Halopedia:Monitors of Halopedia/Battle of Voi

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 * Status: POSSIBLE NOMINEE

Support
-- Manticore   Talk 22:49, 31 October 2007 (UTC)

It's good enough for a Featured Article! General  Tony  Talk 11/02/2007


 * - E D [[Image:ArmyROTC.gif|15px]] 02:31, 19 December 2007 (UTC)

Things to do

 * 5 broken links
 * Introduction should be above all sections rather than starting off the section The Battle

Comments

 * We've had nothing on here for a while so i'd thought i'd get busy and and something i've done. --Ajax 013 20:47, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm a big fan of the "Background", "Battle", "Aftermath" format. --forgottenlord 22:31, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Some comments/suggestions:
 * Move the introduction to the top, and shorten it some. Remove the header.
 * The introduction cites sources, yet the rest of the article does not. Working as intended? Shouldn't the rest of the article be sourced as well?
 * The article is a bit image-heavy, evidenced by the fact that the left-aligned images mess up the header formatting, at least on higher resolutions.
 * Several instances of excessively capitalized headers: "The First Objective" should be "The first objective" etc.
 * This may be a tough one to fix, but the article is written almost completely from the point of view of the Human forces.
 * --Imperialles 17:26, 3 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Good points. I'll see about adding a Covenant perspective on the battle; there wouldn't be much, but I'll try. Furthermore, I'll see about referencing. Cheers, RelentlessRecusant  'o the Halopedia Team http://images.wikia.com/rainbowsix/images/7/73/GDI2.jpg TALK • MESSAGE 17:30, 3 November 2007 (UTC)