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 ===Part of the Phase 2 Operator's Monologue===
-whos she
   '''1st Lt Sorenson:''' Oh my God. If the decrypt is right-
-  '''Capt.''' Greene: I know.
+  '''Capt. Greene:''' I know.
   ''' 1st Lt Sorenson:''' We have to /// drop the mission....
   An evac on this scale they need every second. ...Jesus.
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   '''Capt. Greene:''' I'm just saying, the choice isn't as easy as you might think.
   '''Capt. Greene:''' ...If they act, they risk letting the enemy know we have a
-  toehold in their /// C-and-C. If they decide that strategic advantage is too great to risk and don't act, then you know Section Zero will be all over them. Zero's wanted Standish forever.
+  toehold in their /// C-and-C. If they decide that strategic advantage is too
+ great to risk and don't act, then you know Section Zero will be all over them. Zero's wanted
+ Standish forever.
   '''1st Lt Sorenson:''' I...I understand. It's so much easier for everyone
   if we don't tell them. But...wait a second. Don't you have family on Troy?
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   '''1st Lt Sorenson:''' Jesus.
-As shown, Captain Greene was forced to make the strategic deicion and risk not saving her family on the doomed colony.
+As shown, Captain Greene was forced to make the strategic decision and risk not saving her family on the doomed colony.
-The Covenant did suspect that their transmissions were being bugged and included a Covenant A.I. acting like a Trojan Horse to any evesdropper. The Apocalypso and Melissa were infected. Captain Greene was the first that Melissa told and then she decided to head home to check things fully, but before they did, scanners detected a [[Forerunner]] Artifact<ref>http://www.ilovebees.com/outbound/artifact.wav</ref> This is also shown in the [[Phase 3 Memories]] flashbacks.
+The Covenant did suspect that their transmissions were being bugged and included a Covenant A.I. acting like a Trojan Horse to any eavesdropper. The ''Apocalypso'' and Melissa were infected. Captain Greene was the first that Melissa told and then she decided to head home to check things fully, but before they did, scanners detected a [[Forerunner]] Artifact<ref>http://www.ilovebees.com/outbound/artifact.wav</ref> This is also shown in the [[Phase 3 Memories]] flashbacks.
 Even though Greene didn't want anyone tampering with the mysterious cylinder they found adrift in space, the Covenant A.I. tricked one of the crew into tampering with it, triggering a huge explosion that fragmented the Melissa A.I., sending parts back in time.
-The ship managed to limp back to Earth, and when it arrived, [[ONI]] [[Standish]] seized the artifact and hid its existence from his superiors. Another ONI agent, [[Herzog]], suspected that Standish was up to something, and through transmissions from [[Durga]] (another fragment of Melissa that didn't get sent back in time), it is learnedhat Standish killed Captain Greene in an effort to coverup the existence of the artifact.<ref>http://www.ilovebees.com/outbound/standish.wav</ref><ref>http://www.ilovebees.com/outbound/harmony.wav</ref>"Some accident involving a bus. Unluckiest thing in the world."
+The ship managed to limp back to Earth, and when it arrived, [[ONI]] [[Standish]] seized the artifact and hid its existence from his superiors. Another ONI agent, [[Herzog]], suspected that Standish was up to something, and through transmissions from [[Durga]] (another fragment of Melissa that didn't get sent back in time), it is learned that Standish killed Captain Greene in an effort to cover up the existence of the artifact.<ref>http://www.ilovebees.com/outbound/standish.wav</ref><ref>http://www.ilovebees.com/outbound/harmony.wav</ref>"Some accident involving a bus. Unluckiest thing in the world."
 ==References==