deranged, or more stable but in a robotic Promethean shell (or heck, maybe that massive thing from the trailer is his new body) it allows the player to engage him in terms that aren't near-godlike and therefore not fun for a game. If it is his final death, then it feels anti-climactic to kill him off in peripheral media, and a waste of storytelling opportunity, at least to me. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 22:27, 24 September 2014 (EDT)
I think being "Composed" gives 343 room to manoeuvre where the Didact's future is concerned. He's already been composed and uncomposed once, as I understand it - the experiment that gave him his body. If he returns even more mutated and deranged, or more stable but in a robotic Promethean shell (or heck, maybe that massive thing from the trailer is his new body) it allows the player to engage him in terms that aren't near-godlike and therefore not fun for a game. If it is his final death, then it feels anti-climactic to kill him off in peripheral media, and a waste of storytelling opportunity, at least to me. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 22:27, 24 September 2014 (EDT)
:Actually Reed already confirmed over Twitter that the Ur-Didact is alive and not composed.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 22:37, 24 September 2014 (EDT)
:Actually Reed already confirmed over Twitter that the Ur-Didact is alive and not composed.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 22:37, 24 September 2014 (EDT)
::Tinfoil hat theory: the very ambiguous energy blast that cremated the Didact (yet doesn't seem to do any damage to the control room itself) was a security measure designed to extract and retain the essences of anyone in the control room in the event of catastrophic damage. This is how they'll bring back Sergeant Johnson and Faber. Doesn't explain why John wasn't affected since he was still there, but maybe you have to stand in the main chasm (the Chief was already outside the chamber).
::Tinfoil hat theory: the very ambiguous energy blast that cremated the Didact (yet doesn't seem to do any damage to the control room itself) was a security measure designed to extract and retain the essences of anyone in the control room in the event of catastrophic damage. This is how they'll bring back Sergeant Johnson and Faber. Doesn't explain why John wasn't affected since he was still there, but maybe you have to stand in the main chasm (the Chief was already outside the chamber).


::If and when the Didact returns I hope they'll have the sense to redesign him into something that can be taken more seriously than his former incarnation and not another, even more dumbed down abomination. The Prometheans and the Didact were a really poor introduction to the Forerunners on a visual storytelling level — the first time we see a living Forerunner, ever, and then he turns out to be some unholy spawn of Lord Voldemort, Count Dracula, a blobfish, and a porcupine (not sure how that would even go down but I prefer not to think about it). I know he is a twisted shell of his former self but like I said it's still a poor way to introduce the Forerunners. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:36, 25 September 2014 (EDT)
::If and when the Didact returns I hope they'll have the sense to redesign him into something that can be taken more seriously than his former incarnation and not another, even more dumbed down abomination. The Prometheans and the Didact were a really poor introduction to the Forerunners on a visual storytelling level — the first time we see a living Forerunner, ever, and then he turns out to be some unholy spawn of Lord Voldemort, Count Dracula, a blobfish, and a porcupine (not sure how that would even go down but I prefer not to think about it). I know he is a twisted shell of his former self but like I said it's still a poor way to introduce the Forerunners. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:36, 25 September 2014 (EDT)


You know what? Beyond the expected illogicalities and plot holes there are some things I liked in this issue (then again it could also be a case of lowering my expectations after the last two). I like the fact the Chief and the Didact have an actual conversation for the first time given that the Didact has been built up as John's ultimate nemesis, yet all we had before was the Didact monologuing. This is not without its problems, however — as I snidely noted in my [http://www.halopedia.org/index.php?title=Halo:_Escalation_Issue_10&diff=1096530&oldid=1096514 edit summary] for Issue 10's plot synopsis, there's nothing stopping the Didact from ending the Chief right there, fleeing the control room when he does, or taking John with him. Instead he just stands there like an idiot even though just a moment ago he was fully determined to slaughter Blue Team as he did Black (this could've been fixed with a simple bit of exposition - have the Didact's armor be so damaged he can barely walk to the command console). I still like Static Carillon, though I wonder how does it A: have authority to move Halos or access their teleportation systems and B: know about the final Halo Array in the first place (compartmentalization should be a thing and the newer Halos were the most carefully-guarded secret in the ecumene) or C: why does an emergency teleport take you to the control room of all places (actually, I'll answer that - because they needed a convenient way for the Didact to make it into the control room within the confines of the comic's limited amount of pages, another reason why this would've worked better as a novel).
You know what? Beyond the expected illogicalities and plot holes there are some things I liked in this issue (then again it could also be a case of lowering my expectations after the last two). I like the fact the Chief and the Didact have an actual conversation for the first time given that the Didact has been built up as John's ultimate nemesis, yet all we had before was the Didact monologuing. This is not without its problems, however — as I snidely noted in my [http://www.halopedia.org/index.php?title=Halo:_Escalation_Issue_10&diff=1096530&oldid=1096514 edit summary] for Issue 10's plot synopsis, there's nothing stopping the Didact from ending the Chief right there, fleeing the control room when he does, or taking John with him. Instead he just stands there like an idiot even though just a moment ago he was fully determined to slaughter Blue Team as he did Black (this could've been fixed with a simple bit of exposition - have the Didact's armor be so damaged he can barely walk to the command console). I still like Static Carillon, though I wonder how does it A: have authority to move Halos or access their teleportation systems and B: know about the final Halo Array in the first place (compartmentalization should be a thing and the newer Halos were the most carefully-guarded secret in the ecumene) or C: why does an emergency teleport take you to the control room of all places (actually, I'll answer that - because they needed a convenient way for the Didact to make it into the control room within the confines of the comic's limited amount of pages, another reason why this would've worked better as a novel).


And what's going on with John at the end? Lord Hood is telling him and his buddies to take some R & R, which is not really unreasonable even for Spartans, but then he basically goes rogue for no good reason. Him disobeying orders made sense in ''Halo 4'' where his orders contradicted with a very acute threat he had to deal with, but that's not really evident here. He's just going on an ambiguous crusade with no apparent goal or cause. Is he supposed to be hunting the Didact or Gamma Halo? Or is this meant to hint that he's finally losing it? In this case I think the writing did a poor job at portraying either — the presentation felt more like it was meant to be endearing and illustrate how the Chief will always continue fighting and winning, etc, but it loses its steam when we have no apparent threat on the loose or a clear catalyst for John deciding to ditch the UNSC. Beforehand I think most people were under the impression something really major was going to happen that absolutely shook John's world (worst-case scenario being Blue Team dying, or at least appearing so, or being separated from John) but that isn't really the case — Blue Team kills the bad guy, saves the day is happily together again. This is another one of those cases that would've greatly benefited from an extended look into the Chief's head we would've gotten in a novel. As it stands, the ending comes out of nowhere. ''"After defeating the Didact, John-117 joined the crew of Infinity... but why did he leave?"'' says the promotional blurb for ''The Next 72 Hours'', but upon its conclusion we're none the wiser. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:36, 25 September 2014 (EDT)
And what's going on with John at the end? Lord Hood is telling him and his buddies to take some R & R, which is not really unreasonable even for Spartans, but then he basically goes rogue for no good reason. Him disobeying orders made sense in ''Halo 4'' where his orders contradicted with a very acute threat he had to deal with, but that's not really evident here. He's just going on an ambiguous crusade with no apparent goal or cause. Is he supposed to be hunting the Didact or Gamma Halo? Or is this meant to hint that he's finally losing it? In this case I think the writing did a poor job at portraying either — the presentation felt more like it was meant to be endearing and illustrate how the Chief will always continue fighting and winning, etc, but it loses its steam when we have no apparent threat on the loose or a clear catalyst for John deciding to ditch the UNSC. Beforehand I think most people were under the impression something really major was going to happen that absolutely shook John's world (worst-case scenario being Blue Team dying, or at least appearing so, or being separated from John) but that isn't really the case — Blue Team kills the bad guy, saves the day is happily together again. This is another one of those cases that would've greatly benefited from an extended look into the Chief's head we would've gotten in a novel. As it stands, the ending comes out of nowhere. ''"After defeating the Didact, John-117 joined the crew of Infinity... but why did he leave?"'' says the promotional blurb for ''The Next 72 Hours'', but upon its conclusion we're none the wiser. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:36, 25 September 2014 (EDT)


:I was under the apparently mistaken impression that he had been composed. After reading your plot summary, and coming up with my own ideas of how he might return under those conditions, I wish he had been. It would have made more sense than the contradictory facts of a crispy fried Forerunner corpse and him apparently not being dead (is he only mostly dead? Will he have fun storming the castle?) As for the series as a whole, it seems entirely based on making grand promises and then delivering something entirely less, apparently on purpose. The first arc sounds great, dealing with politics and intrigue. Then it gets mired in a plot that promises (threatens?) to resolve the Spirit of Fire issue, then drops that thread like a hot potato. Then it promises the epic showdown between John and the Didact, while threatening to kill of Blue Team, and does neither. I just...I have no idea why these stories need to exist. It's as if they're trying to make grand stories that make sweeping changes to the Halo universe, but then decided they couldn't change anything at all. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 06:05, 25 September 2014 (EDT)
:I was under the apparently mistaken impression that he had been composed. After reading your plot summary, and coming up with my own ideas of how he might return under those conditions, I wish he had been. It would have made more sense than the contradictory facts of a crispy fried Forerunner corpse and him apparently not being dead (is he only mostly dead? Will he have fun storming the castle?) As for the series as a whole, it seems entirely based on making grand promises and then delivering something entirely less, apparently on purpose. The first arc sounds great, dealing with politics and intrigue. Then it gets mired in a plot that promises (threatens?) to resolve the Spirit of Fire issue, then drops that thread like a hot potato. Then it promises the epic showdown between John and the Didact, while threatening to kill of Blue Team, and does neither. I just...I have no idea why these stories need to exist. It's as if they're trying to make grand stories that make sweeping changes to the Halo universe, but then decided they couldn't change anything at all. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 06:05, 25 September 2014 (EDT)


::Honestly, as unlikely as it seems, I think they'll go with the "he's composed but comes out wrong" approach. The phrasing was specifically "(the Composer) will not work on my new form", which could mean any number of things. And comic visuals are notorious for being inaccurate, so the specifics of what we see in Escalation #10 can't entirely be relied on. I would prefer if they went out of their way to explain ''why'' the Composer won't work on him instead of it just being an acquired comic book superpower - given the Composer's nature, his neurology must've been radically changed to the extent the Composer cannot replicate it. Something that occurred to me is that he could've outsourced a large chunk of his cognitive processes to external substrates, ensuring part of him lives on even if his physical form is killed. Maybe his mind is running in his armor even more so than with ordinary Forerunners? Or maybe even slipspace, similar to Halsey's theoretical hyperspatial AI? Even though the last we see of him is a pile of charred gibs, as long as part of his armor survives along with his consciousness, it might theoretically be able to rebuild his physical form. Or he could just ditch the squishy biological parts and walk around in an empty suit. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:32, 13 October 2014 (EDT)
::Honestly, as unlikely as it seems, I think they'll go with the "he's composed but comes out wrong" approach. The phrasing was specifically "(the Composer) will not work on my new form", which could mean any number of things. And comic visuals are notorious for being inaccurate, so the specifics of what we see in Escalation #10 can't entirely be relied on. I would prefer if they went out of their way to explain ''why'' the Composer won't work on him instead of it just being an acquired comic book superpower - given the Composer's nature, his neurology must've been radically changed to the extent the Composer cannot replicate it. Something that occurred to me is that he could've outsourced a large chunk of his cognitive processes to external substrates, ensuring part of him lives on even if his physical form is killed. Maybe his mind is running in his armor even more so than with ordinary Forerunners? Or maybe even slipspace, similar to Halsey's theoretical hyperspatial AI? Even though the last we see of him is a pile of charred gibs, as long as part of his armor survives along with his consciousness, it might theoretically be able to rebuild his physical form. Or he could just ditch the squishy biological parts and walk around in an empty suit. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:32, 13 October 2014 (EDT)


I'm glad they killed off the Didact, for now anyway. He was a bad villain done poorly from the very beginning, and I'd much rather see the Halo universe without him. Morhek hits it on the nail here. Why bring him back at all only to kill him off 3 issues later? He could have just died at the end of Halo 4.
I'm glad they killed off the Didact, for now anyway. He was a bad villain done poorly from the very beginning, and I'd much rather see the Halo universe without him. Morhek hits it on the nail here. Why bring him back at all only to kill him off 3 issues later? He could have just died at the end of Halo 4.
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:Replace the word "killed" with "contained" bro, since he's not dead. XD [[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]]([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 12:00, 25 September 2014 (EDT)
:Replace the word "killed" with "contained" bro, since he's not dead. XD [[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]]([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 12:00, 25 September 2014 (EDT)


:Honestly, they could've made the "Chief goes rogue" plot work a lot better if they'd had it happen because he somehow learned of ONI's shenanigans during the Kilo-Five trilogy and decided their influence within the UNSC had become too great (I could see him having a problem with their treatment of Halsey, for instance). As for Blue Team becoming a full-on ONI unit, I really hope that's not the case (and it doesn't quite look like that). --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 12:29, 25 September 2014 (EDT)
:Honestly, they could've made the "Chief goes rogue" plot work a lot better if they'd had it happen because he somehow learned of ONI's shenanigans during the Kilo-Five trilogy and decided their influence within the UNSC had become too great (I could see him having a problem with their treatment of Halsey, for instance). As for Blue Team becoming a full-on ONI unit, I really hope that's not the case (and it doesn't quite look like that). --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 12:29, 25 September 2014 (EDT)


I still don't have the paper copy of this issue since the comic shop I get if from has yet to get the shipment for some reason, so I'm relying on Halo canon's review for the scope. I like issue 10 at the same time it left me disappointed. I like how Kelly's speed was displayed when she avoided the Didact and how Static Carillion demonstrated what could take down the Didact (a powerful laser). I like how the Halo was able to detach a piece from itself (although I think it would have made more sense to teleport the Didact to some random spot on the Halo and detaching that instead). As for the planet the composer's forge is on, it looks kind of like Requiem but that's another issue. And finally I like some of the smaller details like the return of some UNSC Destroyers (even though there was one in Glasslands). However, after taking a deep look at the final story arc, all I can say is this - ''the next 72 hours'' was nothing more than '''filler'''. And not the good kind of filler like HE#7. I hate to say it but the only real "things" we got out of this entire story arc was John reuniting with blue team (which wasn't sh$t), Static Carillion, the Didact survived, and a lil bit of John's childhood. Other than that, the story does nothing to move the series forward. Instead it seems to have kept it stagnant. It's basically just a retelling of Halo 4's story but shorter. There's so much that Brian Reed could have done to help bring out this entire arc. If I was him I would have done it like this: Issue 1 - The chief is reunited w/ blue team while John's personality after Cortana's death is explored, Issue 2 - It is discovered that the Didact is still alive and blue team heads out to investigate, Issue 3 - In the ensuing fight to stop the Didact something devastating occurs that causes John to depart the UNSC or "leave" (in other words give us a reason as to why he won't stop). Instead, what we get is a whole story arc that just waste time repeating the same two stories (the Halo & the composer) again and in the end accomplishes nothing other than leave us mystified as to why the chief "left". So hopefully ''Exposure'' moves the story forward and Brian Reed doesn't screw that up too.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 12:38, 27 September 2014 (EDT)
I still don't have the paper copy of this issue since the comic shop I get if from has yet to get the shipment for some reason, so I'm relying on Halo canon's review for the scope. I like issue 10 at the same time it left me disappointed. I like how Kelly's speed was displayed when she avoided the Didact and how Static Carillion demonstrated what could take down the Didact (a powerful laser). I like how the Halo was able to detach a piece from itself (although I think it would have made more sense to teleport the Didact to some random spot on the Halo and detaching that instead). As for the planet the composer's forge is on, it looks kind of like Requiem but that's another issue. And finally I like some of the smaller details like the return of some UNSC Destroyers (even though there was one in Glasslands). However, after taking a deep look at the final story arc, all I can say is this - ''the next 72 hours'' was nothing more than '''filler'''. And not the good kind of filler like HE#7. I hate to say it but the only real "things" we got out of this entire story arc was John reuniting with blue team (which wasn't sh$t), Static Carillion, the Didact survived, and a lil bit of John's childhood. Other than that, the story does nothing to move the series forward. Instead it seems to have kept it stagnant. It's basically just a retelling of Halo 4's story but shorter. There's so much that Brian Reed could have done to help bring out this entire arc. If I was him I would have done it like this: Issue 1 - The chief is reunited w/ blue team while John's personality after Cortana's death is explored, Issue 2 - It is discovered that the Didact is still alive and blue team heads out to investigate, Issue 3 - In the ensuing fight to stop the Didact something devastating occurs that causes John to depart the UNSC or "leave" (in other words give us a reason as to why he won't stop). Instead, what we get is a whole story arc that just waste time repeating the same two stories (the Halo & the composer) again and in the end accomplishes nothing other than leave us mystified as to why the chief "left". So hopefully ''Exposure'' moves the story forward and Brian Reed doesn't screw that up too.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 12:38, 27 September 2014 (EDT)
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:I agree with pretty much everything you guys have already said, and though not Escalation-specific, if we don't see the whole "Chief rebelling against power hungry ONI to find rogue Halsey with the help of his best friend Thel and bring back/save Cortana" bit in the near future, I'd sum up nearly all the new stories recently with "wasted potential".  If they leave Cortana "dead" and/or (especially and) kill off/make an antagonist of Thel in Halo 5, I'm going to be ''very'' unhappy. Hopefully Thel's "how well do you know your friend" line from the trailer is as misleading as Escalation's preview descriptions. [[User:Alex T Snow|Alex T Snow]] ([[User talk:Alex T Snow|talk]]) 18:34, 1 October 2014 (EDT)
:I agree with pretty much everything you guys have already said, and though not Escalation-specific, if we don't see the whole "Chief rebelling against power hungry ONI to find rogue Halsey with the help of his best friend Thel and bring back/save Cortana" bit in the near future, I'd sum up nearly all the new stories recently with "wasted potential".  If they leave Cortana "dead" and/or (especially and) kill off/make an antagonist of Thel in Halo 5, I'm going to be ''very'' unhappy. Hopefully Thel's "how well do you know your friend" line from the trailer is as misleading as Escalation's preview descriptions. [[User:Alex T Snow|Alex T Snow]] ([[User talk:Alex T Snow|talk]]) 18:34, 1 October 2014 (EDT)


I have little to add to my previous complaints about this arc being schlocky, rushed and ultimately many kinds of pointless, but I don't think that's the core reason for my disappointment. I can deal with silliness and illogical situations as long as the story and characters are fulfilling. Where this arc really failed for me was the character beats. Blue Team has been separated from the Chief for so long and when they finally reunite there's next to no payoff to that. While Nylund was heavily action-centric, he still invested into the Spartans' more personal moments and interactions (for example, their reunion after Reach in ''First Strike'', where they've been separated for a couple of weeks only, depending on your frame of reference). None of that's in here. We don't see what any of them are thinking or feeling apart from the Chief's little near-death experience; instead, the Spartans are little more than interchangeable action figures. Or what about John's quest to find Halsey? He still didn't ask about her at the end. And as I said in my Issue #8 rant, what is he thinking seeing a long-lost Spartan compatriot in the Security Council? And why does he choose to leave the UNSC behind with seemingly no incentive at all? This arc was full of missed opportunities and really highlighted the weaknesses of the comic format in comparison to a novel — at the very least, "The Next 72 Hours" should've been its own dedicated graphic novel and not a small part of a serialized comic. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:09, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
I have little to add to my previous complaints about this arc being schlocky, rushed and ultimately many kinds of pointless, but I don't think that's the core reason for my disappointment. I can deal with silliness and illogical situations as long as the story and characters are fulfilling. Where this arc really failed for me was the character beats. Blue Team has been separated from the Chief for so long and when they finally reunite there's next to no payoff to that. While Nylund was heavily action-centric, he still invested into the Spartans' more personal moments and interactions (for example, their reunion after Reach in ''First Strike'', where they've been separated for a couple of weeks only, depending on your frame of reference). None of that's in here. We don't see what any of them are thinking or feeling apart from the Chief's little near-death experience; instead, the Spartans are little more than interchangeable action figures. Or what about John's quest to find Halsey? He still didn't ask about her at the end. And as I said in my Issue #8 rant, what is he thinking seeing a long-lost Spartan compatriot in the Security Council? And why does he choose to leave the UNSC behind with seemingly no incentive at all? This arc was full of missed opportunities and really highlighted the weaknesses of the comic format in comparison to a novel — at the very least, "The Next 72 Hours" should've been its own dedicated graphic novel and not a small part of a serialized comic. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:09, 2 October 2014 (EDT)


:All I can say is that Brian Reed (just like Karen Travis) failed to show that he is a worthy writer for the series. He placed no emphasis on character development and could care-less to do so.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 02:36, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
:All I can say is that Brian Reed (just like Karen Travis) failed to show that he is a worthy writer for the series. He placed no emphasis on character development and could care-less to do so.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 02:36, 2 October 2014 (EDT)


::Honestly, I don't think Reed is as callous and uncaring as Traviss who flat-out states she doesn't care about anything in the 'verses she writes about, it's just that he's not a very good writer and can't seem to be able to write things outside the Marvel superhero comic formula — which works brilliantly for Spider-Man but not for Halo, whose military sci-fi nature calls for a less over-the-top and in-your-face approach.  As I said before, he's like a kid playing with action figures. Most of the time, that is; he did a pretty good character story with Escalation #7 and his portrayal of Halsey in ''Spartan Ops'' was decent enough (though I'm prepared to take that back if he turns her into a villain). But then you have the bad parts like the dissonance between how Palmer is portrayed and how she comes across (as well as the retconning of her rank), his apparent scorn at anything military (of which the anarchic nature of the Spartan branch or the Chief leaving the UNSC is probably a result), nonsensical comic book schlock like Ilsa Zane's augmentations, his total disinterest at the science and technology of the setting beyond magical MacGuffins, or his one-dimensional cartoon villain portrayal of the Didact. The list goes on. Point is, I would definitely be happy if they got someone else in his place as soon as possible. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:12, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
::Honestly, I don't think Reed is as callous and uncaring as Traviss who flat-out states she doesn't care about anything in the 'verses she writes about, it's just that he's not a very good writer and can't seem to be able to write things outside the Marvel superhero comic formula — which works brilliantly for Spider-Man but not for Halo, whose military sci-fi nature calls for a less over-the-top and in-your-face approach.  As I said before, he's like a kid playing with action figures. Most of the time, that is; he did a pretty good character story with Escalation #7 and his portrayal of Halsey in ''Spartan Ops'' was decent enough (though I'm prepared to take that back if he turns her into a villain). But then you have the bad parts like the dissonance between how Palmer is portrayed and how she comes across (as well as the retconning of her rank), his apparent scorn at anything military (of which the anarchic nature of the Spartan branch or the Chief leaving the UNSC is probably a result), nonsensical comic book schlock like Ilsa Zane's augmentations, his total disinterest at the science and technology of the setting beyond magical MacGuffins, or his one-dimensional cartoon villain portrayal of the Didact. The list goes on. Point is, I would definitely be happy if they got someone else in his place as soon as possible. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:12, 2 October 2014 (EDT)


:::True. I just think the way he handled black team was "Traviss-like" lol. But yeah Reed is definitely writing from a superhero perspective with little emphasis placed on realism or plausibility. Ilsa Zane was a clear example of an invincible supervillian (surviving in the cold vacuum of space w/o a suit???). And the Didact's portrayal was extremely disappointing (especially his appearance). Reed has a lot to make up for. I may be out of the loop on this but when/where was Palmer's rank retconned?--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 09:08, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
:::True. I just think the way he handled black team was "Traviss-like" lol. But yeah Reed is definitely writing from a superhero perspective with little emphasis placed on realism or plausibility. Ilsa Zane was a clear example of an invincible supervillian (surviving in the cold vacuum of space w/o a suit???). And the Didact's portrayal was extremely disappointing (especially his appearance). Reed has a lot to make up for. I may be out of the loop on this but when/where was Palmer's rank retconned?--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 09:08, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
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::::On the ''Halo 4'' website, Palmer's profile said she used to be a lieutenant when she was still a Marine. ''Halo: Initiation'' instead established that she was a lance corporal by the time she was recruited to be a Spartan. Which raises the question of how they were able to gauge her purportedly excellent leadership qualities when her rank would provide no leadership training nor experience. I speculate Reed changed this in response to criticisms about Palmer never actually getting her hands dirty in ''Spartan Ops'' and he probably thought a lowly grunt was more relatable than an officer, without considering the further implications at all. Though almost certainly unintentional, this casts her behavior in a new light - maybe she acts so erratic and unprofessional because she ''is'' overpromoted and grossly underqualified, and the only reason she got her job is because Osman wanted someone she could easily order around on ''Infinity''.
::::On the ''Halo 4'' website, Palmer's profile said she used to be a lieutenant when she was still a Marine. ''Halo: Initiation'' instead established that she was a lance corporal by the time she was recruited to be a Spartan. Which raises the question of how they were able to gauge her purportedly excellent leadership qualities when her rank would provide no leadership training nor experience. I speculate Reed changed this in response to criticisms about Palmer never actually getting her hands dirty in ''Spartan Ops'' and he probably thought a lowly grunt was more relatable than an officer, without considering the further implications at all. Though almost certainly unintentional, this casts her behavior in a new light - maybe she acts so erratic and unprofessional because she ''is'' overpromoted and grossly underqualified, and the only reason she got her job is because Osman wanted someone she could easily order around on ''Infinity''.


::::''Additionally'', it's clear the Spartan branch or their lack of formal ranks wasn't a thing by the time the final ''Halo 4'' campaign script was laid down. Del Rio refers to Palmer as a lieutenant when he orders her to arrest the Chief which suggests she's still Navy. They later retconned this so that Del Rio is apparently addressing an off-screen Navy lieutenant, which breaks the scene in basically every way possible ("I'll ignore the only other superhuman individual on the bridge and while it looks like I'm yelling and gesturing at said superhuman individual I'm actually addressing a nobody we don't even see"). You have to wonder if making the Spartans into the bizarre, anarchic bunch they are now was really worth it. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 13:20, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
::::''Additionally'', it's clear the Spartan branch or their lack of formal ranks wasn't a thing by the time the final ''Halo 4'' campaign script was laid down. Del Rio refers to Palmer as a lieutenant when he orders her to arrest the Chief which suggests she's still Navy. They later retconned this so that Del Rio is apparently addressing an off-screen Navy lieutenant, which breaks the scene in basically every way possible ("I'll ignore the only other superhuman individual on the bridge and while it looks like I'm yelling and gesturing at said superhuman individual I'm actually addressing a nobody we don't even see"). You have to wonder if making the Spartans into the bizarre, anarchic bunch they are now was really worth it. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 13:20, 2 October 2014 (EDT)


:::::And let's not forget that adding a massive Spartan branch of hundreds of regular people who are basically regular soldiers in fancy armour (so why don't they give every soldier augmentations and Mjolnir?), aside from making them common place and far less special, it basically writes ODSTs out of existence. I mean, space Marines are pretty badass, but then you have ODSTs, who drop from orbit <strike>and doesn't afraid of anything</strike>, while the few and far between Spartans are basically gods. Chief's arrival at Crow's Nest for example, among countless others. Now it's "lulz send in the Spartans. a dozen died today? oh thats fine, we have 500 more." [[User:Alex T Snow|Alex T Snow]] ([[User talk:Alex T Snow|talk]]) 23:06, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
:::::And let's not forget that adding a massive Spartan branch of hundreds of regular people who are basically regular soldiers in fancy armour (so why don't they give every soldier augmentations and Mjolnir?), aside from making them common place and far less special, it basically writes ODSTs out of existence. I mean, space Marines are pretty badass, but then you have ODSTs, who drop from orbit <s>and doesn't afraid of anything</s>, while the few and far between Spartans are basically gods. Chief's arrival at Crow's Nest for example, among countless others. Now it's "lulz send in the Spartans. a dozen died today? oh thats fine, we have 500 more." [[User:Alex T Snow|Alex T Snow]] ([[User talk:Alex T Snow|talk]]) 23:06, 2 October 2014 (EDT)


::::::Those are my two biggest problems with the Spartan-IVs for me, summed up quite nicely. One, they render the ODSTs obsolete, those wonderful mavericks with a badass rep of their own and already resented the IIs for their effectiveness. And two, so far, not a single one of them has sufficiently proven to me as a fan that they deserve to be Spartans, that they have that nearly unquantifiable spark of Spartan-ness. They still feel like soldiers or Marines in powered armour. Escalation did some good work, furthering Thorne as a character and introducing Ray, who seems capable. But it seems like every step forward is accompanied by two steps back - Scruggs murders his entire team, apparently with little effort. They get squandered dicking around looking for the Spirit of Fire, which turns out to not actually be ready to return to the plot yet. Then the IVs plot gets unceremoniously dumped in favour of showing us a complete divergence with the Chief. And the next arc of Escalation sounds as if it's going to be set up for Nightfall, so it's not their story again. I noticed a few minutes ago that I automatically corrected SPARTAN to Spartan. That's how it feels - they don't feel like capitalised SPARTANS like the Chief, Tom and Lucy and the criminally abandoned Saber Team did. They haven't earned those capitals. And the story could have been about that, proving they have what it takes - that they don't have the experience of their predecessors, or quite the physique, but they have that spark, that drive to get the mission done, to save others by taking the burden upon their own shoulders, to achieve the impossible. But it's all setup and no payoff. It all feels like a waste. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 05:45, 3 October 2014 (EDT)
::::::Those are my two biggest problems with the Spartan-IVs for me, summed up quite nicely. One, they render the ODSTs obsolete, those wonderful mavericks with a badass rep of their own and already resented the IIs for their effectiveness. And two, so far, not a single one of them has sufficiently proven to me as a fan that they deserve to be Spartans, that they have that nearly unquantifiable spark of Spartan-ness. They still feel like soldiers or Marines in powered armour. Escalation did some good work, furthering Thorne as a character and introducing Ray, who seems capable. But it seems like every step forward is accompanied by two steps back - Scruggs murders his entire team, apparently with little effort. They get squandered dicking around looking for the Spirit of Fire, which turns out to not actually be ready to return to the plot yet. Then the IVs plot gets unceremoniously dumped in favour of showing us a complete divergence with the Chief. And the next arc of Escalation sounds as if it's going to be set up for Nightfall, so it's not their story again. I noticed a few minutes ago that I automatically corrected SPARTAN to Spartan. That's how it feels - they don't feel like capitalised SPARTANS like the Chief, Tom and Lucy and the criminally abandoned Saber Team did. They haven't earned those capitals. And the story could have been about that, proving they have what it takes - that they don't have the experience of their predecessors, or quite the physique, but they have that spark, that drive to get the mission done, to save others by taking the burden upon their own shoulders, to achieve the impossible. But it's all setup and no payoff. It all feels like a waste. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 05:45, 3 October 2014 (EDT)


:::::Got it. 343I seems to come up with the silliest explanations for things and can't seem to stick to the script. They need better writers and coordination in order to avoid this type of confusion again.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 10:27, 11 October 2014 (EDT)
:::::Got it. 343I seems to come up with the silliest explanations for things and can't seem to stick to the script. They need better writers and coordination in order to avoid this type of confusion again.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 10:27, 11 October 2014 (EDT)
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This issue looks promising since Mr. Reed is taking a hiatus (I believe) and Thorne's story has always been strong.{{unsigned|SamGall}}
This issue looks promising since Mr. Reed is taking a hiatus (I believe) and Thorne's story has always been strong.{{unsigned|SamGall}}


:Reed's still co-writing it, but I'm willing to give him the benefit of the doubt here (while Duffy Bodreau is a complete unknown to me at this point). I agree that Reed's handled Thorne decently enough so far, and a lot of the problems with ''The Next 72 Hours'' can be pinned on the fact he tackled characters people are used to reading about in much more detail (Blue Team and the Didact). When those characters get reintroduced in a very condensed and hectically paced comic book and their portrayals are as flat as cardboard, it's no surprise people are feeling let down. Meanwhile, Thorne is Reed's own baby and has always occupied that same comic-bookish narrative framework without a more nuanced portrayal (such as a novel) to weigh against. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:24, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
:Reed's still co-writing it, but I'm willing to give him the benefit of the doubt here (while Duffy Bodreau is a complete unknown to me at this point). I agree that Reed's handled Thorne decently enough so far, and a lot of the problems with ''The Next 72 Hours'' can be pinned on the fact he tackled characters people are used to reading about in much more detail (Blue Team and the Didact). When those characters get reintroduced in a very condensed and hectically paced comic book and their portrayals are as flat as cardboard, it's no surprise people are feeling let down. Meanwhile, Thorne is Reed's own baby and has always occupied that same comic-bookish narrative framework without a more nuanced portrayal (such as a novel) to weigh against. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:24, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
::I want Thorne to ask Ray out. <.< >.> They'd be a cute couple.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 03:46, 2 October 2014 (EDT)
::I want Thorne to ask Ray out. <.< >.> They'd be a cute couple.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 03:46, 2 October 2014 (EDT)


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==Issue 11==
==Issue 11==
File:HaloEscalation11.jpgPretty on the outside...ugly on the inside.
File:HaloEscalation11.jpgPretty on the outside...ugly on the inside.
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Did anyone notice that the IVs seemed to use halo 5 guardians new abilities? It says booster pack in our article but... it looked to me like the halo 5 ability. And also Thorne had camo. There might be the, sneaking up on Ray issue although motion tracker doesn't show when you zoom in normally. [[User:Erickyboo|Erickyboo]] ([[User talk:Erickyboo|talk]]) 13:38, 22 October 2014 (EDT)
Did anyone notice that the IVs seemed to use halo 5 guardians new abilities? It says booster pack in our article but... it looked to me like the halo 5 ability. And also Thorne had camo. There might be the, sneaking up on Ray issue although motion tracker doesn't show when you zoom in normally. [[User:Erickyboo|Erickyboo]] ([[User talk:Erickyboo|talk]]) 13:38, 22 October 2014 (EDT)
:They clearly don't have any sort of external equipment - I did consider the wording but thought "booster pack" without a link to the article about the H4 gear would be neutral enough. Personally I thought it was just another artist goof (the art is more schizophrenic than ever - some panels look passable while others might as well have been drawn by a ten-year-old). Seriously 343i, with Microsoft backing you up you can't get better artists than this? --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 14:06, 22 October 2014 (EDT)
:They clearly don't have any sort of external equipment - I did consider the wording but thought "booster pack" without a link to the article about the H4 gear would be neutral enough. Personally I thought it was just another artist goof (the art is more schizophrenic than ever - some panels look passable while others might as well have been drawn by a ten-year-old). Seriously 343i, with Microsoft backing you up you can't get better artists than this? --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 14:06, 22 October 2014 (EDT)


::I like to concur. The art is rather atrocious. It's good in some panels but terrible in others. I was very disappointed with it and I also noticed that the characters are inconsistent with the previous issues. Once again, Thorne & Ray look too different from the other issues and it's extremely annoying. It's kind of like Renee Zellweger's new look versus her look a month ago. After reading through the comic, I found the story to be interesting and I like the mystery generated so far. I like the action and I see that this new spartan ability was put into action, though there's no real explanation behind it. I did find the pacing to be slightly fast but I guess that's what we'll get with a short two-part story. Overall I didn't have a big issue with this issue except for the art.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 20:39, 22 October 2014 (EDT)
::I like to concur. The art is rather atrocious. It's good in some panels but terrible in others. I was very disappointed with it and I also noticed that the characters are inconsistent with the previous issues. Once again, Thorne & Ray look too different from the other issues and it's extremely annoying. It's kind of like Renee Zellweger's new look versus her look a month ago. After reading through the comic, I found the story to be interesting and I like the mystery generated so far. I like the action and I see that this new spartan ability was put into action, though there's no real explanation behind it. I did find the pacing to be slightly fast but I guess that's what we'll get with a short two-part story. Overall I didn't have a big issue with this issue except for the art.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 20:39, 22 October 2014 (EDT)
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::::Actually that was changed per [http://www.halopedia.org/index.php?title=M805X_thruster_pack&curid=172095&diff=1099690&oldid=1099511 Jugus] and I can't disagree. The thruster pack module isn't shown on their armor nor is there any indication of it. It looks similar but last time I remember, the thruster pack wasn't used as a melee tactic nor could I pull it off in Halo 4. It doesn't move fast enough or straight enough. I believe it's the new H5 Spartan ability and I think 343i included it in this issue as a clue or hint as to what it's capable of in gameplay. Maybe.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 12:40, 24 October 2014 (EDT)
::::Actually that was changed per [http://www.halopedia.org/index.php?title=M805X_thruster_pack&curid=172095&diff=1099690&oldid=1099511 Jugus] and I can't disagree. The thruster pack module isn't shown on their armor nor is there any indication of it. It looks similar but last time I remember, the thruster pack wasn't used as a melee tactic nor could I pull it off in Halo 4. It doesn't move fast enough or straight enough. I believe it's the new H5 Spartan ability and I think 343i included it in this issue as a clue or hint as to what it's capable of in gameplay. Maybe.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 12:40, 24 October 2014 (EDT)


As for overall thoughts (ignoring the art which is still terrible - I suspect they had schedule problems given the extra "artists" in addition to the regulars), the issue was pretty much as I suspected it to be in the previous section: inoffensive and lukewarm filler I've come to expect from ''Infinity''/SPARTAN-IV-centric stories. For all my complaints about them ignoring the Nylund-era characters, it's starting to seem like a good thing when they're handled as horribly as they were in "72 Hours". I do have to give the writer props for not using a Forerunner artifact of the week too. And I kind of like the recent focus on the post-Covenant society, which makes the Covenant appear less like a sterile monotonous entity and more of a very old, lived-in interstellar civilization with its own history and fringe elements like the "wretched hive of scum and villainy" on Ven III. I would actually like the unidentified humanoid slaves to be a new race: after all, the Librarian indexed over 100 sapient species and the Covenant may have encompassed vassals that were unimportant in the big picture for one reason or the other (small population/population growth, recently discovered, homeworld too far away, limited utility to the Covenant in duties like warfare, etc). --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:34, 24 October 2014 (EDT)
As for overall thoughts (ignoring the art which is still terrible - I suspect they had schedule problems given the extra "artists" in addition to the regulars), the issue was pretty much as I suspected it to be in the previous section: inoffensive and lukewarm filler I've come to expect from ''Infinity''/SPARTAN-IV-centric stories. For all my complaints about them ignoring the Nylund-era characters, it's starting to seem like a good thing when they're handled as horribly as they were in "72 Hours". I do have to give the writer props for not using a Forerunner artifact of the week too. And I kind of like the recent focus on the post-Covenant society, which makes the Covenant appear less like a sterile monotonous entity and more of a very old, lived-in interstellar civilization with its own history and fringe elements like the "wretched hive of scum and villainy" on Ven III. I would actually like the unidentified humanoid slaves to be a new race: after all, the Librarian indexed over 100 sapient species and the Covenant may have encompassed vassals that were unimportant in the big picture for one reason or the other (small population/population growth, recently discovered, homeworld too far away, limited utility to the Covenant in duties like warfare, etc). --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:34, 24 October 2014 (EDT)


:The Covenant enemies that we encounter consistently sound like the most interesting characters - the capitalist Sangheili mercenary Vata 'Gajat, and now the planet full of Kig-Yar slavers. This, to me, is what Escalation should have been - scrap the Spirit of Fire teasing, scrap the non-story with the Didact, just have the UNSC having to deal with a new galactic community created by the Covenant's collapse. That would have interested me enough to try to buy them. As it is, it has good ideas but is wasting them to tease other things - possible foreshadowing something with the SoF, maybe a Halo Wars 2; teasing Halo 5 and why the Chief apparently left, which I'm still vague on; and now what seems to be setting up the events of Nightfall.  
:The Covenant enemies that we encounter consistently sound like the most interesting characters - the capitalist Sangheili mercenary Vata 'Gajat, and now the planet full of Kig-Yar slavers. This, to me, is what Escalation should have been - scrap the Spirit of Fire teasing, scrap the non-story with the Didact, just have the UNSC having to deal with a new galactic community created by the Covenant's collapse. That would have interested me enough to try to buy them. As it is, it has good ideas but is wasting them to tease other things - possible foreshadowing something with the SoF, maybe a Halo Wars 2; teasing Halo 5 and why the Chief apparently left, which I'm still vague on; and now what seems to be setting up the events of Nightfall.  
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:As for whether it's a new species or not...I don't know which would be worse, that it is or that it isn't. If they are, then 343i are blowing the introduction of a previously unseen species that could widen the galactic community and open up new storytelling possibilities as a throwaway background appearance. If they're not, then they're woefully drawn human or Sangheili women, which is only slightly less inexcusable.
:As for whether it's a new species or not...I don't know which would be worse, that it is or that it isn't. If they are, then 343i are blowing the introduction of a previously unseen species that could widen the galactic community and open up new storytelling possibilities as a throwaway background appearance. If they're not, then they're woefully drawn human or Sangheili women, which is only slightly less inexcusable.


:343i have said they want to tie their media together more than Bungie ever bothered, but this highlights an inherent problem with that - if you want some things to be able to standalone, then the things that tie them together can't. Better to go the Nylund route - have self-contained one-off bits of media that, while they can sit comfortably alongside the other stuff, don't need you to play the games, and in turn don't need to be read ''to'' play the game, as happened with Halo 4. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 05:23, 24 October 2014 (EDT)
:343i have said they want to tie their media together more than Bungie ever bothered, but this highlights an inherent problem with that - if you want some things to be able to standalone, then the things that tie them together can't. Better to go the Nylund route - have self-contained one-off bits of media that, while they can sit comfortably alongside the other stuff, don't need you to play the games, and in turn don't need to be read ''to'' play the game, as happened with Halo 4. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 05:23, 24 October 2014 (EDT)


=== "Unknown" enslaved species ===
=== "Unknown" enslaved species ===
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Is it possible that they are actually just [[Han 'Chavamee|female sangheili]]? [[User:Lord Susto|<span style="color:red">Lord Susto</span>]] 15:13, 22 October 2014 (EDT)
Is it possible that they are actually just [[Han (Sangheili)|female sangheili]]? [[User:Lord Susto|<span style="color:red">Lord Susto</span>]] 15:13, 22 October 2014 (EDT)


:They could be female sangheili considering the one with the red drape has hands/claws similar to sangheili but at the same time they look too "human" and have "noses" similar to forerunners. But really, I don't know. Just another mystery 343i threw at us.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 20:19, 22 October 2014 (EDT)
:They could be female sangheili considering the one with the red drape has hands/claws similar to sangheili but at the same time they look too "human" and have "noses" similar to forerunners. But really, I don't know. Just another mystery 343i threw at us.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 20:19, 22 October 2014 (EDT)
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Could it possibly be a subspecies of [[San'Shyuum]]? They look vaguely like the ones from the terminal. Perhaps another portion of the population escaped their homeworld's destruction and changed over the past few thousand years? --<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC">[[User:Lordofmonsterisland|<font color="green">Am I a Lion, or a Lamb? Or a Boy?</font>]] <sup>[[User talk:Lordofmonsterisland|<font color="red">Saint o</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Lordofmonsterisland|<font color="black">r Sinner?</font>]] [http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/User:Lordofmonsterisland <font color=#777777>The Lost Books</font>]</sup></span> 18:21, 23 October 2014 (EDT)
Could it possibly be a subspecies of [[San'Shyuum]]? They look vaguely like the ones from the terminal. Perhaps another portion of the population escaped their homeworld's destruction and changed over the past few thousand years? --<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC">[[User:Lordofmonsterisland|<font color="green">Am I a Lion, or a Lamb? Or a Boy?</font>]] <sup>[[User talk:Lordofmonsterisland|<font color="red">Saint o</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Lordofmonsterisland|<font color="black">r Sinner?</font>]] [http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/User:Lordofmonsterisland <font color=#777777>The Lost Books</font>]</sup></span> 18:21, 23 October 2014 (EDT)


:Female Prophets would be too valuable to keep as slaves, considering how rare they are. And introducing a new humanoid species as Jackal slaves sounds...anticlimactic. My guess is that they're either terribly drawn humans, or they're female Sangheili based on the Han type, which I disapprove of. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 18:26, 23 October 2014 (EDT)
:Female Prophets would be too valuable to keep as slaves, considering how rare they are. And introducing a new humanoid species as Jackal slaves sounds...anticlimactic. My guess is that they're either terribly drawn humans, or they're female Sangheili based on the Han type, which I disapprove of. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 18:26, 23 October 2014 (EDT)


::Maybe they're just a never-before-heard-of species living in the periphery of the Covenant's former empire? Maybe one thing or the other made them ill-suited for incorporation into the Covenant (or they were just an insignificant slave race with a very small population used mainly for manual labor), or the Covenant at large never even got to hear about them (I can see there being a thriving and lawless fringe element to the Covenant's remote regions even during its height). I wouldn't actually disapprove of this as it would make the universe feel bigger and more lived-in. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:28, 24 October 2014 (EDT)
::Maybe they're just a never-before-heard-of species living in the periphery of the Covenant's former empire? Maybe one thing or the other made them ill-suited for incorporation into the Covenant (or they were just an insignificant slave race with a very small population used mainly for manual labor), or the Covenant at large never even got to hear about them (I can see there being a thriving and lawless fringe element to the Covenant's remote regions even during its height). I wouldn't actually disapprove of this as it would make the universe feel bigger and more lived-in. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:28, 24 October 2014 (EDT)


:::I'd love some new species to flesh out the universe beyond the Covenant. I'd be thrilled. I've been eager to see just who was flying the ship that crashed on Alpha Halo since we found out it wasn't Covenant. But I'm skeptical about them being a new species because they look ''too'' humanoid. We already have the Forerunners to fill the humanoid alien and ancient astronaut niches, and Halo's generally been very good about giving us diverse body types in its extraterrestrial lifeforms. Given its proclivity in science fiction (Star Wars and Star Trek just to name the two obvious ones) and its association with a restricted budget, I see that kind of thing as reflecting a lack of imagination. If 343i were going to add a new species, even a minor background one, they could do anything - a race of hexapods that look like insectoid centaurs! Space sloths who walk on their giant arms! Sentient slugs with robotic arms! Anything that doesn't just look a bit like us. I (just barely) buy the Forerunners looking like us, given the long buildup of that trope and the tampering of the Precursors, but I'd shake my head if this was the best 343i could do for another race. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 06:07, 25 October 2014 (EDT)
:::I'd love some new species to flesh out the universe beyond the Covenant. I'd be thrilled. I've been eager to see just who was flying the ship that crashed on Alpha Halo since we found out it wasn't Covenant. But I'm skeptical about them being a new species because they look ''too'' humanoid. We already have the Forerunners to fill the humanoid alien and ancient astronaut niches, and Halo's generally been very good about giving us diverse body types in its extraterrestrial lifeforms. Given its proclivity in science fiction (Star Wars and Star Trek just to name the two obvious ones) and its association with a restricted budget, I see that kind of thing as reflecting a lack of imagination. If 343i were going to add a new species, even a minor background one, they could do anything - a race of hexapods that look like insectoid centaurs! Space sloths who walk on their giant arms! Sentient slugs with robotic arms! Anything that doesn't just look a bit like us. I (just barely) buy the Forerunners looking like us, given the long buildup of that trope and the tampering of the Precursors, but I'd shake my head if this was the best 343i could do for another race. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 06:07, 25 October 2014 (EDT)


::They may be female Prophets. The Stewards look quite similar, plus in ''Broken Circle'' it is mentioned that younger San'Shyuum bear a striking resemblance to humans. - [[User:NightHammer|NightHammer]] ([[User talk:NightHammer|talk]]) 16:47, 7 November 2014 (EST)
::They may be female Prophets. The Stewards look quite similar, plus in ''Broken Circle'' it is mentioned that younger San'Shyuum bear a striking resemblance to humans. - [[User:NightHammer|NightHammer]] ([[User talk:NightHammer|talk]]) 16:47, 7 November 2014 (EST)
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{{Quote|I've often found it slightly disturbing that the humans managed to hold the covenant off for over 30 years. Could it be that the Covenant was fighting a war on 2 fronts? 343i seems determined to hing at a new species. First the unknown ship on on Alpha Halo, then the Humanoids in Escalation, now this. Surely they're building up to something. |<s>Jugus</s> Weeping Angel<sub>whoops sorry about that</sub>, [[Forum:Halo: Broken Circle]]}}
{{Quote|I've often found it slightly disturbing that the humans managed to hold the covenant off for over 30 years. Could it be that the Covenant was fighting a war on 2 fronts? 343i seems determined to hing at a new species. First the unknown ship on on Alpha Halo, then the Humanoids in Escalation, now this. Surely they're building up to something. |<s>Jugus</s> Weeping Angel<sub>whoops sorry about that</sub>, [[Forum:Halo: Broken Circle]]}}


You've just reminded me of another problem I have with the Escalation humanoids being a new race - why haven't humanity ever seen them before? The Covenant threw everything it had against us - Unggoy slaves, Kig-Yar mercs, and Jiralhanae, to boster the Sangheili. If they had a population of other slave workers, why did they not field any? You can't really argue it's because they were unsuited to it - the Unggoy show that the Covenant had no regard for that kind of thing. And the Skirmishers were nearly wiped out by the ferocity of Reach alone, so you can't even argue that the Covenant didn't want to waste them. It literally makes no sense for them to exist...and yet, there they apparently are. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 07:14, 28 October 2014 (EDT)
You've just reminded me of another problem I have with the Escalation humanoids being a new race - why haven't humanity ever seen them before? The Covenant threw everything it had against us - Unggoy slaves, Kig-Yar mercs, and Jiralhanae, to boster the Sangheili. If they had a population of other slave workers, why did they not field any? You can't really argue it's because they were unsuited to it - the Unggoy show that the Covenant had no regard for that kind of thing. And the Skirmishers were nearly wiped out by the ferocity of Reach alone, so you can't even argue that the Covenant didn't want to waste them. It literally makes no sense for them to exist...and yet, there they apparently are. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 07:14, 28 October 2014 (EDT)


:Every species in the Covenant has a role they are best at, and brings something to the military that the others can't. For the Unggoy it's sheer numbers. They reproduce incredibly fast, which means there's always more to throw at the enemy. This other species, if they are in fact a client species of the Covenant, likely don't have that same ability.--[[User:Soul reaper|Soul reaper]] ([[User talk:Soul reaper|talk]]) 08:34, 28 October 2014 (EDT)
:Every species in the Covenant has a role they are best at, and brings something to the military that the others can't. For the Unggoy it's sheer numbers. They reproduce incredibly fast, which means there's always more to throw at the enemy. This other species, if they are in fact a client species of the Covenant, likely don't have that same ability.--[[User:Soul reaper|Soul reaper]] ([[User talk:Soul reaper|talk]]) 08:34, 28 October 2014 (EDT)
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::@Morhek: just a lil' correction, that's Weeping Angel you're quoting there, not me. Other than that I kind of agree with Soul reaper on this. Maybe the humanoids just had a tiny reproduction rate and were more useless than Grunts in combat. Or they are a ''very'' recent discovery. Dunno really. I am bothered by a great many things, many of them seemingly frivolous or indiscernible to most. For instance: the way they changed the Mark VI's shoulder vent thingies in H2A, making them look like a bizarre, useless ornamental part instead of a functional one. Or the way 343i insists on using their hideous alien and armor designs in everything as opposed to portraying variety in the former and starting the latter from scratch completely. Within ''Escalation #11'', the one major bit that stuck out to me was the way Ray apparently forgot about her motion tracker in the end. With the previous issues, the list is much greater as can be seen above (and I was holding back with the complaints).
::@Morhek: just a lil' correction, that's Weeping Angel you're quoting there, not me. Other than that I kind of agree with Soul reaper on this. Maybe the humanoids just had a tiny reproduction rate and were more useless than Grunts in combat. Or they are a ''very'' recent discovery. Dunno really. I am bothered by a great many things, many of them seemingly frivolous or indiscernible to most. For instance: the way they changed the Mark VI's shoulder vent thingies in H2A, making them look like a bizarre, useless ornamental part instead of a functional one. Or the way 343i insists on using their hideous alien and armor designs in everything as opposed to portraying variety in the former and starting the latter from scratch completely. Within ''Escalation #11'', the one major bit that stuck out to me was the way Ray apparently forgot about her motion tracker in the end. With the previous issues, the list is much greater as can be seen above (and I was holding back with the complaints).


::But for some reason, the new aliens don't bother me, at least not nearly as much. I saw the alien slaves and was like "a new species? Wait, they look kinda like un-mutated Forerunners might look. Probably not though. Not terribly original but sci-fi aliens rarely are.". I could see why people might have a problem with them coexisting with the Covenant, though one can easily contrive a bunch of explanations that are more fulfilling than a lot of the patchwork justifications 343i has come up with for other matters (some of them found in above posts). Yes, I would also like to see more ''truly alien'' aliens in Halo. I would love to see them explore the Lekgolo more. And I disliked the way they made humans and Forerunners into distinct species, which feels redundant. Would've been much more natural had they been an altered offshoot of humanity (something that was hinted at by the Librarian's comments about Earth and the Forerunners' own mysteries in ''Iris''). But now that the Forerunners are what they are... somehow this new species doesn't annoy me that much. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 15:17, 28 October 2014 (EDT)
::But for some reason, the new aliens don't bother me, at least not nearly as much. I saw the alien slaves and was like "a new species? Wait, they look kinda like un-mutated Forerunners might look. Probably not though. Not terribly original but sci-fi aliens rarely are.". I could see why people might have a problem with them coexisting with the Covenant, though one can easily contrive a bunch of explanations that are more fulfilling than a lot of the patchwork justifications 343i has come up with for other matters (some of them found in above posts). Yes, I would also like to see more ''truly alien'' aliens in Halo. I would love to see them explore the Lekgolo more. And I disliked the way they made humans and Forerunners into distinct species, which feels redundant. Would've been much more natural had they been an altered offshoot of humanity (something that was hinted at by the Librarian's comments about Earth and the Forerunners' own mysteries in ''Iris''). But now that the Forerunners are what they are... somehow this new species doesn't annoy me that much. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 15:17, 28 October 2014 (EDT)
:::Another popular theory is that they're just shaven female [[Jiralhanae]].[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 18:37, 7 November 2014 (EST)
:::Another popular theory is that they're just shaven female [[Jiralhanae]].[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 18:37, 7 November 2014 (EST)
::::Can't. unsee. Damn... [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 20:27, 7 November 2014 (EST)
::::Can't. unsee. Damn... [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 20:27, 7 November 2014 (EST)
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:Son. Of. A.
:Son. Of. A.
:Okay. There's a "fringe." Okay.
:Okay. There's a "fringe." Okay.
:Still processing this, trying to decide whether I feel disappointed, infuriated, or alright with it. Leaning towards fury at the moment, but that may shift either way. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 21:27, 10 November 2014 (EST)
:Still processing this, trying to decide whether I feel disappointed, infuriated, or alright with it. Leaning towards fury at the moment, but that may shift either way. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 21:27, 10 November 2014 (EST)


::I kind of suspected that there were other lesser Covenant species, but I expected more than such a humanoid guy... Too common in sci-fi. [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 21:39, 10 November 2014 (EST)
::I kind of suspected that there were other lesser Covenant species, but I expected more than such a humanoid guy... Too common in sci-fi. [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 21:39, 10 November 2014 (EST)


:::I understand the rationale for having a humanoid alien character in Nightfall instead of the regular species that would take the role of a trader intermediary, Kig-yar - budget restrictions, and the need to make it believable as a living creature and not a prop. Unfortunately, understanding is not agreement. For the We Are ODST ad, Microsoft commissioned a full-sized Brute prop, with working facial movement. This is a much bigger enterprise, and one that needs to tie into the greater canon, so having Jackal traders would have admirably tied them together. And, being much less humanoid than a Brute, or even these Yonhet guys, there was less risk of falling into the uncanny valley. As it is, this is the third humanoid species in the Halo universe, including humanity itself, and I'm worried we're going to see Ferengi next. The animal kingdom is full of diverse body types that have been successful in their own niches, that I'd love to see achieve sentience. Get creative! What would an intelligent species of cephalopod look like, with body armour, weapons and ornamentation?  -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 22:12, 10 November 2014 (EST)
:::I understand the rationale for having a humanoid alien character in Nightfall instead of the regular species that would take the role of a trader intermediary, Kig-yar - budget restrictions, and the need to make it believable as a living creature and not a prop. Unfortunately, understanding is not agreement. For the We Are ODST ad, Microsoft commissioned a full-sized Brute prop, with working facial movement. This is a much bigger enterprise, and one that needs to tie into the greater canon, so having Jackal traders would have admirably tied them together. And, being much less humanoid than a Brute, or even these Yonhet guys, there was less risk of falling into the uncanny valley. As it is, this is the third humanoid species in the Halo universe, including humanity itself, and I'm worried we're going to see Ferengi next. The animal kingdom is full of diverse body types that have been successful in their own niches, that I'd love to see achieve sentience. Get creative! What would an intelligent species of cephalopod look like, with body armour, weapons and ornamentation?  -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 22:12, 10 November 2014 (EST)


::::True. As I said before I like that they're opening up the universe and making it feel more lived-in with fringe species but I too would've preferred to see a more properly alien race. This one feels more like an afterthought, something they just slapped together with some make-up because they needed an alien. And there's no reason the character couldn't have been any of the classic Covenant species either unless there are specific contrived story reasons tied to the Yonhet's abilities or something. EDIT: Apparently they have perfectly human-like hands too. I was expecting them to at least do something with the hands, perhaps add a finger or glue some of them together, but apparently not. It's pretty lazy. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:29, 11 November 2014 (EST)
::::True. As I said before I like that they're opening up the universe and making it feel more lived-in with fringe species but I too would've preferred to see a more properly alien race. This one feels more like an afterthought, something they just slapped together with some make-up because they needed an alien. And there's no reason the character couldn't have been any of the classic Covenant species either unless there are specific contrived story reasons tied to the Yonhet's abilities or something. EDIT: Apparently they have perfectly human-like hands too. I was expecting them to at least do something with the hands, perhaps add a finger or glue some of them together, but apparently not. It's pretty lazy. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:29, 11 November 2014 (EST)


===Covenant monotony===
===Covenant monotony===
A couple more visual gripes. Given the flexibility of the comic medium in comparison to games where modeling assets is a limiting factor, this would've been the perfect opportunity to showcase the much-talked about diversity in the Covenant races, particularly Kig-Yar. Yet all of the aliens we see (mainly Jackals) are the ''Halo 4'' designs (which I despise, but that's not even the core issue here). What's more, this supposedly raggedy band of pirates and slavers inhabiting the dark corners of the galaxy all use Jul 'Mdama standard issue gear. Why not use the opportunity to show the space Godzillas side by side with the Bungie-era Jackals and Skirmishers along with possible previously-unseen minor variations among them, wearing all sorts of motley assortments of alien clothing, armor, various accessories and paraphernalia? I can only imagine how this comic might have turned out at the hands of a more creative and invested artist<sub>*cough*Leviathan*cough*</sub>. As it stands 343i would've been better off just posing the preexisting models in their equivalent of Garry's Mod and that would've produced a better result. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:32, 17 November 2014 (EST)
A couple more visual gripes. Given the flexibility of the comic medium in comparison to games where modeling assets is a limiting factor, this would've been the perfect opportunity to showcase the much-talked about diversity in the Covenant races, particularly Kig-Yar. Yet all of the aliens we see (mainly Jackals) are the ''Halo 4'' designs (which I despise, but that's not even the core issue here). What's more, this supposedly raggedy band of pirates and slavers inhabiting the dark corners of the galaxy all use Jul 'Mdama standard issue gear. Why not use the opportunity to show the space Godzillas side by side with the Bungie-era Jackals and Skirmishers along with possible previously-unseen minor variations among them, wearing all sorts of motley assortments of alien clothing, armor, various accessories and paraphernalia? I can only imagine how this comic might have turned out at the hands of a more creative and invested artist<sub>*cough*Leviathan*cough*</sub>. As it stands 343i would've been better off just posing the preexisting models in their equivalent of Garry's Mod and that would've produced a better result. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:32, 17 November 2014 (EST)


:I agreed. They could've at least used the Bungie-era assets rather than going with the 343i stuff. I find it to be rather lazy when they do this. It would've been very interesting to see diversity, and they seemed to be going with that approach early on in the escalation series but it seems as though they regressed as the issues progressed. And honestly, I'm not feeling the 343i Kig-yar to begin with. They're too "old" looking or not really unique. I guess with the Spartan Ops Janus Keys series coming, we might as well not expect to see any bungie-era designs show up since this is a continuation from Halo 4.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 09:30, 28 November 2014 (EST)
:I agreed. They could've at least used the Bungie-era assets rather than going with the 343i stuff. I find it to be rather lazy when they do this. It would've been very interesting to see diversity, and they seemed to be going with that approach early on in the escalation series but it seems as though they regressed as the issues progressed. And honestly, I'm not feeling the 343i Kig-yar to begin with. They're too "old" looking or not really unique. I guess with the Spartan Ops Janus Keys series coming, we might as well not expect to see any bungie-era designs show up since this is a continuation from Halo 4.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 09:30, 28 November 2014 (EST)
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:::I would concur with that analogy (and I like your explanation) but 343i did make Thel 'Vadam in Escalation 1-3 look like the 343i-era elites rather than maintaining his previous physiology. So that explanation is kind of rendered mute imo. Its no different from how they had these supposed explanations for why things changed in Halo 4 but had no explanation for why the FUD changed. That in itself renders all other explanations mute. Let's just keep it for what it is - 343i changed things because they felt like it. Though I agree with you that the 343i-era covie assets look evil. Too evil for Halo however, but ok for gears of war.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 11:25, 29 November 2014 (EST)
:::I would concur with that analogy (and I like your explanation) but 343i did make Thel 'Vadam in Escalation 1-3 look like the 343i-era elites rather than maintaining his previous physiology. So that explanation is kind of rendered mute imo. Its no different from how they had these supposed explanations for why things changed in Halo 4 but had no explanation for why the FUD changed. That in itself renders all other explanations mute. Let's just keep it for what it is - 343i changed things because they felt like it. Though I agree with you that the 343i-era covie assets look evil. Too evil for Halo however, but ok for gears of war.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 11:25, 29 November 2014 (EST)


::::The thing I always liked about the Covenant was the way they were presented as quite alien but still people. They were diverse and they didn't look like mindless monsters. The diversity angle is another reason I have a problem with the ''Halo 4'' versions—it's like they wanted all of the Covenant species to be related as everyone has the same skin tone and texture, much like GoW's Locust, which doesn't make any sense given their backgrounds. I suppose it's possible they're going for a "good Covenant-bad Covenant" divide through visuals, though that in itself has some unfortunate implications if you want to read too much into it (you were born Ibie'shan? Too bad, you're predestined to be evil). Now that they have introduced the ''Halo 4'' versions and the damage has already been done, I'd just like to see more than one subtype at once. On the plus side, at least the pirate queen had a unique garb even if her underlings used Jul 'Mdama's gear for no reason.--[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:40, 1 December 2014 (EST)
::::The thing I always liked about the Covenant was the way they were presented as quite alien but still people. They were diverse and they didn't look like mindless monsters. The diversity angle is another reason I have a problem with the ''Halo 4'' versions—it's like they wanted all of the Covenant species to be related as everyone has the same skin tone and texture, much like GoW's Locust, which doesn't make any sense given their backgrounds. I suppose it's possible they're going for a "good Covenant-bad Covenant" divide through visuals, though that in itself has some unfortunate implications if you want to read too much into it (you were born Ibie'shan? Too bad, you're predestined to be evil). Now that they have introduced the ''Halo 4'' versions and the damage has already been done, I'd just like to see more than one subtype at once. On the plus side, at least the pirate queen had a unique garb even if her underlings used Jul 'Mdama's gear for no reason.--[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:40, 1 December 2014 (EST)


:::::That's an excellent point and something I noticed when Halo 4 first came out. The covie species look as though they are related with the same scaly, texture skin. Basically they all look reptilian or just flat out similar. I think 343i's approach with the species wasn't a good one. Just keep them the same and come up with some new species if you want to change something. Lol at ''"you were born Ibie'shan? Too bad, you're predestined to be evil"''. Now that you described it from that perspective, the whole good-bad covies explanation doesn't seem likely. Like I said earlier, 343i changed them for the sake of change - "It's a brand new Halo, brand new company, so let's show off our artistic capabilities". And when they did that they forgot about consistency and what makes sense.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 14:31, 6 December 2014 (EST)
:::::That's an excellent point and something I noticed when Halo 4 first came out. The covie species look as though they are related with the same scaly, texture skin. Basically they all look reptilian or just flat out similar. I think 343i's approach with the species wasn't a good one. Just keep them the same and come up with some new species if you want to change something. Lol at ''"you were born Ibie'shan? Too bad, you're predestined to be evil"''. Now that you described it from that perspective, the whole good-bad covies explanation doesn't seem likely. Like I said earlier, 343i changed them for the sake of change - "It's a brand new Halo, brand new company, so let's show off our artistic capabilities". And when they did that they forgot about consistency and what makes sense.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 14:31, 6 December 2014 (EST)
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Is it me, or the sky looks like the interior of a shield world? It's possible that it's just my imagination, or that the artist didn't pay attention to that when he took inspiration from some ''Halo 4'' screenshots / concept art. But if the battle between 'Mdama and the ''Infinity''<nowiki>'s</nowiki> crew leads to the introduction of a new shield world, that would be interesting. (I'm still wondering what kind of Forerunner installation the Absolute Record is supposed to be.) Anyway, it's just a cover, and we all know that ''Escalation''<nowiki>'s</nowiki> covers are far from being reliable. (sigh) [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 18:38, 18 November 2014 (EST)
Is it me, or the sky looks like the interior of a shield world? It's possible that it's just my imagination, or that the artist didn't pay attention to that when he took inspiration from some ''Halo 4'' screenshots / concept art. But if the battle between 'Mdama and the ''Infinity''<nowiki>'s</nowiki> crew leads to the introduction of a new shield world, that would be interesting. (I'm still wondering what kind of Forerunner installation the Absolute Record is supposed to be.) Anyway, it's just a cover, and we all know that ''Escalation''<nowiki>'s</nowiki> covers are far from being reliable. (sigh) [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 18:38, 18 November 2014 (EST)


:I'm not seeing a Shield World. The perspective is just generally warped, at least to me. It looks like a generic landscape, not much obvious Forerunner involvement. Hopefully it is set near the Janus key, or at least representative of the events in the comic. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 19:08, 18 November 2014 (EST)
:I'm not seeing a Shield World. The perspective is just generally warped, at least to me. It looks like a generic landscape, not much obvious Forerunner involvement. Hopefully it is set near the Janus key, or at least representative of the events in the comic. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 19:08, 18 November 2014 (EST)


::Cover needs more Mantises.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 20:04, 18 November 2014 (EST)
::Cover needs more Mantises.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 20:04, 18 November 2014 (EST)
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==Issue 12==
==Issue 12==
File:HaloEscalation12.jpg Finally, a cover that depicts what actually happens!
File:HaloEscalation12.jpg Finally, a cover that depicts what actually happens!
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After reading the last entry in the ''Exposure'' story arc, I have to say I'm impressed with the writing of this new author. Particular the ending of this issue is what caught me off guard. It was a clever idea and nice to add a curve-ball to further fuel our interest in ONI's shenanigans. That alone will make me want to see what happens next in the next story arc. Other than that I liked the overall comic. The action was welled paced and I like the addition of the queen (who was rather ruthless - "''Kill him!''"). It's nice to see other areas of the Haloverse explored. I also liked the character development primarily from Ray, how she seems emotionally attached to Thorne. I see them dating in the ''Spartan Ops: The Janus Key'' story arc. You know it's going to happen, just a matter of time. The only true flaws I saw with this issue was two things. First is the art, mainly with the human characters. I always had a problem with the consistency of the way characters were drawn. In the previous issue it was Throne and Ray, now Palmer and Majestic squad get the "lazy artist" treatment. Its a bit of a disappointment and I wish the artist took better care in maintaining character appearances from issue to issue to avoid making it seem like different artist worked on the issues (even if different artist work on the issue). They should operate like a company, where the work produced by this company is consistent across all drawings, looking like it the company has their -yoink!- together. The second problem is the forgotten slaves. We don't see any of them mentioned or show up in this issue. Maybe they were rescued, killed, or fled. Who knows? And that's a problem. It would've been interesting to see them being led to a dropship or something at least in one or two panels. Oh well. Anyway, it was a good conclusion to this story arc and adds something to the Haloverse compared to the ''last 72 hours''.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 19:58, 30 November 2014 (EST)
After reading the last entry in the ''Exposure'' story arc, I have to say I'm impressed with the writing of this new author. Particular the ending of this issue is what caught me off guard. It was a clever idea and nice to add a curve-ball to further fuel our interest in ONI's shenanigans. That alone will make me want to see what happens next in the next story arc. Other than that I liked the overall comic. The action was welled paced and I like the addition of the queen (who was rather ruthless - "''Kill him!''"). It's nice to see other areas of the Haloverse explored. I also liked the character development primarily from Ray, how she seems emotionally attached to Thorne. I see them dating in the ''Spartan Ops: The Janus Key'' story arc. You know it's going to happen, just a matter of time. The only true flaws I saw with this issue was two things. First is the art, mainly with the human characters. I always had a problem with the consistency of the way characters were drawn. In the previous issue it was Throne and Ray, now Palmer and Majestic squad get the "lazy artist" treatment. Its a bit of a disappointment and I wish the artist took better care in maintaining character appearances from issue to issue to avoid making it seem like different artist worked on the issues (even if different artist work on the issue). They should operate like a company, where the work produced by this company is consistent across all drawings, looking like it the company has their -yoink!- together. The second problem is the forgotten slaves. We don't see any of them mentioned or show up in this issue. Maybe they were rescued, killed, or fled. Who knows? And that's a problem. It would've been interesting to see them being led to a dropship or something at least in one or two panels. Oh well. Anyway, it was a good conclusion to this story arc and adds something to the Haloverse compared to the ''last 72 hours''.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 19:58, 30 November 2014 (EST)
:I agree it was pretty solid. There was more to the plot than "bad guys threaten ''Infinity''" or "we must stop the Covenant from getting Forerunner artifact X". And it didn't have any of 72 Hours' superhero comic schlock ("the evil Forerunner supervillain is going to destroy Earth!"). The only problems I had were the unresolved fate of the slaves, and the way the UNSC just starts dropping nukes on the place with the Spartans still in there. Why such a hurry? The art seemed to be a minor improvement from last issue, though it was still very inconsistent. All in all it was a good start for Duffy Boudreau; we'll see how he handles the Janus Key arc (I've got a bad feeling about where they're taking Halsey's character but it remains to be seen if I'm right). --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:19, 22 December 2014 (EST)
:I agree it was pretty solid. There was more to the plot than "bad guys threaten ''Infinity''" or "we must stop the Covenant from getting Forerunner artifact X". And it didn't have any of 72 Hours' superhero comic schlock ("the evil Forerunner supervillain is going to destroy Earth!"). The only problems I had were the unresolved fate of the slaves, and the way the UNSC just starts dropping nukes on the place with the Spartans still in there. Why such a hurry? The art seemed to be a minor improvement from last issue, though it was still very inconsistent. All in all it was a good start for Duffy Boudreau; we'll see how he handles the Janus Key arc (I've got a bad feeling about where they're taking Halsey's character but it remains to be seen if I'm right). --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:19, 22 December 2014 (EST)
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==Issue 13==
==Issue 13==
File:HaloEscalation13.jpgShe didn't use that machine gun!
File:HaloEscalation13.jpgShe didn't use that machine gun!
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After reading the issue, I'm satisfied with the beginning of Spartan ops "season 2". The idea of a battle to draw out the UNSC was pretty clever and I'm glad we got introduced to a planet that was introduced in multiplayer. The battle itself was short and the UNSC "victory" was a lil "offscreen" (at least that's how I interpreted it) but seeing a warthog land on top a phantom was entertaining. And once again Thorne is injured during a battle. How many times are they going to hurt this dude? It seems as though Palmer is still holding a grudge towards Halsey. You'd think w/ the shenanigans that Osman & ONI have played over these past couple issues and the fact that Halsey gave the UNSC half the janus key, that Palmer would have some sort of understanding to what's going on but I guess she still sees no good in Halsey. Now, Halsey's clever manipulation of the Infinity's slipspace drive was interesting, though it's almost similar to what was done to the Infinity back at Requiem. Overall the story was short but alright. Its a nice slow start to what we may see next. Now hopefully Halsey doesn't turn evil like Jul.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 14:13, 25 December 2014 (EST)
After reading the issue, I'm satisfied with the beginning of Spartan ops "season 2". The idea of a battle to draw out the UNSC was pretty clever and I'm glad we got introduced to a planet that was introduced in multiplayer. The battle itself was short and the UNSC "victory" was a lil "offscreen" (at least that's how I interpreted it) but seeing a warthog land on top a phantom was entertaining. And once again Thorne is injured during a battle. How many times are they going to hurt this dude? It seems as though Palmer is still holding a grudge towards Halsey. You'd think w/ the shenanigans that Osman & ONI have played over these past couple issues and the fact that Halsey gave the UNSC half the janus key, that Palmer would have some sort of understanding to what's going on but I guess she still sees no good in Halsey. Now, Halsey's clever manipulation of the Infinity's slipspace drive was interesting, though it's almost similar to what was done to the Infinity back at Requiem. Overall the story was short but alright. Its a nice slow start to what we may see next. Now hopefully Halsey doesn't turn evil like Jul.--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 14:13, 25 December 2014 (EST)


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I mostly find myself agreeing with Halo Canon's review. I really hope Halsey ends up having played Jul all along (which I admit is very likely to happen) since her flat-out turning against humanity would go against everything we know about her. I'm still not super happy about the way 343i have apparently discarded Halsey's character development from the Nylund novels—here we don't see her showing any remorse for the SPARTAN-II program whereas her actions in ''First Strike'' and ''Ghosts of Onyx'' were driven entirely by her guilt. While post-''Kilo-Five Trilogy'' portrayals of Halsey don't quite rise to the Traviss levels of absurd cartoon villainy it still feels like that version of her informed subsequent characterizations more than Nylund's repentant, post-''First Strike'' Halsey. In terms of character motivation, that is; at least they've kept her intelligence intact. I'm also not a huge fan of the way they added yet another Forerunner MacGuffin that lets them do this one very specific plot-important thing.
I mostly find myself agreeing with Halo Canon's review. I really hope Halsey ends up having played Jul all along (which I admit is very likely to happen) since her flat-out turning against humanity would go against everything we know about her. I'm still not super happy about the way 343i have apparently discarded Halsey's character development from the Nylund novels—here we don't see her showing any remorse for the SPARTAN-II program whereas her actions in ''First Strike'' and ''Ghosts of Onyx'' were driven entirely by her guilt. While post-''Kilo-Five Trilogy'' portrayals of Halsey don't quite rise to the Traviss levels of absurd cartoon villainy it still feels like that version of her informed subsequent characterizations more than Nylund's repentant, post-''First Strike'' Halsey. In terms of character motivation, that is; at least they've kept her intelligence intact. I'm also not a huge fan of the way they added yet another Forerunner MacGuffin that lets them do this one very specific plot-important thing.


Glassman is still the inept nerd stereotype he has always been, and Lasky's still way too lenient with Palmer's antics. His comment about it not being like Palmer to "play cowboy" left me wondering if that was meant to be sarcastic—if it was, this wasn't communicated too clearly. I suppose my problem with her character is the way she never suffers any real consequences for her recklessness. At this point it would be kind of refreshing if one or more Spartans actually got killed as a direct result of one of her stunts, forcing both Lasky to take proper steps to ensure she doesn't become a liability and for Palmer herself to confront her failings and grow as a character. And what ''is'' up with Palmer's enormous beef with Halsey anyway? Did she spend time with Kilo-Five or what? I'm generally averse to the idea of deconstruction but to me the ''Infinity'' crew would really benefit from one. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:38, 28 December 2014 (EST)
Glassman is still the inept nerd stereotype he has always been, and Lasky's still way too lenient with Palmer's antics. His comment about it not being like Palmer to "play cowboy" left me wondering if that was meant to be sarcastic—if it was, this wasn't communicated too clearly. I suppose my problem with her character is the way she never suffers any real consequences for her recklessness. At this point it would be kind of refreshing if one or more Spartans actually got killed as a direct result of one of her stunts, forcing both Lasky to take proper steps to ensure she doesn't become a liability and for Palmer herself to confront her failings and grow as a character. And what ''is'' up with Palmer's enormous beef with Halsey anyway? Did she spend time with Kilo-Five or what? I'm generally averse to the idea of deconstruction but to me the ''Infinity'' crew would really benefit from one. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 03:38, 28 December 2014 (EST)


:I guess 343i can't get enough of creating new Forerunner toys to help impede the UNSC in some way. We'll probably see another one in the next issue. And speaking of that, where the hell is the ''Vociferous'' in all this? Shouldn't there be some mention of it by now? Or did 343i just forget about it. And what about the presence of other UNSC ships? It seems as though the ''Infinity'' is being assigned for EVERYTHING keeping us, the audience, stuck on just the "crew of the Infinity". Will we ever see some post-war UNSC fleet action? As for Halsey it would be nice to see her show some regret towards her actions. But I guess 343i is intent on molding her into something else, especially since Frank O' Connor claimed there was some reasoning behind why they are portraying her in this way. I just hope we see her reunited with the UNSC and maybe Lasky and/or Thorne can explain to her that they were trying to rescue her, at least to keep 343i from screwing up her character any further. Maybe in the next issue we'll see Palmer have a change of heart for Halsey or something, to keep her character from going downhill again. She was going somewhat uphill for some time but 343i might take her in the wrong direction in a matter of 4 issues. But I agree with you that Lasky is being way too lenient. He needs to show some backbone and shut Palmer down. Right now he comes off too nice. He's the freakin' captain for god sakes!--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 12:48, 2 January 2015 (EST)
:I guess 343i can't get enough of creating new Forerunner toys to help impede the UNSC in some way. We'll probably see another one in the next issue. And speaking of that, where the hell is the ''Vociferous'' in all this? Shouldn't there be some mention of it by now? Or did 343i just forget about it. And what about the presence of other UNSC ships? It seems as though the ''Infinity'' is being assigned for EVERYTHING keeping us, the audience, stuck on just the "crew of the Infinity". Will we ever see some post-war UNSC fleet action? As for Halsey it would be nice to see her show some regret towards her actions. But I guess 343i is intent on molding her into something else, especially since Frank O' Connor claimed there was some reasoning behind why they are portraying her in this way. I just hope we see her reunited with the UNSC and maybe Lasky and/or Thorne can explain to her that they were trying to rescue her, at least to keep 343i from screwing up her character any further. Maybe in the next issue we'll see Palmer have a change of heart for Halsey or something, to keep her character from going downhill again. She was going somewhat uphill for some time but 343i might take her in the wrong direction in a matter of 4 issues. But I agree with you that Lasky is being way too lenient. He needs to show some backbone and shut Palmer down. Right now he comes off too nice. He's the freakin' captain for god sakes!--'''''[[User:Killamin7|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin7</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamin7|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamin7|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 12:48, 2 January 2015 (EST)
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==Issue 14==
==Issue 14==
File:HaloEscalation14.jpg Uh, Jul never left his ship 343I.
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After reading through the comic, I have to say, I like where this story is headed. Just like Sali, I'm just as angry that Jul sent Requiem into its sun. So a nice three way battle is what I'd like to see right now. Though I wish they would make the ''Infinity'' crew more creative and smarter. I'm kind of annoyed with the crew doing things "by the book" and finding themselves in all these traps. For instance, I wish they'd suspect that there was a trap waiting for them once they brought the key off the ''Infinity'' but nope. Only Roland was smart enough to mention that it would be best to keep the key onboard the ship. Otherwise Lasky just happily sends the key off the ship. And as predictable, the Pelican carrying it is shot out the sky. I would've like to see like a decoy Pelican that could've flew in front of the real one or multiple Pelicans to throw Jul & Sali off a loop. Overall the issue is a fun and decent read but some parts of it were predictable.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 13:10, 3 February 2015 (EST)  
After reading through the comic, I have to say, I like where this story is headed. Just like Sali, I'm just as angry that Jul sent Requiem into its sun. So a nice three way battle is what I'd like to see right now. Though I wish they would make the ''Infinity'' crew more creative and smarter. I'm kind of annoyed with the crew doing things "by the book" and finding themselves in all these traps. For instance, I wish they'd suspect that there was a trap waiting for them once they brought the key off the ''Infinity'' but nope. Only Roland was smart enough to mention that it would be best to keep the key onboard the ship. Otherwise Lasky just happily sends the key off the ship. And as predictable, the Pelican carrying it is shot out the sky. I would've like to see like a decoy Pelican that could've flew in front of the real one or multiple Pelicans to throw Jul & Sali off a loop. Overall the issue is a fun and decent read but some parts of it were predictable.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 13:10, 3 February 2015 (EST)  


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:So in Issue 15, we see the return of not only the Covenant War-era Sangheili Zealot armour, but the Minor variant as well. Is this evidence of former Covenant ranks continuing to be in use in Jul 'Mdamas faction, or just old armour being used by new ranks, for example Minor armor being used by Storm Elites? Thoughts? Opinions? [[User:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|SLiD1nG Pr0Xy]] ([[User talk:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|talk]]) 11:36, 25 February 2015 (EST)
:So in Issue 15, we see the return of not only the Covenant War-era Sangheili Zealot armour, but the Minor variant as well. Is this evidence of former Covenant ranks continuing to be in use in Jul 'Mdamas faction, or just old armour being used by new ranks, for example Minor armor being used by Storm Elites? Thoughts? Opinions? [[User:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|SLiD1nG Pr0Xy]] ([[User talk:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|talk]]) 11:36, 25 February 2015 (EST)


::I would guess it's because the remnant factions don't really have the resources to enforce rigid standardization among their ranks. Maybe a lot of the individual members bring their own armor along as they come and go between the different groups. Regardless I doubt the nonstandard armors are indicative of rank anymore. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 11:42, 25 February 2015 (EST)
::I would guess it's because the remnant factions don't really have the resources to enforce rigid standardization among their ranks. Maybe a lot of the individual members bring their own armor along as they come and go between the different groups. Regardless I doubt the nonstandard armors are indicative of rank anymore. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 11:42, 25 February 2015 (EST)


:::Yeah, that's what I'm starting to believe too. I just wish we could get a little bit of clarification from 343... [[User:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|SLiD1nG Pr0Xy]] ([[User talk:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|talk]]) 11:52, 25 February 2015 (EST)
:::Yeah, that's what I'm starting to believe too. I just wish we could get a little bit of clarification from 343... [[User:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|SLiD1nG Pr0Xy]] ([[User talk:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|talk]]) 11:52, 25 February 2015 (EST)


===Split===
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I've only seen the half-dozen or so page online preview, but I'm interested by the idea of the Mdama Covenant, already fairly radical and zealous, splitting between Mdama's hardcore and an even MORE radical and zealous faction led by Sali 'Nyon. Hopefully this doesn't get resolved in the next three issues, and becomes an ongoing theme. What I'd like to see is Mdama to lose near-total control of his own Covenant, forced to temporarily ally with his hated enemies for survival until they can both disengage - Infinity to find the Janus Key, now in enemy hands, and Mdama to crush the dissent within his own ranks. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 03:03, 29 January 2015 (EST)
I've only seen the half-dozen or so page online preview, but I'm interested by the idea of the Mdama Covenant, already fairly radical and zealous, splitting between Mdama's hardcore and an even MORE radical and zealous faction led by Sali 'Nyon. Hopefully this doesn't get resolved in the next three issues, and becomes an ongoing theme. What I'd like to see is Mdama to lose near-total control of his own Covenant, forced to temporarily ally with his hated enemies for survival until they can both disengage - Infinity to find the Janus Key, now in enemy hands, and Mdama to crush the dissent within his own ranks. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 03:03, 29 January 2015 (EST)
:I too hope this schism-within-a-schism continues to play out in future media. 'Nyon's faction may be wiped out but the repercussions could continue to resonate. Duffy Boudreau's first story arc showed his skill at writing a self-contained story arc, but this just seems like it's setting up something bigger. On an unrelated note, I was thrilled when Dr. Halsey called out Jul for his false piety; it's nice to see continuity with the better parts of ''Kilo-Five''. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]]  ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 11:40, 29 January 2015 (EST)
:I too hope this schism-within-a-schism continues to play out in future media. 'Nyon's faction may be wiped out but the repercussions could continue to resonate. Duffy Boudreau's first story arc showed his skill at writing a self-contained story arc, but this just seems like it's setting up something bigger. On an unrelated note, I was thrilled when Dr. Halsey called out Jul for his false piety; it's nice to see continuity with the better parts of ''Kilo-Five''. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]]  ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 11:40, 29 January 2015 (EST)
::I like the way Boudreau is introducing more depth to his stories than merely "UNSC and Covenant fight over Forerunner artifact". But that formula is what this story arc is ultimately about, mind you, and I've never liked the Janus Key from a storytelling perspective so I hope they'll use these comics to conveniently get rid of the thing. With all these different species and factions and motivations the post-war ''Halo'' universe has so much potential it doesn't need to follow the tired Forerunner MacGuffin paradigm of old. Schlerf began to move past that formula (which Reed still clung to in full force in ''Spartan Ops'') and it looks as though Boudreau is taking after him in that respect. Sure, ''Escalation'' still has yet to blow me away with quality storytelling, and I'm not particularly engaged in the ''Infinity'' and its crew, but I have to commend them for trying to tell different kinds of stories in the first place. On the subject of Halsey, what I most liked about that bit was that they're showcasing she doesn't get called a genius for nothing. I only hope this arc can follow through with the expectation that there's more to her motivations than revenge and blind obsession; she's smarter than that. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 12:32, 29 January 2015 (EST)
::I like the way Boudreau is introducing more depth to his stories than merely "UNSC and Covenant fight over Forerunner artifact". But that formula is what this story arc is ultimately about, mind you, and I've never liked the Janus Key from a storytelling perspective so I hope they'll use these comics to conveniently get rid of the thing. With all these different species and factions and motivations the post-war ''Halo'' universe has so much potential it doesn't need to follow the tired Forerunner MacGuffin paradigm of old. Schlerf began to move past that formula (which Reed still clung to in full force in ''Spartan Ops'') and it looks as though Boudreau is taking after him in that respect. Sure, ''Escalation'' still has yet to blow me away with quality storytelling, and I'm not particularly engaged in the ''Infinity'' and its crew, but I have to commend them for trying to tell different kinds of stories in the first place. On the subject of Halsey, what I most liked about that bit was that they're showcasing she doesn't get called a genius for nothing. I only hope this arc can follow through with the expectation that there's more to her motivations than revenge and blind obsession; she's smarter than that. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 12:32, 29 January 2015 (EST)
:::Escalation has a chronic problem of its villains being far more interesting or sympathetic than its ostensible heroes. We liked Vata 'Gajat quite a bit, he was a good change from a traditional religious zealot. They killed him off. The Jackal pirates were an interesting idea. Killed off. They can't kill off Halsey or Mdama, so we don't see anything of them. The entire point of having a fractious Covenant remnant is that it gives you an opportunity to have a vast sandbox with diverse groups, some friendly, some not, and most neutral or apathetic with their own struggles. But instead, we continue to focus on the Spartans of Majestic and Commander <s>renegade FemShep</s> Palmer, without seeing why we should like or root for anybody besides Thorne.
:::Escalation has a chronic problem of its villains being far more interesting or sympathetic than its ostensible heroes. We liked Vata 'Gajat quite a bit, he was a good change from a traditional religious zealot. They killed him off. The Jackal pirates were an interesting idea. Killed off. They can't kill off Halsey or Mdama, so we don't see anything of them. The entire point of having a fractious Covenant remnant is that it gives you an opportunity to have a vast sandbox with diverse groups, some friendly, some not, and most neutral or apathetic with their own struggles. But instead, we continue to focus on the Spartans of Majestic and Commander <s>renegade FemShep</s> Palmer, without seeing why we should like or root for anybody besides Thorne.
:::The best thing Escalation could do, frankly, is to focus on the Covenant intrigue. Have the Infinity in refit or something, take it out of the game. Have Halsey be our POV character, with all this stuff happening around or to her. The zealots who just want to re-impose the worship of the Forerunners, the fearful who want to destroy humanity before they can destroy them, and the opportunists who are just in it for the pay and loot. Mdama protecting her from his own subordinates, working with her to understand some Forerunner relics, talking about what both of them want out of this partnership, coming to an understanding. Not necessarily a friendship, but he doesn't keep Halsey on a literal leash like he did Glassman, and there has to be a reason why he's shown her the respect he has. Get us to KNOW our bad guys. That's how you raise tension - make the enemy more than just one-off villains or cannon fodder. Make us question whether we even WANT the UNSC to win. And keep us guessing about Halsey's motives - I doubt Halsey would allow them to wipe humanity out, but maybe she's fine with hurting the UNSC? Or maybe she's been playing a long Xanatos Gambit to create a situation where, whatever happens, she can pick up the pieces? -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 18:26, 31 January 2015 (EST)
:::The best thing Escalation could do, frankly, is to focus on the Covenant intrigue. Have the Infinity in refit or something, take it out of the game. Have Halsey be our POV character, with all this stuff happening around or to her. The zealots who just want to re-impose the worship of the Forerunners, the fearful who want to destroy humanity before they can destroy them, and the opportunists who are just in it for the pay and loot. Mdama protecting her from his own subordinates, working with her to understand some Forerunner relics, talking about what both of them want out of this partnership, coming to an understanding. Not necessarily a friendship, but he doesn't keep Halsey on a literal leash like he did Glassman, and there has to be a reason why he's shown her the respect he has. Get us to KNOW our bad guys. That's how you raise tension - make the enemy more than just one-off villains or cannon fodder. Make us question whether we even WANT the UNSC to win. And keep us guessing about Halsey's motives - I doubt Halsey would allow them to wipe humanity out, but maybe she's fine with hurting the UNSC? Or maybe she's been playing a long Xanatos Gambit to create a situation where, whatever happens, she can pick up the pieces? -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 18:26, 31 January 2015 (EST)


==Issue 17's cover/story and is 18 "the end"?==
==Issue 17's cover/story and is 18 "the end"?==
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:::: I can't see how they'd be "poorly drawn" because of the wingettes and Sparth's art isn't representative that's true, but the story matches with the art. They would have said if it was Locke, but then again they denoted he was a mysterious Spartan. Technically the only S-IV besides Thorne and Palmer we care about is Locke. [[User:SamGall|SamGall]] ([[User talk:SamGall|talk]]) 18:28, 3 February 2015 (EST)
:::: I can't see how they'd be "poorly drawn" because of the wingettes and Sparth's art isn't representative that's true, but the story matches with the art. They would have said if it was Locke, but then again they denoted he was a mysterious Spartan. Technically the only S-IV besides Thorne and Palmer we care about is Locke. [[User:SamGall|SamGall]] ([[User talk:SamGall|talk]]) 18:28, 3 February 2015 (EST)
:::::I can't see the "mysterious Spartan-IV" being anyone other than Locke. It'll probably illustrate his origins described in the Waypoint article as well as his becoming a Spartan-IV, as ''Nightfall'' largely failed in providing a proper origin story for him. It could always be an all-new character, though I doubt this.
:::::I can't see the "mysterious Spartan-IV" being anyone other than Locke. It'll probably illustrate his origins described in the Waypoint article as well as his becoming a Spartan-IV, as ''Nightfall'' largely failed in providing a proper origin story for him. It could always be an all-new character, though I doubt this.
:::::On the subject of Sparth, I like his art in and of itself but in relation to ''Halo'' the man needs to learn to get out of his comfort zone and better adapt to established aesthetics. For instance, this image is great visually, but nothing about it says "Halo" to me. It's just Sparth doing what he always does; sweeping alien vistas with his signature bulbous-profiled ships (which almost always have very defined Space Age-esque rocket thrusters) and a bunch of indeterminate figures in the foreground for scale. His lack of flexibility gave us the ''Forward Unto Dawn'' redesign after all. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:58, 4 February 2015 (EST)
:::::On the subject of Sparth, I like his art in and of itself but in relation to ''Halo'' the man needs to learn to get out of his comfort zone and better adapt to established aesthetics. For instance, this image is great visually, but nothing about it says "Halo" to me. It's just Sparth doing what he always does; sweeping alien vistas with his signature bulbous-profiled ships (which almost always have very defined Space Age-esque rocket thrusters) and a bunch of indeterminate figures in the foreground for scale. His lack of flexibility gave us the ''Forward Unto Dawn'' redesign after all. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:58, 4 February 2015 (EST)


::::::It would be nice to reveal more about Locke and find out how he got into the Spartan-IV program. I wonder what Locke will look like in comic form. But you never know. 343i might throw in an all new character for suspense. Though we don't need anymore new characters right now as we have a good bunch of them already, ones that may need more character development.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 13:18, 5 February 2015 (EST)
::::::It would be nice to reveal more about Locke and find out how he got into the Spartan-IV program. I wonder what Locke will look like in comic form. But you never know. 343i might throw in an all new character for suspense. Though we don't need anymore new characters right now as we have a good bunch of them already, ones that may need more character development.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 13:18, 5 February 2015 (EST)
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==Issue 15==
==Issue 15==
File:HaloEscalation15.jpg Palmer. Palmer. Palmer.
File:HaloEscalation15.jpg Palmer. Palmer. Palmer.
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Is it just me or do they need to put an end to Palmer? Or is Palmer going to meet her end in the next issue? It seems as though they're making Palmer even worst with this "vengeance" against Halsey. She's hell-bent on eliminating Halsey that she renders all other objectives mute. It doesn't really make any sense why she should have this hatred towards her. Unless she's still trying to fulfill Osman's orders, I don't see why she has to continue pursuing this. Overall issue 15 was a decent, fun read. It had a lot of action and I like where the story is headed.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 07:17, 28 February 2015 (EST)
Is it just me or do they need to put an end to Palmer? Or is Palmer going to meet her end in the next issue? It seems as though they're making Palmer even worst with this "vengeance" against Halsey. She's hell-bent on eliminating Halsey that she renders all other objectives mute. It doesn't really make any sense why she should have this hatred towards her. Unless she's still trying to fulfill Osman's orders, I don't see why she has to continue pursuing this. Overall issue 15 was a decent, fun read. It had a lot of action and I like where the story is headed.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 07:17, 28 February 2015 (EST)


:Having seen Halo Canon's review of Issue 15, I'm surprised by how invested I am in this plot about Mdama's Covenant splitting apart. I find myself rooting for him over Sali 'Nyon (a name my mind refuses not to convert into Sally Nyan) and hoping that he and Halsey will come through this not only intact, but still together. I don't think I ship them, but the dynamic they have together interests me - alien and human achieving a level of respect, when one wants to wipe out the other's species and the other has an agenda of her own. I could care less what the Infinity and the Spartans do during this little arc, but I'm fascinated - does 'Nyon have something up his sleeve, that trumps control of the Prometheans? Is Halsey's arrival on the planet an elaborate trick to get the Spartans to bring their half of the key to her when they try to assassinate her? If Nyon ends up successfully wresting control of the Covenant, and the Prometheans, from Mdama, do we get him as an unlikely protagonist, an anti-hero still devoted to destroying humanity but forced to be the anti-Halsey, working with them against his former troops?
:Having seen Halo Canon's review of Issue 15, I'm surprised by how invested I am in this plot about Mdama's Covenant splitting apart. I find myself rooting for him over Sali 'Nyon (a name my mind refuses not to convert into Sally Nyan) and hoping that he and Halsey will come through this not only intact, but still together. I don't think I ship them, but the dynamic they have together interests me - alien and human achieving a level of respect, when one wants to wipe out the other's species and the other has an agenda of her own. I could care less what the Infinity and the Spartans do during this little arc, but I'm fascinated - does 'Nyon have something up his sleeve, that trumps control of the Prometheans? Is Halsey's arrival on the planet an elaborate trick to get the Spartans to bring their half of the key to her when they try to assassinate her? If Nyon ends up successfully wresting control of the Covenant, and the Prometheans, from Mdama, do we get him as an unlikely protagonist, an anti-hero still devoted to destroying humanity but forced to be the anti-Halsey, working with them against his former troops?
:I know I'm probably hyping myself up needlessly, but it still highlights how little I care about the Spartans still, except Thorne and what I've seen of Naiya Ray. The two of them at least seem capable and professional. Meanwhile, Halo Canon is right when he says that Palmer is needlessly endangering herself and her Spartans in an obsessive campaign to win. She needs to learn how to lose, how to reign herself in and let her defeats go, and she needs to learn that lesson urgently. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 07:20, 28 February 2015 (EST)
:I know I'm probably hyping myself up needlessly, but it still highlights how little I care about the Spartans still, except Thorne and what I've seen of Naiya Ray. The two of them at least seem capable and professional. Meanwhile, Halo Canon is right when he says that Palmer is needlessly endangering herself and her Spartans in an obsessive campaign to win. She needs to learn how to lose, how to reign herself in and let her defeats go, and she needs to learn that lesson urgently. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 07:20, 28 February 2015 (EST)


:Edit: another thought. I would be INCREDIBLY impressed if the Elite who wants back in 'Mdama's good books was the same Elite from the Pirate Queen's base, working for ONI to infiltrate both Mdama's and Nyon's factions, and by interfering the Spartans utterly blow his cover and ruin a plan that could have accomplished their objectives? I would count that as a much-needed lesson in humility for Palmer. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 08:04, 28 February 2015 (EST)
:Edit: another thought. I would be INCREDIBLY impressed if the Elite who wants back in 'Mdama's good books was the same Elite from the Pirate Queen's base, working for ONI to infiltrate both Mdama's and Nyon's factions, and by interfering the Spartans utterly blow his cover and ruin a plan that could have accomplished their objectives? I would count that as a much-needed lesson in humility for Palmer. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 08:04, 28 February 2015 (EST)


::Its funny how you don't care about the Spartans but I guess it's a case of how lil emphasis has been placed on them except for the ones you mentioned (love Ray). Some these Spartans have become nothing but canon fodder. As for 'Nyon, I don't believe he has anything up his sleeve. Based on how his forces were taking a beating, I think he already lost this one or either that, he'll attempt to escape. But it would be interesting if he somehow manages to wrestle control of the covenant from 'Mdama. As for that special elite, he's already dead.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 17:54, 14 March 2015 (EDT)
::Its funny how you don't care about the Spartans but I guess it's a case of how lil emphasis has been placed on them except for the ones you mentioned (love Ray). Some these Spartans have become nothing but canon fodder. As for 'Nyon, I don't believe he has anything up his sleeve. Based on how his forces were taking a beating, I think he already lost this one or either that, he'll attempt to escape. But it would be interesting if he somehow manages to wrestle control of the covenant from 'Mdama. As for that special elite, he's already dead.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 17:54, 14 March 2015 (EDT)
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*Spartan-IVs sure love removing their helmets in war zones for no reason.
*Spartan-IVs sure love removing their helmets in war zones for no reason.
*Evil Palmer is evil.
*Evil Palmer is evil.
But other than that I don't hate this arc. I just hope Halsey comes out unscathed (we know Palmer does, unless Issue 20's cover is completely false), or even somehow manages to clear up the unfortunate misunderstanding with the UNSC that happened at the end of SpOps. It's hard to imagine they'd dare kill her in a comic book, but then again you never know...  --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 04:34, 16 March 2015 (EDT)
But other than that I don't hate this arc. I just hope Halsey comes out unscathed (we know Palmer does, unless Issue 20's cover is completely false), or even somehow manages to clear up the unfortunate misunderstanding with the UNSC that happened at the end of SpOps. It's hard to imagine they'd dare kill her in a comic book, but then again you never know...  --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 04:34, 16 March 2015 (EDT)


:Good point. The ''Infinity'' definitely should've dominated Jul's fleet. But instead its depicted as being overwhelmed and "unable" to do anything. I guess the ''Infinity'''s frigates (or even MAC guns & missles) were all forgotten about after Halo 4 or the artist didn't feel like drawing them or didn't have enough panels. But that's from a logical perspective. Either way, it would've been cool to see them in action outside SpOps. As for Halsey, either she secretly has intention of returning the key to the UNSC or, like you said, its for the plot later. List of Spartans who removed their helmets for no reason that I can think of: Palmer, Hoya, DeMarco, Scruggs, and Ray.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 10:24, 22 March 2015 (EDT)
:Good point. The ''Infinity'' definitely should've dominated Jul's fleet. But instead its depicted as being overwhelmed and "unable" to do anything. I guess the ''Infinity'''s frigates (or even MAC guns & missles) were all forgotten about after Halo 4 or the artist didn't feel like drawing them or didn't have enough panels. But that's from a logical perspective. Either way, it would've been cool to see them in action outside SpOps. As for Halsey, either she secretly has intention of returning the key to the UNSC or, like you said, its for the plot later. List of Spartans who removed their helmets for no reason that I can think of: Palmer, Hoya, DeMarco, Scruggs, and Ray.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 10:24, 22 March 2015 (EDT)
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:::The only thing that surprised me was the return of the plasma rifle. Must've been easier to draw than the storm rifle.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 18:18, 14 March 2015 (EDT)
:::The only thing that surprised me was the return of the plasma rifle. Must've been easier to draw than the storm rifle.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 18:18, 14 March 2015 (EDT)


*Sigh* I don't know why I bother, I really don't. I look forward to seeing how this issue is playing out, including Halo Canon's summary. I do still hope that 'Nyon's involvement is more than a one-off crisis, and that it mixes things up among the Covenant status quo. I also find it a bit...suspicious that the Zealot is totally uninterested in locating Nyon's base. Almost as if it's part of the plan... aw hell, there I go again, think of interesting scenarios and setting myself up for disappointment. -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 19:46, 14 March 2015 (EDT)
*Sigh* I don't know why I bother, I really don't. I look forward to seeing how this issue is playing out, including Halo Canon's summary. I do still hope that 'Nyon's involvement is more than a one-off crisis, and that it mixes things up among the Covenant status quo. I also find it a bit...suspicious that the Zealot is totally uninterested in locating Nyon's base. Almost as if it's part of the plan... aw hell, there I go again, think of interesting scenarios and setting myself up for disappointment. -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 19:46, 14 March 2015 (EDT)


::Darn. I really liked that theory. --[[User:Weeping Angel|Weeping Angel]] ([[User talk:Weeping Angel|talk]]) 19:52, 14 March 2015 (EDT)
::Darn. I really liked that theory. --[[User:Weeping Angel|Weeping Angel]] ([[User talk:Weeping Angel|talk]]) 19:52, 14 March 2015 (EDT)
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:Cool. Forerunner space magic has turned Dr. Halsey into a Yonhet. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]]  ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 17:45, 15 March 2015 (EDT)
:Cool. Forerunner space magic has turned Dr. Halsey into a Yonhet. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]]  ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 17:45, 15 March 2015 (EDT)


::Clearly a nasty case of demonic possession. Come to think of it, though, this may actually be a very accurate representation of Karen Traviss' mental image of Halsey. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:58, 16 March 2015 (EDT)
::Clearly a nasty case of demonic possession. Come to think of it, though, this may actually be a very accurate representation of Karen Traviss' mental image of Halsey. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:58, 16 March 2015 (EDT)


New theory: what if the ''Zealot'' is the ONI double agent? (I can't stop myself, somebody help me) -- [[User:Morhek|<b><font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font></i></u>]] 07:09, 17 March 2015 (EDT)
New theory: what if the ''Zealot'' is the ONI double agent? (I can't stop myself, somebody help me) -- [[User:Morhek|'''<font color=indigo>Qura 'Morhek</font>''']] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u>''<font color=blue><sup>The Autocrat</sup></font>''</u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u>''<font color=purple><sup>of Morheka</sup></font>''</u>]] 07:09, 17 March 2015 (EDT)


:Yeah, you  might want to not get ahead of yourself. You know its not going to happen. 343i isn't that clever or are they? lol at "Karen Traviss' mental image of Halsey".--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 10:24, 22 March 2015 (EDT)
:Yeah, you  might want to not get ahead of yourself. You know its not going to happen. 343i isn't that clever or are they? lol at "Karen Traviss' mental image of Halsey".--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 10:24, 22 March 2015 (EDT)
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==Issue 16==
==Issue 16==
File:HaloEscalation16.jpg What'd they need the harvester for? Palmer??
File:HaloEscalation16.jpg What'd they need the harvester for? Palmer??
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To start, it looks like your question got answered Jugus. At the very beginning the ''Infinity'' finally deployed it's underslung frigates. Funny how that popped up right after you questioned it. Anyway, I have to say, this was a pretty decent read. Unfortunately there were a few problems. First, the art. The art was consistent for the first three issues of this story, and then BAM! All of a sudden it looks atrocious, primarily the human faces. We already got a glimpse of demonic Halsey above, but towards the end we get a mushy looking Palmer. Why didn't they just maintain the same artist throughout this story arc? <s>Second, the harvester served no real purpose. It was almost like a setup specifically for Palmer, which didn't make much sense to me. Why drop that behemoth for 1 Spartan? Why drop it at all? Was it there for some other purpose?</s> Also, why didn't Palmer rush Halsey back in the other direction instead of "following" her? Also, no showdown between Sali & Jul this time folks. I understand the issue is limited to a certain number of pages but come one! Still, can't wait to see the Absolute record and "Tanaka".--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 09:49, 25 March 2015 (EDT)
To start, it looks like your question got answered Jugus. At the very beginning the ''Infinity'' finally deployed it's underslung frigates. Funny how that popped up right after you questioned it. Anyway, I have to say, this was a pretty decent read. Unfortunately there were a few problems. First, the art. The art was consistent for the first three issues of this story, and then BAM! All of a sudden it looks atrocious, primarily the human faces. We already got a glimpse of demonic Halsey above, but towards the end we get a mushy looking Palmer. Why didn't they just maintain the same artist throughout this story arc? <s>Second, the harvester served no real purpose. It was almost like a setup specifically for Palmer, which didn't make much sense to me. Why drop that behemoth for 1 Spartan? Why drop it at all? Was it there for some other purpose?</s> Also, why didn't Palmer rush Halsey back in the other direction instead of "following" her? Also, no showdown between Sali & Jul this time folks. I understand the issue is limited to a certain number of pages but come one! Still, can't wait to see the Absolute record and "Tanaka".--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 09:49, 25 March 2015 (EDT)


:As of this issue, consider me officially sold on DuffyB. Halsey's systematic dismantling of Palmer's arguments was a glorious thing to behold, mostly because of how unexpected it was and how far it went with tearing down the Travissian view of her character. And I'd never have guessed they'd call Palmer out for her flaws so directly. A few issues back I commented that Palmer should have to face the consequences of her actions at some point and I have to give credit where credit is due because that seems to be finally happening now; hopefully this'll serve as a catalyst for some much-needed character growth for her. The presence of ''Infinity'''s sub-vessels was a welcome sight too, and despite 'Nyon's rebellion ultimately amounting for nothing it was somewhat refreshing that there was more going on in this conflict than merely the tired UNSC vs. Covenant setup. And yeah, some of the faces were extremely awkward-looking, though I thought the linework was better overall (barring some exceptions like one obviously Photoshop-filtered-from-a-screenshot DMR). Still, this issue was definitely a winner for me for the satisfying Halsey-Palmer interaction alone. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 13:10, 25 March 2015 (EDT)
:As of this issue, consider me officially sold on DuffyB. Halsey's systematic dismantling of Palmer's arguments was a glorious thing to behold, mostly because of how unexpected it was and how far it went with tearing down the Travissian view of her character. And I'd never have guessed they'd call Palmer out for her flaws so directly. A few issues back I commented that Palmer should have to face the consequences of her actions at some point and I have to give credit where credit is due because that seems to be finally happening now; hopefully this'll serve as a catalyst for some much-needed character growth for her. The presence of ''Infinity'''s sub-vessels was a welcome sight too, and despite 'Nyon's rebellion ultimately amounting for nothing it was somewhat refreshing that there was more going on in this conflict than merely the tired UNSC vs. Covenant setup. And yeah, some of the faces were extremely awkward-looking, though I thought the linework was better overall (barring some exceptions like one obviously Photoshop-filtered-from-a-screenshot DMR). Still, this issue was definitely a winner for me for the satisfying Halsey-Palmer interaction alone. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 13:10, 25 March 2015 (EDT)
::Other than what's probably going to get said, did anyone notice that thruster pack action? It seems to be able to be used like a jetpack at least for a bit. Well, vertical lift. [[User:Erickyboo|Erickyboo]] ([[User talk:Erickyboo|talk]]) 14:35, 25 March 2015 (EDT)
::Other than what's probably going to get said, did anyone notice that thruster pack action? It seems to be able to be used like a jetpack at least for a bit. Well, vertical lift. [[User:Erickyboo|Erickyboo]] ([[User talk:Erickyboo|talk]]) 14:35, 25 March 2015 (EDT)
:Well, that's the end of Sali 'Nyons Covenant faction. I would have liked to see the group in future instalments/other Halo media but alas, it wasn't meant to be. Ah well, the issue was a good one, and like you said Jugus, it was great to see Palmer being put in her place XD [[User:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|SLiD1nG Pr0Xy]] ([[User talk:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|talk]]) 21:24, 26 March 2015 (EDT)  
:Well, that's the end of Sali 'Nyons Covenant faction. I would have liked to see the group in future instalments/other Halo media but alas, it wasn't meant to be. Ah well, the issue was a good one, and like you said Jugus, it was great to see Palmer being put in her place XD [[User:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|SLiD1nG Pr0Xy]] ([[User talk:SLiD1nG Pr0Xy|talk]]) 21:24, 26 March 2015 (EDT)  
::I also liked the ending because it didn't bring the story back to the status quo like all previous arcs have done. A major complaint of mine about ''Escalation'' has been that nothing substantial ever happens for the story or the characters; at the end of every arc we have Lasky and Palmer sitting down for a nice little chat while everything returns back to normal. Here we have a concluding Lasky-Palmer conversation, but there's more going on than that. Hopefully this will end up paying off going forward (e.g. Palmer's failures ''not'' getting shrugged off with a couple of lines) but I have more faith in Boudreau than that. I'm not sure why they decided to put a filler arc about a new character between this and the Absolute Record, though it could be that Tanaka will play a role in ''Hunters in the Dark'' and they want to introduce the character before that. Then again, I also thought the bioweapon arc would tie in to ''Nightfall'' so it's just as possible it'll have nothing to do with the novel. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:39, 27 March 2015 (EDT)
::I also liked the ending because it didn't bring the story back to the status quo like all previous arcs have done. A major complaint of mine about ''Escalation'' has been that nothing substantial ever happens for the story or the characters; at the end of every arc we have Lasky and Palmer sitting down for a nice little chat while everything returns back to normal. Here we have a concluding Lasky-Palmer conversation, but there's more going on than that. Hopefully this will end up paying off going forward (e.g. Palmer's failures ''not'' getting shrugged off with a couple of lines) but I have more faith in Boudreau than that. I'm not sure why they decided to put a filler arc about a new character between this and the Absolute Record, though it could be that Tanaka will play a role in ''Hunters in the Dark'' and they want to introduce the character before that. Then again, I also thought the bioweapon arc would tie in to ''Nightfall'' so it's just as possible it'll have nothing to do with the novel. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:39, 27 March 2015 (EDT)
I'm not sure. The way Duffy put his phrasing in his interview a little over two weeks ago...
I'm not sure. The way Duffy put his phrasing in his interview a little over two weeks ago...


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===Cover===
===Cover===
Is it just me or is there something very Craig Mullins-esque about that cover? Maybe it's the rocket launcher that does it. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 16:07, 18 March 2015 (EDT)
Is it just me or is there something very Craig Mullins-esque about that cover? Maybe it's the rocket launcher that does it. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 16:07, 18 March 2015 (EDT)
:The art style and sense of scale remind me a lot of his work on the ''Marathon'' series. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]]  ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 09:02, 19 March 2015 (EDT)
:The art style and sense of scale remind me a lot of his work on the ''Marathon'' series. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]]  ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 09:02, 19 March 2015 (EDT)
::Yeah, that's what I was thinking of. I thought one of his ''Marathon'' pieces was framed almost exactly the same way as that cover, though looking up his work [http://marathon.bungie.org/temp/cmullins.html?image=trilogy this piece] comes closest, while [http://marathon.bungie.org/temp/cmullins.html?image=crashed this one] has a very similar atmosphere. But there are a lot things that contribute to the overall impression. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 13:13, 19 March 2015 (EDT)
::Yeah, that's what I was thinking of. I thought one of his ''Marathon'' pieces was framed almost exactly the same way as that cover, though looking up his work [http://marathon.bungie.org/temp/cmullins.html?image=trilogy this piece] comes closest, while [http://marathon.bungie.org/temp/cmullins.html?image=crashed this one] has a very similar atmosphere. But there are a lot things that contribute to the overall impression. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 13:13, 19 March 2015 (EDT)
:::Those two are the main pieces that crossed my mind when you brought it up. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]]  ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 13:18, 19 March 2015 (EDT)
:::Those two are the main pieces that crossed my mind when you brought it up. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]]  ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 13:18, 19 March 2015 (EDT)
:I like how the cover more or less happens in the comic proper, only without the rocket launcher. From the cover I also got this eerily calm and serene vibe that's common in Mullins' pieces though the mood of that scene is completely different in the actual comic. I don't think that's a coincidence. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:39, 27 March 2015 (EDT)
:I like how the cover more or less happens in the comic proper, only without the rocket launcher. From the cover I also got this eerily calm and serene vibe that's common in Mullins' pieces though the mood of that scene is completely different in the actual comic. I don't think that's a coincidence. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 02:39, 27 March 2015 (EDT)


==Issue 17==
==Issue 17==
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Since no one has discussed this yet, I thought the issue was pretty solid. Was nice to see two types of Kig-Yar on the same pane.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 10:11, 28 April 2015 (EDT)
Since no one has discussed this yet, I thought the issue was pretty solid. Was nice to see two types of Kig-Yar on the same pane.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 10:11, 28 April 2015 (EDT)


:<nowiki>#</nowiki>17 certainly isn't the series' best issue but Tanaka's story is interesting. It's a shame that the vessels on the cover don't actually appear in the issue, but I'm happy that [[CPV-class heavy destroyer|my favorite Covenant warship class]] is featured prominently. It's also nice to see the ''Halo 2 Anniversary'' ODST armor, which seems to be the most recent in-universe model despite being the first version introduced in the real world. The idea of Covenant extremists glassing planets as recently as 2556 definitely needs to be explored further - in fact, I wouldn't be surprised if that's the nature of "colony worlds [being] unexpectedly attacked" in ''Halo 5''. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our answer is at hand.'''''</span>]] ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 10:43, 28 April 2015 (EDT)
:<nowiki>#</nowiki>17 certainly isn't the series' best issue but Tanaka's story is interesting. It's a shame that the vessels on the cover don't actually appear in the issue, but I'm happy that [[Sinaris-pattern heavy destroyer|my favorite Covenant warship class]] is featured prominently. It's also nice to see the ''Halo 2 Anniversary'' ODST armor, which seems to be the most recent in-universe model despite being the first version introduced in the real world. The idea of Covenant extremists glassing planets as recently as 2556 definitely needs to be explored further - in fact, I wouldn't be surprised if that's the nature of "colony worlds [being] unexpectedly attacked" in ''Halo 5''. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our answer is at hand.'''''</span>]] ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 10:43, 28 April 2015 (EDT)


::I liked the issue too, but the technology that they colonists on Minab (such as the 20th century crane and excavator) kind of bothers me. But if Tanaka is in ''Halo 5'', then this is a good way to introduce the new character. - [[User:NightHammer|NightHammer]] ([[User talk:NightHammer|talk]]) 11:08, 28 April 2015 (EDT)
::I liked the issue too, but the technology that they colonists on Minab (such as the 20th century crane and excavator) kind of bothers me. But if Tanaka is in ''Halo 5'', then this is a good way to introduce the new character. - [[User:NightHammer|NightHammer]] ([[User talk:NightHammer|talk]]) 11:08, 28 April 2015 (EDT)
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:::Yeah that was a bit funny. The shotgun Tanaka had also looked 20th century. Overall the issue was alright and I definitely want to see what happens next in the concluding issue. Like Braidenvl, I was hoping to see those new vessels on the cover but I guess we can't get everything we want. And a lot of new ideas have been explored in this issue and that's good for keeping the series alive. And the two kig-yar subspecies appearing next to each other was interesting. I guess it's 343i's way of differentiating the two to avoid making the kig-yar they came up with look like a recon.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 12:17, 28 April 2015 (EDT)
:::Yeah that was a bit funny. The shotgun Tanaka had also looked 20th century. Overall the issue was alright and I definitely want to see what happens next in the concluding issue. Like Braidenvl, I was hoping to see those new vessels on the cover but I guess we can't get everything we want. And a lot of new ideas have been explored in this issue and that's good for keeping the series alive. And the two kig-yar subspecies appearing next to each other was interesting. I guess it's 343i's way of differentiating the two to avoid making the kig-yar they came up with look like a recon.--'''''[[User:Killamin7i|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamin</span><span style="color:red; font-family: Arial;">7</span><span style="color:black; font-family: Arial;">i</span>]]''''' [[User talk:Killamin7i|<font color="Gray">///</font>]] 12:17, 28 April 2015 (EDT)


::I liked this issue too and while it doesn't take the greater story anywhere it's refreshing to see more grounded stories on occasion amids all the galactic MacGuffin chasing and over-the-top Spartan action. Tanaka is quite likable so far, though I almost feel like her past as a glassing survivor and Army engineer will be more interesting than her future as a <s>Power Ranger</s> Spartan-IV. I'll gladly be proven wrong, though. The 20th century-esque tech (especially the shotgun) bothered me too. It's also kind of funny how little regard is being paid to the Covenant's glassing capabilities after all the fuss that was made about it circa 2011 - those CPVs' glassing fireballs must be thousands of kilometers in diameter. I really liked the way they showed two subtypes of Kig-Yar side by side as I've previously complained about them never doing this despite it being a lot easier in a comic than it is in a game.--[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 13:04, 28 April 2015 (EDT)
::I liked this issue too and while it doesn't take the greater story anywhere it's refreshing to see more grounded stories on occasion amids all the galactic MacGuffin chasing and over-the-top Spartan action. Tanaka is quite likable so far, though I almost feel like her past as a glassing survivor and Army engineer will be more interesting than her future as a <s>Power Ranger</s> Spartan-IV. I'll gladly be proven wrong, though. The 20th century-esque tech (especially the shotgun) bothered me too. It's also kind of funny how little regard is being paid to the Covenant's glassing capabilities after all the fuss that was made about it circa 2011 - those CPVs' glassing fireballs must be thousands of kilometers in diameter. I really liked the way they showed two subtypes of Kig-Yar side by side as I've previously complained about them never doing this despite it being a lot easier in a comic than it is in a game.--[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue">'''Jugus'''</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 13:04, 28 April 2015 (EDT)
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