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This article is in some SERIOUS need of condensing. The edit made in July 2018 added so much unnecessary Detail that the actual main points of the battle are lost due to every single unit ever faced in the campaign is named. If someone could condense this to keep it on point and accurate that would be great. It’s nearly unreadable in this state [[User:Camelboiis|Camelboiis]] ([[User talk:Camelboiis|talk]]) 12:08, May 1, 2021 (EDT) | This article is in some SERIOUS need of condensing. The edit made in July 2018 added so much unnecessary Detail that the actual main points of the battle are lost due to every single unit ever faced in the campaign is named. If someone could condense this to keep it on point and accurate that would be great. It’s nearly unreadable in this state [[User:Camelboiis|Camelboiis]] ([[User talk:Camelboiis|talk]]) 12:08, May 1, 2021 (EDT) | ||
:I gave it a go. There's probably more that could be done, but it's a start. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS;">'''[[User:JackVibe|<span style="color:#000;">Jack</span>]][[User talk:JackVibe|<span style="color:#888;">Vibe</span>]]'''</span> 10:58, October 19, 2021 (EDT) | |||
Definitely an improvement... Nice work --[[User:Camelboiis|Camelboiis]] ([[User talk:Camelboiis|talk]]) 02:16, November 1, 2021 (EDT) | |||