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 At an elevation of 4,000 feet, the air foil carapace opens and Spartan-062 glides to the surface as their chute opens, only to ditch it a little earlier than planned due to the hostile presence.
-Upon landing, Spartan-062 is immdeiately attacked by two [[ODST]]s, one opening fire with an [[SMG]] and the other lunging at her with a mock [[energy sword]].
+Upon landing, Spartan-062 is immediately attacked by two [[ODST]]s, one opening fire with an [[SMG]] and the other lunging at her with a mock [[energy sword]].
 [[Image:HGN 1.jpg|left|thumb|300px|Maria prepares to throw a frag grenade.]]
 Spartan-062's shields flare and she reacts instantly. Grabbing the wrist of the ODST wielding the "sword", Spartan-062 uses them as a human sheild, delivering a powerful kick to the ODST with the SMG at the same time. The other ODSTs open fire, but are absorbed by Spartan-062's human shield.
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 The sole survivor of the blast, Echo 6, makes a run for it and his quickly gunned down by Maria, but not before initiating the "Bulgoki Gambit".
-Maria runs past his limp body and leaps into a building, designated structure Alpha-2, through an open window, kicking aside the ODST gunner positioned there as she swings inside. An ODST just outside the door thumbs a detonater and the room Maria is in bursts into flame.
+Maria runs past his limp body and leaps into a building, designated structure Alpha-2, through an open window, kicking aside the ODST gunner positioned there as she swings inside. An ODST just outside the door thumbs a detonator and the room Maria is in bursts into flame.
 [[Image:HGN 3.jpg|left|thumb|300px|Flames flicker about Maria's shields.]]
 Maria, unscathed by the flames that are deflected by her shields, follows him in pursuit and into a group of waiting ODSTs who quickly subdue her.
-Back at the Special Warfare Center, Maria and the unamed senior officer exchange salutes and discuss the preformance of the armor, which is to be shipped to MCPO John-117 upon receiving her seal of approval. The senior officer also trys to persuade her into re-enlisting, but she politely turns down the offer.
+Back at the Special Warfare Center, Maria and the unnamed senior officer exchange salutes and discuss the performance of the armor, which is to be shipped to MCPO John-117 upon receiving her seal of approval. The senior officer also tries to persuade her into re-enlisting, but she politely turns down the offer.
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