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::::Any reason for just completely removing over half the transcript? I've reverted the edit for now, but I'd like a reason for that.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 10:46, 19 October 2015 (EDT) | ::::Any reason for just completely removing over half the transcript? I've reverted the edit for now, but I'd like a reason for that.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 10:46, 19 October 2015 (EDT) | ||
:::::The only changes that I made were | :::::The only changes that I made were | ||
1. Fixed Tanaka's line (she says "So..." rather than "Say...") | :::::1. Fixed Tanaka's line (she says "So..." rather than "Say...") | ||
2. Revised the nature of the Forerunner object to reflect yet-to-be-confirmed ambiguity as to whether it was a ship or a structure | :::::2. Revised the nature of the Forerunner object to reflect yet-to-be-confirmed ambiguity as to whether it was a ship or a structure | ||
3. Cleaned up general grammar and word use regarding the Forerunner object and Fireteam Osiris' descent. | :::::3. Cleaned up general grammar and word use regarding the Forerunner object and Fireteam Osiris' descent. | ||
I did notice while in the edit screen that there was transcript info for gameplay after the cutscene, but I did not (knowingly) remove that. I assumed that it was hidden for spoilers.[[User:Ocean Soul|Ocean Soul]] ([[User talk:Ocean Soul|talk]]) 12:21, 19 October 2015 (EDT) | :::::I did notice while in the edit screen that there was transcript info for gameplay after the cutscene, but I did not (knowingly) remove that. I assumed that it was hidden for spoilers.[[User:Ocean Soul|Ocean Soul]] ([[User talk:Ocean Soul|talk]]) 12:21, 19 October 2015 (EDT) | ||