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-'''Commander J. G. Ortega''', ([[UNSCMID]] 7631073) was an [[ONI]] field operative and high ranking [[UNSC]] officer. In [[2511]], he was put in charge of the ONI project, to uncover [[Forerunner]] technology on the planet [[Onyx]]. Ortega, then a [[Lieutenant Commander]], requested that ONI increase his funds.<ref>''[[Halo: Ghosts of Onyx]]'', page 125</ref>
+'''Commander J. G. Ortega''' ([[UNSCMID]] 7631073) was an [[ONI]] field operative and high ranking [[UNSC]] officer. In [[2511]], he was put in charge of the ONI project to uncover [[Forerunner]] technology on the planet [[Onyx]]. Ortega, then a [[Lieutenant Commander]], requested that ONI increase his funds.<ref>''[[Halo: Ghosts of Onyx]]'', page 125</ref>
-By [[2517]]; however, Ortega, now a [[Commander]], had nothing to show for his efforts. Not a single viable piece of technology, had been found. Therefore, in [[2525]], funds were diverted from Ortega's project.<ref>''[[Halo: Ghosts of Onyx]]'', page 126</ref>
+By [[2517]], however, Ortega, now a [[Commander]], had nothing to show for his efforts. Not a single viable piece of technology had been found. Therefore, in [[2525]], funds were diverted from Ortega's project.<ref>''[[Halo: Ghosts of Onyx]]'', page 126</ref>
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