Talk:I love bees synopsis

How do you think this should this be cleaned up? --Dragonc laws (talk ) 05:52, 2 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Mucho shorten-o. WAY too long for a synopsis, IMO. BTW, Dragonclaws, you should get on the IRC whenever you're on--we've got a new link that works bettar sorta, and it's easier to work together to clean up an article when you're all chatting live. I'll work on shortening tomorrow, unless someone beats meh to it, 'cause I gotta go to bed... night! -- NOTASTAFF  GPT ( talk )( eating ) 05:57, 2 August 2007 (UTC)


 * I left out a lot of stuff, though. This is the shortened version. Heh. I see your point, though. --Dragonc laws (talk ) 06:00, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
 * It should be broken up into sections to make things look a little more organized.--Darth Scott 04:16, 18 December 2007 (UTC)