User talk:Ghost sangheili

Story
Post stuff pertaining to my story here, be sure to sign your post with four tildes. Use three equal signs on either side of the heading of your post. Pryo&#39; Zarkum 16:44, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Lt. Church's Post
I have read it, nice Lt. Church 05:38, 1 April 2008 (UTC)Lt. Church

Feedback on your story and Including Noga 'Putumee
It looks good so far. When is it set? Is this his initiation into the army?

You could include Noga 'Putumee as his mentor or commander or something similar. or if he goes on a mission when he joins up you could include Noga Putumee there. In my opioin the first option is preferable. this is after noga putumee recovered from his wound on the fist Halo so you could include references to that. If you have read halo the flood you should know his personality. you could alter it slightly to be a bit more caring for the troops under his command after his close to death experience.

Please use my advice.

--User:Noga 'Putumee 19:53, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

Intrigue
I quite like your story so far! Do you write often? I believe this could be turned into a rather thick storyline, if you have enough patience and such. Tell me when there's more? I'm eager to read more. - Umos 'Qikost Sword-wielding Minors and Shining Blue Spiders Comm  02:45, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

The Story
I love it! Great job so far. By the way Zarra's autobiography is up on my wiki user page if you want to see it. -Zarra 'Yairum

A Spartan's feedback
That was a good story and I will continue reading it over and over. Your life is interesting and I learned a lot from this.

Everything Else
Pretty self explanatory. Same rules as the above section. Pryo&#39; Zarkum 16:44, 31 March 2008 (UTC)