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 ==Background==
-An elder of his tribe, he was respected for his wisdom and courage. Every morning when the sun rises he went to an exact spot. He watched the natural things around him, the wind sweeping through the tall grass, the herds of animals making their way across the sun-drenched plains, and the predators as they stalk the herds. Then he watched as the gods, what can only be the [[Forerunners]] or their machines, building what is speculated to be the [[Ark]].
+An elder of his tribe, he was respected for his wisdom and courage. Every morning when the sun rises he went to an exact spot. He watched the natural things around him, the wind sweeping through the tall grass, the herds of animals making their way across the sun-drenched plains, and the predators as they stalk the herds. Then he watched what he believed were gods, what can only be the [[Forerunners]] or their machines, building what is speculated to be the [[Ark]].
-He doesn't understand the will of the gods, so he paints and draws what he sees every day. The Forerunners might have revealed themselves to him, but before that, he continued to watch and wait.
+He did not understand the will of the gods, so he painted and drew what he saw every day in the hopes that they would reveal themselves to him one day. It can be assumed that they never did.
 In A.D. 2007, his work was noticed by the [[Society of the Ancients]] and displayed as evidence of aliens on ancient [[Earth]].