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Johnson wants to clear a bunch of articles that kinda never got improved on through company attrition. I think a lot of them can have some very obvious changes made to them that the appropriate people could certainly get done. So, in a Monitor of Halopedia style, I give you the following:

Fhajad-084

Sources:
 * Halo: Fall of Reach

Possible improvements:
 * Add more information if its available about his time in training
 * General editing/cleanup
 * Perhaps split his biography into two section - 1 about his Spartan history and 1 about his ONI history

Isaac-039

Sources:
 * Halo: First Strike

Possible improvements:
 * Rework/revamp the biography - it's a bit too much rambling and not enough "Encyclopedic" right now
 * General editing/cleanup

Miranda Keyes

Sources:
 * Halo 2
 * Halo 3
 * Halo: Uprising

Possible improvements:
 * Merge the introduction
 * Set to past-tense
 * Re-work/expand Halo 2 section
 * Add Halo 3 information to intro
 * Expand the Halo 3 section
 * General editing/cleanup
 * I hate quotes sections

Sigma Octanus System

Sources:
 * Halo: Fall of Reach

Possible improvements:
 * Expand

UNSC Dawn Under Heaven

Sources:
 * Halo: Fall of Reach

Possible improvements:
 * Give a reference from Fall of Reach to prove this ship actually existed
 * Expansion (if possible)

UNSC Euphrates

Sources:
 * Halo: Fall of Reach

Possible improvements:
 * Give a reference from Fall of Reach to prove this ship actually existed
 * Proof of its operation
 * Expansion (if possible)

UNSC Iroquois

Sources:
 * Halo: Fall of Reach

Possible improvements:
 * General editing
 * Minor factual corrections

Operation: HYPODERMIC

Sources:
 * Halo: Fall of Reach

Possible improvements:
 * Stick an era tag on it
 * Expansion (if possible)

Operation: WHITE GLOVE

Sources:
 * Halo: First Strike

Possible improvements:
 * Expansion (if possible)
 * General cleanup