Halopedia:Monitors of Halopedia/Type-25 Carbine

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 * Status: FA status granted

Support
- I've been over this, it seems alright, well set out, its good for an Featured Article. --Ajax 013 18:05, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

- Looks good. --Dragonc laws (talk ) 18:24, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

- The layout of the article wasn't that good, and there were some minor fact and spelling errors. Though I changed them, and now fully support its Feature Articleness. General  Tony  Talk 11/02/2007

- The perfect Featured Article exemplifying what a weapons article should look like. --forgottenlord 21:58, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

Disapprove
- Waaay too short. In fact, I find it difficult that any weapon would attain FA status. Cheers, RelentlessRecusant  'o the Halopedia Team http://images.wikia.com/rainbowsix/images/7/73/GDI2.jpg TALK • MESSAGE 20:00, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
 * What is the desirable length? It takes up two pages on highest resolution. --Dragonc laws (talk ) 20:13, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
 * At least the length of Mongoose. =] Cheers, RelentlessRecusant  'o the Halopedia Team http://images.wikia.com/rainbowsix/images/7/73/GDI2.jpg TALK • MESSAGE 21:19, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments
Seems like a pretty good article that could probably be spruced up a bit into the FA realm. --Dragonc laws (talk ) 09:33, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Meh, alright; possibly a worthy venture. Regards, RelentlessRecusant  'o the Halopedia Team http://images.wikia.com/rainbowsix/images/7/73/GDI2.jpg TALK • MESSAGE 15:22, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * This is now my project, i'll go do some work on it.
 * There are a few issues I have with this article:
 * The article itself is too short, much of its space taken up by "fluff" (i.e. original research and not verifiable info).
 * A number of images do not contain the appropriate sourcing/licensing information.
 * The Dual Wielding section is rife with opinion as opposed to factual information.
 * The intro could stand to be expanded; the purpose of an intro is to summarize all major points in the event that a reader does not choose to read the main body or an article.
 * &mdash;Graestan ( Talk ) 17:22, 3 November 2007 (UTC)
 * I agree with all these points. --Imperialles 18:00, 3 November 2007 (UTC)