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| '''''READ THIS!!''''' - This section is for feedback on "The Life of War," my fanfic. I have organized it by user. Please make it a subheading within your section like so: <nowiki> ====Title==== </nowiki>. If you have not made a comment here before, make a heading with your username (<nowiki> ===Username=== </nowiki>) then a sub heading for your comment. Please make sure your spelling and grammar is at least ''decent.''Make sure to sign the post with ''four'' tildes, in order to have the timestamp. [[User:Ghost sangheili|<font color="red">Pryo 'Zarkum</font>]] [[Image:Major-gr1.gif|19px]] <sup>[[User talk:Ghost sangheili|<font color="orange">My COM </font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Ghost sangheili|<font color="green"> My Work </font>]]</sub><sup>[http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Life_of_War <font color="blue">My Story</font>]</sup> 18:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
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| ===Updates:===
| | ''"Compare points to contribs page [[User:RADER-023]]"'' |
| #Due to lack of images, this will soon be included: [[Image:BeamEliteShoot.jpg|thumb|Pryo's first time firing a Beam Rifle, and his reaction]] [[User:Ghost sangheili|<font color="red">Pryo 'Zarkum</font>]] [[Image:Major-gr1.gif|19px]] <sup>[[User talk:Ghost sangheili|<font color="orange">My COM </font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Ghost sangheili|<font color="green"> My Work </font>]]</sub><sup>[http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Life_of_War <font color="blue">My Story</font>]</sup> 18:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
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| #Many people are requesting to have their character included, but I will never retain information that I read once on my board. Instead I would like people to post their characters on this page, with a signature so I know who's it is. Please put it in the appropriate section below.
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| === New Characters === | | :Thanks, I've passed this along to the techs. Oh, and please keep fanon on [[halofanon:|Halo Fanon]], not here. In case you were unaware, this is a talk page. I come here to leave you messages, not to read fanon. -- [[User:Manticore|<span style="color:black">'''Manticore'''</span>]] [[User talk:Manticore|<span style="color:black">(talk)</span>]] 07:34, 29 May 2008 (UTC) |
| Please just make it as a bulleted entry, with one or two sentences about what your character is like.
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| ==== Elites ==== | | == Fanon == |
| *Katar Yamos - He is stubborn,showoff,can be a jerk at sometime but is really a nice guy. He gets/got in a lot of trouble in military schhol. Once you get to know him he is a nice guy. (Could Also be a teacher since is older than the other..if student like near graduating)
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| **I have a spot for this kind of character for the next chapter. Unless I get no other suggestions, expect to see him in Chapter four. [[User:Ghost sangheili|<font color="red">Pryo 'Zarkum</font>]] [[Image:Major-gr2.gif|19px]] <sup>[[User talk:Ghost sangheili|<font color="orange">My COM </font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Ghost sangheili|<font color="green"> My Work </font>]]</sub><sup>[http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Life_of_War <font color="blue">My Story</font>]</sup> 15:09, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
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| *Quilian Killamee-Katars best friend. He is caring to everyone and often appoligises for Katar. He is Katar's right hand man and also gets in trouble. He has a little sister who often sneaks his/others dorm rooms with her friend.[[User:Spec-Opp Spartan|Spec-Opp Spartan]] 02:16, 6 May 2008 (UTC) (both are from me)
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| **I'd rather not add binaries, chances for this character are low. [[User:Ghost sangheili|<font color="red">Pryo 'Zarkum</font>]] [[Image:Major-gr2.gif|19px]] <sup>[[User talk:Ghost sangheili|<font color="orange">My COM </font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Ghost sangheili|<font color="green"> My Work </font>]]</sub><sup>[http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Life_of_War <font color="blue">My Story</font>]</sup> 15:09, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
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| *Ikor 'Arcuum - find out at this link, http://halofanon.wikia.com/index.php?title=Ikor_%27Arcuum [[User:Delta-269|Delta-269]] 22:02, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
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| ** Hes in, look for him around Chapter 6 or 7. [[User:Ghost sangheili|<font color="red">Pryo 'Zarkum</font>]] [[Image:Major-gr2.gif|19px]] <sup>[[User talk:Ghost sangheili|<font color="orange">My COM </font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Ghost sangheili|<font color="green"> My Work </font>]]</sub><sup>[http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Life_of_War <font color="blue">My Story</font>]</sup> 22:17, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
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| **V'tor 'Zornam - Major Elite who's strength lies in close range combat. He's generally serious and hardened from his many battles. Please see my Fanon page (link on my UserWiki). [[User:Holy Swordsman|<font color="Gold">Holy Swordsman</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Holy Swordsman|<font color="Gold">*User Talk</font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Holy Swordsman|<font color="Gold">*Contributions</font>]]</sub> 22:39, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
| | ''"Can you please undelete my talk page. I understand why you did so, I would at least like a chance to save a backup of it onto my talk page, then you can re-delete it."'' |
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| ===Prophet of Sanghelios=== | | :Use the page history much? I didn't delete anything. -- [[User:Manticore|<span style="color:black">'''Manticore'''</span>]] [[User talk:Manticore|<span style="color:black">(talk)</span>]] 16:23, 5 June 2008 (UTC) |
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| If you have the time could you please include my character, Prophet of Sanghelios. His real name is Venos K'ktum and his political rank is 'honorary' Prophet, if you know what I mean. His military rank is Ultra or SpecOps and he's an excellent swordsman and an expert on human weapons. He's hated, or at the least disliked by most Sangheili so if you use him before the Great Scism he shouldn't be very popular.
| | I could help with the grammar on your Fanon page. HyperMan356 |
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| ===Lt. Church=== | | ==Ban== |
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| Anau 'Nadumee- Special Operations Commander of the Covenant. You do not have to make him a big part because I understand that your being flooded with requests. So, just put me anywhere. Thanks. [[User:Lt. Church|Anau Nadum]]
| | ''"How'd you pick up on my request to ban Pizcofriends (or whatever the hell his name is)?"'' |
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| ====Lt. Church's Post==== | | :Huh? You're not the only one who checks recent changes. :) -- [[User:Manticore|<span style="color:black">'''Manticore'''</span>]] [[User talk:Manticore|<span style="color:black">(talk)</span>]] 13:18, 13 June 2008 (UTC) |
| I have read it, nice [[User:Lt. Church|Lt. Church]] 05:38, 1 April 2008 (UTC)Lt. Church
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| === Noga 'Putumee === | | ==Character for your Fannon== |
| ====Feedback, and including Noga 'Putumee in the story====
| | Hey man could you add my character Uzake' Kayshee he is a ship Master and could i please ask of you to make him a friend of Pryo' thanks-Spriggsrules |
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| It looks good so far. When is it set? Is this his initiation into the army?
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| You could include Noga 'Putumee as his mentor or commander or something similar. or if he goes on a mission when he joins up you could include Noga Putumee there. In my opinion the first option is preferable. this is after noga putumee recovered from his wound on the fist Halo so you could include references to that. If you have read halo the flood you should know his personality. you could alter it slightly to be a bit more caring for the troops under his command after his close to death experience.
| | I wish to help you in your quest for fan fiction talk to me at 8pm usa time in this place http://www.chatzy.com/167978594960 |
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| Please use my advice.
| | == UoH Promotion == |
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| --'''[[User:Noga 'Putumee]]''' [[image:zealot3.jpg|15px]] 19:53, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
| | UoH Promotion|Lieutenant, Grade 4|2 July 2008|General [[User:Simon rjh|Simon rjh]] |
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| ====Chapter 2==== | | == template:pw == |
| Chapter 2 looking good!
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| Is this set in the covenant civil war becuase if it is, Noga 'Putumee wil be Noga 'Putum (the ee is for being in the covenant military)
| | ok I will try to complete the template. sorry. -- [[User:PATX|PATX]] |
| | :and that my friend are mistaken at first pagename dose come up as indexphp but it you refresh the page it will be the users name and it will stay the users name. -- [[User:PATX|PATX]] |
| | ::Check my talk page. [[User:PATX]] |
| | :::Check my talk page. [[User:PATX]] |
| | ::::Check my talk page. [[User:PATX]] |
| | == Award== |
| | Fellow Clone |
| | Given on August,10, 2008. By Sprigggsrules |
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| --'''[[User:Noga 'Putumee]]''' [[image:zealot3.jpg|15px]] 18:06, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
| | Ghost Sangheli you recived this award for being one of my best friends and teaching me how to create userboxes. |
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| ====RE: Chapter 2 (Again...)==== | | ==Images== |
| You will be one of the instructors at Iruiru [[Image:Major-gr1.gif|18px]] [[User:Ghost sangheili|Pryo 'Zarkum]] 16:24, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
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| | File:Enforcer1.jpg|Enforcer, front view |
| | File:Enforcer2.jpg|Enforcer, bottom view |
| | File:Enforcer3.jpg|Enforcer, side view |
| | File:Panel The Arbiter.jpg|'''Panel on the level [[The Arbiter (level)]] for the elevator, close up''' |
| | File:Elevator The Arbiter.jpg|'''Elevator on the Arbiter''' |
| | File:Elevator2 The Arbiter.jpg|'''Elevator on the Arbiter''', #2 |
| | File:Elevator The Oracle.jpg|'''The Elevator on the level, The Oracle''' |
| | File:Elevator to Cables The Oracle.jpg|'''The Elevator leading to the cables in The Oracle''' |
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| ====Chapter 2 (Again...)====
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| I like the plot twist and the friendship with Rtas Vadum. It will be a very interesing story by the looks of it.
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| Mind me asking, when am I going to turn up in the plot of things?
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| --'''[[User:Noga 'Putumee]]''' [[image:zealot3.jpg|15px]] 21:30, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
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| ====Noga 'Putumee's Feedback====
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| Wow! It's really cool and I like all the ideas you've put in it! Keep it up!
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| --'''[[User:Noga 'Putumee]]''' [[image:zealot3.jpg|15px]] 17:25, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
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| ===Stigma-231=== | | ImperatorExercitus |
| ==== Intrigue ====
| | [[Help:Rollback|<font color="#100000">Ri</font><font color="#600000">ck</font><font color="#A80000">rol</font><font color="#D00000">ler</font>]][[User:ImperatorExercitus|<font color="#404040">Gen</font><font color="#909090">eral</font><font color="#C0C0C0">ÌṂρεσάḹόґ</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:ImperatorExercitus|<font color="black">My</font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/ImperatorExercitus|<font color="violet">Victories</font>]]File:Cavalier_achievement.gif|28 </sub> 22:53, 23 August 2008 (UTC) |
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| I quite like your story so far! Do you write often? I believe this could be turned into a rather thick storyline, if you have enough patience and such. Tell me when there's more? I'm eager to read more. <br>-[[User:Stigma-231|<font color="black">Umos 'Qikost</font>]] <sup><font color="silver">Sword-wielding Minors and Shining Blue Spiders</font></sup> [[User talk:Stigma-231|<font color="D3D3D3"><sub>Comm</sub></font>]] 02:45, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
| | == AoH Councillors == |
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| ===Zarra 'Yairum===
| | Hai, later today I'm gonna write a short "wanted" ad in the Oracle Newsletter asking for potential AoH Councillors. It will be us who decides who makes the cut, I'm going to mention that. Anything else you want to add to the ad? Thanks, [[Halopedia:Administrators|<span style="color: #000000; font-family: Stencil; font-size: 12pt;">Rec</span>]]<span style="color: #082567; font-family: Stencil; font-size: 12pt;">lai</span>]]<span style="color: #0000B8; font-family: Stencil; font-size: 12pt;">mer</span>]] <span style="color: #0000FF; font-family: Stencil; font-size: 12pt;">simon</span>]] [[User talk:Simon rjh|<span style="color: #FF0000; font-family: Stencil; font-size: 12pt;">r</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Simon_rjh|<span style="color: #008000; font-family: Stencil; font-size: 12pt;">j</span>]]<span class="plainlinks">[http://www.bungie.net/Stats/Halo3/Default.aspx?player=simon%20rjh <span style="color: #000000; font-family: Stencil; font-size: 12pt;">h</span>]</span> 09:54, 3 September 2008 (UTC) |
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| I love it! Great job so far. By the way Zarra's autobiography is up on my wiki user page if you want to see it. -[[User:Zarra 'Yairum]]
| | == The Wrath of the Rich Text Editor == |
| | You can disable it through [[Special:Preferences]]. Click on Editing Tab and mark the checkbox on RichTextEditor.- <b>[[User:Subtank|<font color="gold"><font color="#FF4F00">5</font>əb<font color="#FF4F00">'7</font>aŋk</font>]]<sup>([[User talk:Subtank|<font color="#FF4F00">7alk</font>]])</sup></b> 22:45, 27 June 2009 (UTC) |
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| ====Swords==== | | == Re: Door == |
| I know another way I could help with the story. I know a few basic sword fighting techniques. It was part of a martial arts class and I forgot most of it, (it was a long time ago), but I do remember the nine angles of attack, and some methods of blocking and counter attacking. Its realy basic, but it may be useful. I'll put it up here if you need it. -[[User:Zarra 'Yairum]]
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| ====Including My Character==== | | WUT U WANT? File:Pumpkin2.png|28 [[User:Kougermasters|<span style="color: orange; font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 128%;">'''Kougermasters'''</span>]] [[User talk:Kougermasters|<font color="orangered"><nowiki>(</nowiki>'''Door'''<nowiki>)</nowiki></font>]] [[Special:Contributions/Kougermasters|<font color="orangered"><nowiki>(</nowiki>'''Candy'''<nowiki>)</nowiki></font>]] [[Special:Editcount/Kougermasters|<font color="orangered"><nowiki>(</nowiki>'''Kills'''<nowiki>)</nowiki></font>]] 00:38, October 26, 2009 (UTC) |
| I can't wait to read more! You are a good writer. As for Zarra's skills, she is good at sniping, and she is good at sword fighting, but she never uses a sword until around HaloCE. At the point in time your story takes place she is most likely training to become a medic. I can only speculate on what a medic in the covenant would be like but my guess is that they would have very plain armor, weak shields, and stealth. --[[User:Zarra 'Yairum|Zarra 'Yairum]] 16:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
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| ===Concilor Katar=== | | :You want candy? Here's a nice juicy red apple instead. File:Pumpkin2.png|28 [[User:Kougermasters|<span style="color: orange; font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 128%;">'''Kougermasters'''</span>]] [[User talk:Kougermasters|<font color="orangered"><nowiki>(</nowiki>'''Door'''<nowiki>)</nowiki></font>]] [[Special:Contributions/Kougermasters|<font color="orangered"><nowiki>(</nowiki>'''Candy'''<nowiki>)</nowiki></font>]] [[Special:Editcount/Kougermasters|<font color="orangered"><nowiki>(</nowiki>'''Kills'''<nowiki>)</nowiki></font>]] 01:03, October 26, 2009 (UTC) |
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| You would be in the late part of the Age of Conservation if you were born in 2515. The Age of Reclamation begun with the Battle of Harvest I believe. - Councilor Katar
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| ==Everything Not Including the Story== | | == A couple of questions from the Community Team == |
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| Pretty self explanatory. Same rules as the above section. [[User:Ghost sangheili|Pryo' Zarkum]] 16:44, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
| | Hi, Thanks for all of your work here on Wikia. We are constantly working to improve our site for users, and would love to get some feedback from you. Below are a couple of questions. If you could answer them here, on my [[User talk:Sarah Manley|talk page]] or send me an [mailto:sarah@wikia-inc.com email] with your responses, I would really appreciate it. |
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| Just read mine:
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| http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/User:Halo7
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| ===Fanfiction===
| | #Have you ever used our Help pages? |
| Hi. Fanfiction isn't allowed on Halopedia, I'm afraid. Please use our sister site [http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page Halo Fanon] instead, and just post a link to it. --<b>[[User:Dragonclaws|<font color="#4D56B1">Dragon<font color="#F28500">c</font>laws</font>]]<sup>([[User talk:Dragonclaws|<font color="#4D56B1">talk</font>]])</sup></b> 05:16, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
| | #If so, did you find them useful? |
| | #How would you suggest improving them? |
| | #Have you ever tried to contact Wikia staff for help? |
| | #Did you find the help you needed? |
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| == Characters ==
| | Thank you and happy editing![[User:Sarah Manley|Sarah]]<staff /> ([[User talk:Sarah Manley|talk]] 02:30, November 20, 2009 (UTC) |
| | :Thanks for your response! [[User:Sarah Manley|Sarah]]<staff /> ([[User talk:Sarah Manley|talk]] 21:11, November 23, 2009 (UTC) |
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| Here's the links to my characters. You've already seen one, so I thought I'd post the other as well.
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| * [[w:c:halofanon:Kora 'Morhekee|Kora 'Morhekee]]
| | Keeping it alive. Decade anniversary coming up soon! :3 |
| * [[w:c:halofanon:Zuro Dun 'Xoramee|Zuro Dun 'Xoramee]]
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| --'''[[UserWiki:Specops306|<font color=purple>Specops306]]</font>''', '''''[[User Talk:Specops306|<font color=blue>Kora]]</font> [[Special:Editcount/Specops306|<font color=purple>'Morhek</font>]]''''' 21:53, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
| | Mostly lurkers from your era. Morhek, aka SpecOps306, is still editing around here. Say hi to him! :) — <span style="font-size:14px; font-family:Arial;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span> 06:04, 6 June 2014 (EDT) |
