Talk:Voi factory workers

What Do You think? This is my first article and I want to know if it works Yap Yap. 9-19-07


 * Hmm... it's a bit short, but that's good--I've made many MUCH shorter articles. They only problem I have with it is the title--United Nations Space Command Citizens? Military Citizens? Just isn't quite workin' for me. Maybe "Human Citizens" would be a better name for the article? -- NOTASTAFF  GPT ( talk )( eating ) 02:08, 20 September 2007 (UTC)