Talk:Vale Citadel

Sorry for the too detailed section, I'll rewrite and correct this. As of now there is no mention of the role of the shrine in the First Battle of Requiem, and its role in the Second Battle is over-detailed, I will fix all of that with a more direct and compressed writing. Imrane-117 (talk) 11:40, 2 July 2013 (EDT)


 * Why revert to Subtank's last edit? She (rightfully) deleted half the section and changed a few sentences saying my very first version of the article was over detailed and not focused enough on the location itself. She only left a part of the article and asked for someone to better write it. This is what I've done. I know seeing that 800 characters disappeared may seem scary, but my last edit actually has more information. If there's still anything to edit anymore, it may be to add things to my own last edit, but Subtank's one can't stay like that, it completely lacks some parts. Imrane-117 (talk) 10:35, 3 July 2013 (EDT)